Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>

[kevlar jens]

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;27608222]Yeah it's clone crew.

Was it really that hard? Damn, I need to work on it then.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, readability is pretty bad. It was not until I focused really hard on the purple one I managed to make out Crew and then Clone.
I like the style you are going for though, handwritten logos really do have a lot of charm.

I'm guessing it's for a band, or an artist, so being able to quickly pick up what it says is not as important as lets say it were to be on the side of a van.
But still try giving the letters some more space perhaps and refining them better. In the first image I thought the C and L was a D.

[Barnhouse]

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;27608344]Yeah, readability is pretty bad. It was not until I focused really hard on the purple one I managed to make out Crew and then Clone.
I like the style you are going for though, handwritten logos really do have a lot of charm.

I'm guessing it's for a band, or an artist, so being able to quickly pick up what it says is not as important as lets say it were to be on the side of a van.
But still try giving the letters some more space perhaps and refining them better. In the first image I thought the C and L was a D.[/QUOTE]

Yeah I need to space it all out a bit. It's hard because you have to kind of rush it to get the flow right, but then that ends up squishing the letters.
And yeah the logo is for an artist... of sorts.

[DarkSpirit05er]

I realized it said Clone Crew as soon as I looked at it.

[ChestyMcGee]

Tbh if it's a logo for a band or artist, chances are people will know the name [i]before[/i] they see the logo. If I listen to a song on the radio or on Youtube, I'm not gonna see the band's logo anywhere.

[Detlef]

For some reason, I'm reading every post in this thread in a heavy british accent.

[editline]23rd January 2011[/editline]

Or just the ones posted on this page.

[Andokool12]

Quick thing I did last night before going to bed.

Sort of had more meaning to me, but for everyone else let's just call it "Zombie Love". Ba dum tss.

[media]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll239/Andokool12/zombieheart.jpg[/media]

Thoughts? Actually, I don't really care for C&C as this isn't supposed to be anything, but if you think there's an issue I should address in my style, go ahead. I'm expecting something like make them darker.

[red_pharoah]

[QUOTE=Andokool12;27611811] I'm expecting something like make them darker.[/QUOTE]

I would never say that.

Your lines are too faint.

[Hullu V3]

Did recolor of Douglas Fairbanks Jr, because I was bored as hell.
Came out pretty nice.

[media]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/023/a/7/douglas_fairbanks_jr__by_tompelo-d37vjed.png[/media]

[ChestyMcGee]

There's loads of bits where the grey is still showing very overtly.

The colours seem unnatural and uncanny.

[lexus04]

Funny colors there

[Barnhouse]

update

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/P1jUm.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NL7BO.png[/IMG]

Paint pens are simply awesome.

[ChestyMcGee]

Hand study:

[img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6139/handstudies.jpg[/img]

Shitty rifle design inspired by numerous sources, will be translated into digital soon:

[img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8961/rifledesign.jpg[/img]

Excuse the horrible photos.

[Occlusion2018]

Your lighting is superb

[JoeyZ]

A fitting post considering your name.

[jenny7332]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;27615272]Hand study:

[img_thumb]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6139/handstudies.jpg[/img_thumb]

Shitty rifle design inspired by numerous sources, will be translated into digital soon:

[img_thumb]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8961/rifledesign.jpg[/img_thumb]

Excuse the horrible photos.[/QUOTE]

The palm of the top hand looks a bit too short compared to the length of the fingers.

For the second hand, I think you went a bit overboard in defining the shadows,
you've aged the hand by overdefining the creases (I'm guessing this isn't the hand of
an 70 year old man), though the lighing looks dynamic, it takes away from the fleshy
texture of a hand. The finger positions look good, the thumb's looks a bit more
unnatural, it looks dislocated because of the super defined joint to the palm.

The rifle looks great, very slick and well lined though that triggerguard and handle doesn't
fit the blockiness of the rest of the gun.

[ChestyMcGee]

[QUOTE=jenny7332;27617717](I'm guessing this isn't the hand of
an 70 year old man)[/QUOTE]

Well... I think it might have been. :v:

Thanks for the rest of the criticism - very useful and polite, which is always nice. I'll see what I can redesign on the rifle when I start drawing it in CS5. :smile:

[editline]24th January 2011[/editline]

I need to move the front sights back. God only knows why I put them that far down the barrel.

Oh and I forgot to note that this is a rail-rifle concept, hence the 12" steel slug for ammo and separated barrels (it's the charger... things... for the electromagnetism... and the slug runs between them when it fires. Or something. I need to read up on the science and science-fiction).

If you've used the rail-rifles in [i]MGS4[/i] or the original [i]Red Faction[/i] you might know what I mean. It'll be more obvious in the digital iteration.

[dgg]

Oh God, what is this, I don't even...

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Im12andwhatisthis.jpg[/img]

I like the expression I got in him... And that would be it.

[doggyalt]

hahahaha

[WastedJamacan]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;27615272]Hand study:

[img_thumb]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6139/handstudies.jpg[/img_thumb]

Excuse the horrible photos.[/QUOTE]

That first hand disappoints me, knowing your skill. The second is stunning.

[Mr. Scorpio]

[QUOTE=dgg;27620698]Oh God, what is this, I don't even...

[img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Im12andwhatisthis.jpg[/img_thumb]

I like the expression I got in him... And that would be it.[/QUOTE]

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydr8a3UHUy4[/media]

[Detlef]

3v3ryb0dy, I thought we where bro's, I'm sorry I was a useless fuck.

[T.F.W.O.]

[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/IMG_2070.JPG[/img_thumb]
Front

[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/IMG_2071.JPG[/img_thumb]
Back

[z0nk3d]

Started making personas for Firefox.
[url]https://www.getpersonas.com/en-US/gallery/Designer/Ganerumo[/url]

Here are the two I've made at the moment (full sized versions, headers + footers)

Vektor (my first one)
[media]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5706/vektorfinalcompressedre.jpg
[url]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1392/vektorbottom.jpg[/url]
[/media]

Sky and Grass (my second one)
[media]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2984/headerst.jpg
[url]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/2031/footercx.jpg[/url][/media]

[kattolil]

really like the vector one

[lexus04]

[QUOTE=dgg;27620698]Oh God, what is this, I don't even...

[img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Im12andwhatisthis.jpg[/img_thumb]

I like the expression I got in him... And that would be it.[/QUOTE]

is that rusty

[ser771]

[img]http://bildr.no/image/807604.jpeg[/img]
just touched a tablet for the first time.. it was divine!

[Barnhouse]

It all coming together bitches
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/w32EO.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/8SjqG.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/sODHq.png[/IMG]

which one is best?

[editline]24th January 2011[/editline]

Oh god what happened to the quality

[editline]yo[/editline]

okay fixed them. much love for PNG.

[fishsticks]

last..

[Detlef]

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;27629399]It all coming together bitches
[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/gk3tk.jpg[/img_thumb]

[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/8Nlyl.jpg[/img_thumb]

[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/Wup6v.jpg[/img_thumb]

which one is best?

[editline]24th January 2011[/editline]

Oh god what happened to the quality[/QUOTE]

Imgur happened to the quality. Also I like the last one.

[WastedJamacan]

The first one raped my eyes. The second doesn't look terrible and the third was ultimately the best.