Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

I keep thinking you're name is Jay-z rap for me.

ok... she somehow had turned into a mermaid before I realized what I was doing... [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/075/d/3/mermaid_wip_by_fadingz-d3bs4n5.png[/img]

wat

[img]http://gyazo.com/69d391267a5bd1f308ee3166eb413214.png[/img] I love you guys

[QUOTE=Xephio;28637392]first try at portrait drawings [img_thumb]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/075/9/d/potrait_study_by_xephio-d3brsq0.jpg[/img_thumb] ref:[img_thumb]http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT4jg9NwiqW6XRAGQbFx7cFRt3aslqfSjS1ZnF_1LyTYWm31Q3u[/img_thumb] i know that proportions are off the charts, shading and, well pretty much everything else looks weird couldnt find even the simplest how-to-draw-a-face-tutorial Anyone care to suggest me one! D:[/QUOTE] That's a huge improvement and I'm actually proud of you. But don't use low opacity brushes and in your values never use pure black or pure white. They are sacred as fuck. [editline]17th March 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=-The_D-;28638930]oh god am i late. Something people forgot to mention, her pupils/iris/part of the eye that's not white, is way too big. Take a look at the original picture. Also, making the pupils darker isn't gonna do you much good. Look at the picture, you can barely tell the difference between the pupil and the iris.[/QUOTE] Didn't do much bad neither. but thanks for caring enough to slowpoke.

heres a thing from my moleskine [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/8708/soundkanji.jpg[/img] here is the photoshop filled one. [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/4296/soundkanjiphotoshop.jpg[/img] c&c please! i think i should make it more refined, straight lines and all. super modern. what do you think?

I got some lyrics stuck in my head, and decided to write them [quote]These open streets Given my mind repeat Of the same thing I walk it all through Waiting for the leap Maybe tommorow will give The dream that I've waited for But I'm miles upon miles away Taking baby steps From day to day The faster I go The faster I'll show That I'm not ready for the things That I await Wishing on the horizon Thats all we do What we see Is what we wish to be But the cards are dropped And the mad one locks The key this door That we may not unlock But thats fine with me Cause baby dontcha see? The steps we take Will make us ready For this cake But we'll still gaze miles upon miles Away... Everything you, and I want... Is seems so far away But we're wishing miles upon miles away These things don't wrap themselves up In just one day We'll take it slow Then maybe we'll know That we'll be ready When everyone makes way We seem to wish for so much At these great distances Taking away the touch That started us that instant Even when we gaze these miles away We're ready now So please help me bust the door down We've got no more time to wait We're here at that locked gate Nothing can stop us now We're taking what we want Just like the one-shot clowns Just... Thanks to those miles upon miles away We waited from day to day We took our steps But now were here We finally can rest... My dear. [/quote] Also Happy Saint Pat day!

bored with win 7's shitty MS Paint [img]http://gyazo.com/9abff25c53df7c8497a8c625413ce41d.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Xephio;28637392]first try at portrait drawings [img_thumb]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/075/9/d/potrait_study_by_xephio-d3brsq0.jpg[/img_thumb] ref:[img_thumb]http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT4jg9NwiqW6XRAGQbFx7cFRt3aslqfSjS1ZnF_1LyTYWm31Q3u[/img_thumb] i know that proportions are off the charts, shading and, well pretty much everything else looks weird couldnt find even the simplest how-to-draw-a-face-tutorial Anyone care to suggest me one! D:[/QUOTE] It's funny, I did my first ever charcoal portrait on that same picture. It didn't turn out so well, Thom Yorke is a very confusing man to draw.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28647242]That's a huge improvement and I'm actually proud of you. But don't use low opacity brushes and in your values never use pure black or pure white. They are sacred as fuck. [/QUOTE] Thanks, really means alot :unsmith:

So here's my first serious attempt at drawing a realistic human being. [media]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/076/8/5/another_bland_sketch_by_riodoku-d3btjhh.png[/media] Problems that I've found, but don't know how to fix: *Long face *Small eyes *Oddly proportioned shoulders *Weird mouth Anybody have any tips?

is that meant to be l4d zoey why the long face?

[QUOTE=Riodoku;28649032]So here's my first serious attempt at drawing a realistic human being. [media]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/076/8/5/another_bland_sketch_by_riodoku-d3btjhh.png[/media] Problems that I've found, but don't know how to fix: *Long face *Small eyes *Oddly proportioned shoulders *Weird mouth Anybody have any tips?[/QUOTE] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9aA3V1qmOM&feature=related[/media]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28649074]is that meant to be l4d zoey why the long face?[/QUOTE] It's not supposed to be. [QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;28649188][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9aA3V1qmOM&feature=related[/media][/QUOTE] :v:

I'll post something helpful for Rio tomorrow, it's 5 in the morning

[QUOTE=Riodoku;28649200]It's not supposed to be. :v:[/QUOTE] i think it is

This is CHARLES. He's a new character [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/n1QLO.png[/IMG]

he is looking very badass reminds me of that guy that plays in The Hurt Locker and 28 Weeks Later, Jeremy Renner or w/e his name is.

thanks for the c&c. appreciate it.

i like his name

omg his face isn't 6 foot long [editline]17th March 2011[/editline] well done <3

I haaaaaaaaate you [editline]17th March 2011[/editline] jk <3

[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/076/f/a/str_t_tfm_l_424_by_shether-d3btxzd.png[/img] It's finished. The light in the photo makes it look pale.. Started working on it somewhere in the begining of the school..October/November? Yeah...umm, there is one little detail missing. I couldn't bother to do it..small green triangles in the bottom exterior corners of the covers.. I hope I'll be able to make another one in my lifetime to come..

[QUOTE=Detlef;28651091]This is CHARLES. He's a new character [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/n1QLO.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] He's [I]soooooo coooool![/I]

doop de doop i'm covered in graphite: [img]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/7193/portraitwip2.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=Riodoku;28649032]So here's my first serious attempt at drawing a realistic human being. [media]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/076/8/5/another_bland_sketch_by_riodoku-d3btjhh.png[/media] Problems that I've found, but don't know how to fix: *Long face *Small eyes *Oddly proportioned shoulders *Weird mouth Anybody have any tips?[/QUOTE] New detlef.

nah

[b]no1 can replace rusty's darling detlef!!!1![/b]

yeah!!!!!!!

[QUOTE=Detlef;28651091]This is CHARLES. He's a new character [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/n1QLO.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] he looks like a dick he is a dick right i mean he looks like david prassel [img]http://media.steampowered.com/steamcommunity/public/images/avatars/cd/cd9f6268f9f703b0e9134b0738e44569e75eadef_full.jpg[/img] and he's a dick