Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

bottom one [editline]10th March 2011[/editline] *i have a small screen. the 3rd/last one

[QUOTE=Detlef;28531456]one to the right[/QUOTE] Thought so too, although the red kinda annoys me I also can't tone it down very much before it gets to the point the middle on is at, which will also make the orange in MOT look much worse. Took the colours from the first try at this. That one: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/MOTSmall.png[/img_thumb]

are you ever going to print it or is it purely digital?

[QUOTE=Autumn;28531548]are you ever going to print it or is it purely digital?[/QUOTE] All in all purely digital but it is one of many tasks for one of the schools I'm applying to so it has to be printed out and sent along with the other tasks to try and get in. It'll be interesting to see how that turns out when there are as always so few differences between the monitor and printer that needs to be in place to totally fuck up the look of these kind of things.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28524416]No one knows my name. Especially not sean.[/QUOTE] Sean? What?

Drew a load of circles behind my boring thing. woo hoo. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/hZ2YS.jpg[/IMG] I also drew something about whales because I like whales and wanted to draw something about whales. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/bjRWy.png[/IMG] [editline]10th March 2011[/editline] oh shit the circles in the whales picture and the boring one are the same

i love you.

I'm likin the circles.

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28531779]Drew a load of circles behind my boring thing. woo hoo. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/hZ2YS.jpg[/img_thumb] I also drew something about whales because I like whales and wanted to draw something about whales. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/bjRWy.png[/img_thumb] [editline]10th March 2011[/editline] oh shit the circles in the whales picture and the boring one are the same[/QUOTE] Those circles really made it pop out a lot more.

Thank you for the positive feedback. Love you too Autumn.

been drawing flesh pepol for 2 days now [img]http://gyazo.com/d32447b9cb95a9ad051e82897f5566d7.png[/img] its pretty much first time usin a anatomy tutorial actually i wouldnt call Posemaniacs.com a tutoriall but more a training site btu whatever ill continue drawing poses till next week before i start drawing something of my own. also thanks Detlef for the site, it's awesome

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;28529102]Upgraded to a full on man beard.[/QUOTE] I must see this. Wanna grab a beer Saturday or Friday?

Working on a shitty poem with an unknown title [release]The zombie on the street, Is walking on his dead feet, Waiting for another brain to eat, He smells human stenches, The zombie then trenches, He sees a lonely girl, sitting on the nearby benches. The zombie then slumps, To a girl who looks like she’s down in the dumps, When she sees the zombie, she jumps. The zombie asks what is wrong The girl says she never had a friend all lifelong The zombie then ??? (What should go here other than "The zombie then looked under her skirt started tearing off her thong")[/release] I was going to make it so the zombie has sex with the girl, but I need it for school

tearing off her dong [editline]11th March 2011[/editline] v:v:v

[QUOTE=Xephio;28533334]been drawing flesh pepol for 2 days now [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/d32447b9cb95a9ad051e82897f5566d7.png[/img_thumb] its pretty much first time usin a anatomy tutorial actually i wouldnt call Posemaniacs.com a tutoriall but more a training site btu whatever ill continue drawing poses till next week before i start drawing something of my own. also thanks Detlef for the site, it's awesome[/QUOTE] You have [B]serious[/B] issues with proportion.

[QUOTE=Xephio;28533334]been drawing flesh pepol for 2 days now [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/d32447b9cb95a9ad051e82897f5566d7.png[/img_thumb] its pretty much first time usin a anatomy tutorial actually i wouldnt call Posemaniacs.com a tutoriall but more a training site btu whatever ill continue drawing poses till next week before i start drawing something of my own. also thanks Detlef for the site, it's awesome[/QUOTE] for some reason it looks like their body is really long and then their legs are really short like a lizard or something [editline]11th March 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=ROFLBURGER;28538817]Working on a shitty poem with an unknown title [release]The zombie on the street, Is walking on his dead feet, Waiting for another brain to eat, He smells human stenches, The zombie then trenches, He sees a lonely girl, sitting on the nearby benches. The zombie then slumps, To a girl who looks like she’s down in the dumps, When she sees the zombie, she jumps. The zombie asks what is wrong The girl says she never had a friend all lifelong The zombie then ??? (What should go here other than "The zombie then looked under her skirt started tearing off her thong")[/release] I was going to make it so the zombie has sex with the girl, but I need it for school[/QUOTE] something seems wrong but i dunno poems so i don't know what's wrong its like AAA BBB CCC DDD GGG but it might be okay but i dunno

[QUOTE=onox37;28536726]I must see this. Wanna grab a beer Saturday or Friday?[/QUOTE] You don't drink :v:

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;28539137]You don't drink :v:[/QUOTE]

Touché

Hey, one of yous, tell me how much I fucked up perspective and how I can improve it. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/Perspective.png[/media] Free shit to criticize the fuck out of, right here!

I don't see much wrong but this: [IMG]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/694/fixthisniggap.png[/IMG] Makes me think the corner is part of the table

its p good. However your lines r kinda fucked. Like around the bottom of the page, the upper half of table has a much thicker line than the bottom line. I would be p impressed if you made is so the lines get thicker to smaller the further away they get. Trust me, once you start doing that, you will never have to shade to create depth ever again. Nothing else I can really say except the remote is a bad way to fill that space. Oh and if those grey lines are your perspective lines, the far right of the table needs to go inward more. I hope you can understand what I wrote as way too lazy to dl the picture and circle shit.

It's a 2point perspective and you're only using one point.

[QUOTE=Xephio;28533334]been drawing flesh pepol for 2 days now [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/d32447b9cb95a9ad051e82897f5566d7.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Numbering 1-6 from top left to bottom right: 2. body is way too long, especially the abs area. legs and arms look tiny in comparison. shape of the right bicep/tricep looks messed up 3. really long body again, especially the abs. left (his left) leg is shorter than the right 5. legs are too short. body looks a bit long too. just as a start, those are the immediate things I noticed [editline]11th March 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=gforce;28531706]Sean? What?[/QUOTE] some douche

[QUOTE=Detlef;28530314]About 3 hours [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/yhstn.png[/img_thumb] For you Rusty<3[/QUOTE] the best

[QUOTE=Xephio;28533334]been drawing flesh pepol for 2 days now [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/d32447b9cb95a9ad051e82897f5566d7.png[/img_thumb] its pretty much first time usin a anatomy tutorial actually i wouldnt call Posemaniacs.com a tutoriall but more a training site btu whatever ill continue drawing poses till next week before i start drawing something of my own. also thanks Detlef for the site, it's awesome[/QUOTE] I also used Posemaniacs in the beginning but then realized how much it fucking sucks when I found [url]http://lovecastle.org/gestures/index.php[/url] Quit gimping yourself.

[QUOTE=Re-y-tard;28542582]I also used Posemaniacs in the beginning but then realized how much it fucking sucks when I found [url]http://lovecastle.org/gestures/index.php[/url] [/QUOTE] Need some reasons why posemaniacs is worse, because to be honest i don't really like your suggestion

Drawing real things > drawing 3D objects that have been created to look perfect. You'll learn way faster the forms and what the body is capable of drawing from real life. Or photos.

[QUOTE=Xephio;28543954]Need some reasons why posemaniacs is worse, because to be honest i don't really like your suggestion[/QUOTE] they stand very unrealisticly

Finished up a set of icons for a Gmod gamemode. [img]http://i.imgur.com/fOE7T.png[/img]