Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

I am gay for Rusty too so it's A OK

ewwwww gayness..... [editline]9th March 2011[/editline] Well I'm gonna do some more male anatomy and muscle definition.

Remember the bum [editline]9th March 2011[/editline] very important part

Also don't skip the moobs tutorial.

[QUOTE=TehKaboose;28508002]This very thread inspired me to take out my dusty old wacom tablet that I've never really used and try to actually draw something. It's my first digital "painting" ever. [img_thumb]http://i54.tinypic.com/2hrg75j.jpg[/img_thumb] Took me like 4 god damn hours. I had to get used to using a tablet and using photoshop and everything. Most of the time I just had now idea what I was really doing or supposed to do. Though, I'm pretty pleased with it.[/QUOTE] Texture of the skin is really odd. The eyelashes aren't really realistic. They're too thick at the end, too thick near the tear duct and not numerous enough at the opposite side. Eyelashes stick together at the ends too. You should paint some basecolour for the eyebrows and then add progressively lighter tones on smaller brushes, rather than painting every single individual hair (and the hair of the eyelashes isn't casting any real shadow; it's too bright underneath).

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28510666]Texture of the skin is really odd. The eyelashes aren't really realistic. They're too thick at the end, too thick near the tear duct and not numerous enough at the opposite side. Eyelashes stick together at the ends too. You should paint some basecolour for the eyebrows and then add progressively lighter tones on smaller brushes, rather than painting every single individual hair (and the hair of the eyelashes isn't casting any real shadow; it's too bright underneath).[/QUOTE] The "texture" is a product of my shitty shading with a too small brush. And I guess you're right, I didn´t really give much thought or effort to the eyelashes, I think I'll redo them and add some kind of shadows/reflections to the eye from the lashes. I should've probably practiced using a digital brush to see how they worked before I try to paint something, but whatever, I'll learn as I go :v:

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28508515]poster for detlefs zombie comic [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/zwaffev2small%20-%20v2.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] You REALLY want to get in her pants now don't you?

[b][i]S.T.A.L.K.E.R: Shadow of Rusty[/b][/i]

Guys chill, It's not that creepy. For example I really want to touch dgg's beard.

[QUOTE=Elements;28508461]Working on a poster for Oceans Twelve [img_thumb]http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq13/Element_Spirits/OceansTwelve.png[/img_thumb] Curious if anybody can see the roman numerals X (negative space of the two E's) and the two I's on the outside. Should I move the tagline to make the X clearer? Any other critiques?[/QUOTE] I like the less is more minimalistic motif, but it's a bit unfocused and all over the place. The split in Oceans Twelve is too far apart

Showed some of my art to my best friend and pretended it wasn't my work. I asked him what he thought and he said it was all stupid and didnt make sense :frown:

Wounder. I thought that was gonna be a happy story. :smith:

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28514152]Showed some of my art to my best friend and pretended it wasn't my work. I asked him what he thought and he said it was all stupid and didnt make sense :frown:[/QUOTE] Post it

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28514152]Showed some of my art to my best friend and pretended it wasn't my work. I asked him what he thought and he said it was all stupid and didnt make sense :frown:[/QUOTE] True friends can be counted on to tell the truth. And be a dick.

Happened to me, she said it was shit :v:

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28507911]Your wires vary in thickness too mcuh when they go around, there are lot of continudity errors around that area as well. When before it had somewhere going then when you added the update you ruined the whole thing thanks to bad knowledge of anatomy. Use reference images when you are behind a computer. To answer your question on the first image then there goes pectoralis major, which is a p.important muscle plastical anatomy wise. [img_thumb]http://www.t-nation.com/img/photos/2009/09-209-training/04.jpg[/img_thumb] that peg thingy. Also your image looks very flat, that is an issue of perspective. If you encounter such problem, redefine the planes of land into basic shapes and align them with perspective. Right now it's so skewed it's not even funny. [editline]9th March 2011[/editline] Buy yourself an anatomy book, it's quite an useful resource. I can draw anuses all day erry day thanks to that.[/QUOTE] [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1157653/drawing2.png[/media] improvement? (in terms of perspective)

[QUOTE=Juniez;28514431][media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1157653/drawing2.png[/media] improvement? (in terms of perspective)[/QUOTE] These all looked a bit odd to me [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2848674/persp.png[/media]

phallus

[QUOTE=Username11;28514203]Post it[/QUOTE] it was that "BORING!" piece I posted on page 47. That and a couple of sketches.

[QUOTE=Username11;28514490]These all looked a bit odd to me [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2848674/persp.png[/media][/QUOTE] yeah I didn't really put anything into that because I need to learn anatomy first ! you should assume that it is a phallus

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28514609]it was that "BORING!" piece I posted on page 47. That and a couple of sketches.[/QUOTE] It looks pretty cool

[QUOTE=Juniez;28514795]yeah I didn't really put anything into that because I need to learn anatomy first ! you should assume that it is a phallus[/QUOTE] I thought it was his butt plug... hurr... On a serious note your perspective with the landscape seems pretty good. Not sure with the tubes/pipes as to me it seems quite hard to judge how far away he is from the cliff.

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28514609]it was that "BORING!" piece I posted on page 47. That and a couple of sketches.[/QUOTE] I thought the boring thing looked pretty neat, but I can definitely see how someone wouldn't like it. Guess it's just about the preferred art style.

[QUOTE=Elements;28508461]Working on a poster for Oceans Twelve [img_thumb]http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq13/Element_Spirits/OceansTwelve.png[/img_thumb] Curious if anybody can see the roman numerals X (negative space of the two E's) and the two I's on the outside. Should I move the tagline to make the X clearer? Any other critiques?[/QUOTE] Were you going for a movie ticket look? Because with those curved edges it really looks like a simplistic movie ticket.

[QUOTE=dead60;28514957]I thought it was his butt plug... hurr... On a serious note your perspective with the landscape seems pretty good. Not sure with the tubes/pipes as to me it seems quite hard to judge how far away he is from the cliff.[/QUOTE] it's supposed to be far away so kind of like this I guess? [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1157653/drawing2eddit.png[/media]

[QUOTE=Juniez;28515525]it's supposed to be far away so kind of like this I guess? [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1157653/drawing2eddit.png[/media][/QUOTE] A lot better

way too far away though [editline]9th March 2011[/editline] how can you disagree it's way too far off, and doesn't make sense. The arms collapse to be nothing, yet the dude is huge. He doesn't fall in perspective at all.

I agree with DOG-GY, unless the arms aren't really arms. They look more like cables. I like the concept, though. The landscape parts of it are really nice.

[QUOTE=-GTFMiika-;28516604]I agree with DOG-GY, unless the arms aren't really arms. They look more like cables. I like the concept, though. The landscape parts of it are really nice.[/QUOTE] They are cables...

In that case, I think it's fine.