Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=Detlef;28439721]my tablet is A5 It's big enough i guess but still gonna upgrade when I get the money[/QUOTE] I think mine is A6. Yeah it is. [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Tablet.JPG[/img_thumb]

I know I have always been randomly dumping crappy anime drawings. I feel like changing my ways. I have finally come to the realization that you guys like REAL art. So I'm taking my time to learn how the human body should really work. There is always a starting point to learning the body, and that is the anatomy. So far I'm at this stage. It's very simple but I'll get better. [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/3734/tutowork.jpg[/img]

Character reference. [img]http://i.imgur.com/AOKaY.jpg[/img]

progress on the design for my portfolio i changed the blues and the header now has a subtle gradient and there's more space between the different elements [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13290261/portfolioprogress.png[/img_thumb]

[QUOTE=Codesta;28441813]I know I have always been randomly dumping crappy anime drawings. I feel like changing my ways. I have finally come to the realization that you guys like REAL art. So I'm taking my time to learn how the human body should really work. There is always a starting point to learning the body, and that is the anatomy. So far I'm at this stage. It's very simple but I'll get better. [img_thumb]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/3734/tutowork.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Lol anime anatomy. Learn it the proper way

[QUOTE=Detlef;28441970]Lol anime anatomy. Learn it the proper way[/QUOTE] But I'm getting it from here. :( [url]http://idrawgirls.com/[/url]

How to draw manga, portrait, figures [editline]5th March 2011[/editline] That aint the site to go

It's funny because all the pictures in the banner look pretty realistic anatomy wise.

[QUOTE=Detlef;28442322]How to draw manga, portrait, figures [editline]5th March 2011[/editline] That aint the site to go[/QUOTE] Have you even looked at the site. All the pictures there look pretty damn accurate. Some tutorials you have to pay for. They even look like they're worth it.

It's funny because Codesta's anatomy study looks like anime

[QUOTE=Codesta;28442777]Have you even looked at the site. All the pictures there look pretty damn accurate. Some tutorials you have to pay for. They even look like they're worth it.[/QUOTE] If they're accurate then they're sure as hell using better tutorials than the ones you're using.

*sigh* I worked on another form. This any better for you two? Jesus... [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4189/isthisbetter.jpg[/img]

Eh, still looks anime-ish, but that one looks a lot better. I won't complain.

Looks like someone can't take critique, then I won't give any

Deeper shadows, yay or nay? [IMG]http://gyazo.com/7ac85c56e3e72411d94c6423f1b111f8.png[/IMG]

why haven't you started on the mouth area yet

[QUOTE=Detlef;28444132]why haven't you started on the mouth area yet[/QUOTE] Laziness honestly :smith: I'll start on it now I suppose.

You should have done it from the start [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] beginning with details before you have blotched everything in is a bad technique [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] Yes I'm looking at you chesty

Turns me on.

[QUOTE=Codesta;28442150]But I'm getting it from here. :( [url]http://idrawgirls.com/[/url][/QUOTE] Hmm.. idrawgirls got some good tutorials, but they are very limited. Try expanding your horizon, look up some hogarth and loomis stuff. Think that will suit you right if you're trying to learn proper anatomy.

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28444535]Turns me on.[/QUOTE] I am serious!

Same.

suck my dick!

[QUOTE=Detlef;28444378]You should have done it from the start [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] beginning with details before you have blotched everything in is a bad technique [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] Yes I'm looking at you chesty[/QUOTE] And now they're blotched, with a basic color, that will more than likely, change, but done none the less: [IMG]http://gyazo.com/a6bee669e7cfb7f9b6aeb32851ecfb6b.png[/IMG]

why would you choose a color you aren't gonna keep

That's not the point of basecolors

[QUOTE=Dalto11;28445010]And now they're blotched, with a basic color, that will more than likely, change, but done none the less: [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/a6bee669e7cfb7f9b6aeb32851ecfb6b.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] That's not how you use basecolours. The colours differ according to the lighting, just then you touch it up to be a lot more precise afterwards

[QUOTE=Viper202;28442723]It's funny because all the pictures in the banner look pretty realistic anatomy wise.[/QUOTE] That's because anime uses realistic anatomy everywhere but on the face. It's it's selling point. Tits and ass. If it couldn't make a body attractive and realistic it wouldn't sell. At least not enough to live. [QUOTE=Codesta;28443222]*sigh* I worked on another form. This any better for you two? Jesus... [img_thumb]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4189/isthisbetter.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Stop drawing pointy spear anime heads that are held up by sticks. ( > You're not studying anatomy if you're not drawing realistic creatures.

[QUOTE=Detlef;28445072]why would you choose a color you aren't gonna keep[/QUOTE] Good point. So should I get a darker pink for the tongue and nose? And do basic lighting coloration? Then go for the detail?

Study some photos, or else you're just guessing