Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=Ferosso;28458876]oh... i thought so :frown:[/QUOTE] no its not the price you can have it for free

[QUOTE=SeverePapercut;28457419][img_thumb]http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h450/UnholyMephistopheles/SCAN0035.jpg?t=1299429048[/img_thumb] i dont like the way this turned out[/QUOTE] I'll take 2!

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28458901]I'll take 2![/QUOTE] step 1 save to computer step 2 put on flash drive step 3 find color printer step 4 print wow wasn't that FUN

Only colour printer is at school and people wound't be too happy if I flashed the colour printer.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28458958]Only colour printer is at school and people wound't be too happy if I flashed the colour printer.[/QUOTE] library then i guess

they mad at me cause they have to put up with my shitty watercolour.

Heres a logo design I done, stands for Kick Ass Klothing [IMG]http://i.cubeupload.com/VVHoO2.png[/IMG] C&C? Based on a surfing type brand and tried to have a 'wave' type logo

gradient on the last one is far better than the other two, and being blue it's more suited to a surf brand. maybe make the type blue also, the purple seems kind of irrelevant and off-putting.

Cheers, when I presented it the majority went for the end one

Your company's name is phonetically the same as English slang for "shit". Bad move.

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[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28459786]Your company's name is phonetically the same as English slang for "shit". Bad move.[/QUOTE] Its why I chose it, my Tutor was fine with it

It's also the exact word for 'shit' in Afrikaans. :)

and "kakka" means "poop" in finnish.

[QUOTE=xianlee;28459432]Heres a logo design I done, stands for Kick Ass Klothing [img_thumb]http://i.cubeupload.com/VVHoO2.png[/img_thumb] C&C? Based on a surfing type brand and tried to have a 'wave' type logo[/QUOTE] look at that kak. It's one huge kak. That's the largest kak I've ever seen. I don't quite understand why that circle is there, looks better without it if you ask me. Also you should slightly tone down that gradient fade so that it still fades but not as much. [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Courage-01.jpg[/img][img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Courage-02.jpg[/img] Eh. I'm trying to find some good way to illustrate courage in a simple way without being the typical "I'm so big and contrasty" courage. Courage is so much more. I'm also addicted to the Franklin Gothic font family. Criticism welcomed.

Im attempting to do a perspective drawing, Could someone point out if iam doing something wrong? thumbed for large pic. [img_thumb]http://oi52.tinypic.com/v4paad.jpg[/img_thumb]

Been lurking around these forums for too long, figure I'll try to become active in an area I enjoy. [URL=http://img707.imageshack.us/i/background1in.png/][IMG]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4140/background1in.th.png[/IMG][/URL] Never been a great artist, always really wanted to be one though. Threw this together in Photoshop a few minutes ago because I wanted to see if I could make my own desktop background. Really rough in some areas, was mostly just experimenting with different filters and styles. Would appreciate C&C

Done with this now: [img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/065/3/b/the_quarterback_by_chestymcgee-d3b2ecr.jpg[/img] Pleased that it only took me a couple of days, not months. I need to start working like this more often.

You really nailed the clothing. But your highligts looks grey and covers really large flat areas making it look plasticy and flat. You did it just by reference? Because I have to say that's well done with your technique.

[img]http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/189354_1863207390060_1537234679_32072055_6479926_n.jpg[/img] Lineart was done with a grid (+ some extra smaller grids for areas where I struggled). [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] Oops I forgot to paint in the 30yd marker. Oh well.

[QUOTE=AlphaGunman;28460368]and "kakka" means "poop" in finnish.[/QUOTE] Not to mention 'kaka' in Estonian

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28463322][img_thumb]http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/189354_1863207390060_1537234679_32072055_6479926_n.jpg[/img_thumb] Lineart was done with a grid (+ some extra smaller grids for areas where I struggled). [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] Oops I forgot to paint in the 30yd marker. Oh well.[/QUOTE] If this was a photostudy you should have cared for the background [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] The background you drew made no sense [editline]6th March 2011[/editline] you seem to draw concrete like it was fabric

gradients on logos is generally a bad idea

jesus guys kaka means poop in A LOT of languages, enough about it also dgg the left one hurts my eyes

[QUOTE=DOG-GY;28463743]gradients on logos is generally a bad idea[/QUOTE] Depends on how strong it is. And as long as you have a version without gradient as well then it won't cause a problem. [QUOTE=lexus04;28464171]jesus guys kaka means poop in A LOT of languages, enough about it also dgg the left one hurts my eyes[/QUOTE] Yeah, I guess they create too little contrast, and since orange is such a strong dominant colour it just doesn't work well. (Tried to make the wrong kind of colour dominant in order to get out the whole courage part of it since creativity and doing things differently is also courage. But of course, it needs to look good. I kinda like it, but it doesn't work, no.)

So basically I was thinking of making a comic series where the main character is the last man on Earth, but there are still thousands of women all over the world, and he has to go around from settlement to settlement impregnating a bunch of them so that the human race can carry on, whilst under the constant threat from hippies, religious groups and terrorist organisations that want to either kill the guy or capture him so that they basically control the future of the world. And as well as having to salvage for supplies, he also has to find things from pharmacies and stuff in case any of the girls he fucks are infected with anything. What do you guys think?

[QUOTE=evlbzltyr;28464972]So basically I was thinking of making a comic series where the main character is the last man on Earth, but there are still thousands of women all over the world, and he has to go around from settlement to settlement impregnating a bunch of them so that the human race can carry on, whilst under the constant threat from hippies, religious groups and terrorist organisations that want to either kill the guy or capture him so that they basically control the future of the world. And as well as having to salvage for supplies, he also has to find things from pharmacies and stuff in case any of the girls he fucks are infected with anything. What do you guys think?[/QUOTE] and at the end a dramatic twist: he was firing blanks the whole time

[QUOTE=SeverePapercut;28465081]and at the end a dramatic twist: he was firing blanks the whole time[/QUOTE] Oh snap :v: But yeah, what does everyone think?

i think you sound really creepy.

sounds like a porno