Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>

[Rusty100]

nah he looks more like chris evans
[img]http://spinoff.comicbookresources.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/lucas-lee2.jpg[/img]

[ChestyMcGee]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28652139]nah he looks more like chris evans
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[img]http://static.guim.co.uk/sys-images/Media/Pix/pictures/2008/10/24/ChrisEvans460.jpg[/img]

[Rusty100]

[url]http://www.google.com/images?q=chris+evans&um=1&ie=UTF-8&source=og&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi&biw=1400&bih=949[/url]

[3v3ryb0dy]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28652139]nah he looks more like chris evans
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[img]http://www.marieclaire.co.uk/imageBank/c/Chris-Evans-2.jpg[/img]

[Rusty100]

yeah thats the one!!!

[Detlef]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28651804]New detlef.[/QUOTE]

hey 3v3ryb0dy

suck my dick!

[Dr. Fishtastic]

[QUOTE=fishsticks;28651702][img_thumb]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/076/f/a/str_t_tfm_l_424_by_shether-d3btxzd.png[/img_thumb]

It's finished.
The light in the photo makes it look pale..
Started working on it somewhere in the begining of the school..October/November?
Yeah...umm, there is one little detail missing. I couldn't bother to do it..small green triangles in the bottom exterior corners of the covers..
I hope I'll be able to make another one in my lifetime to come..[/QUOTE]

I feel hungry for waffles

[k00lwhip]

We should have an Artist of the Week award.

It could entail a lot of things like, whomever has most improved, or is generally liked by everybody. and stuff. I think it'd be fun for the community. But i'm just thinking out loud here.

[Maya2008]

this will be my latest update on her for a while, really need to work on my class project now...
[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/076/a/1/mermaid_wip_by_fadingz-d3bs4n5.png[/img]
(Main fix: her gigantic upper incisors were trimmed...)
Damn it! I want to work on this instead of coding on my coding project for my class.
Need to come up with a beta version on April 1st,
and I need to meet with my adviser tomorrow to show him my progress.
Why everything turns boring and tedious when it becomes 'work?'
I love coding, but I had coding because I have to :(

C&C welcome, I'll make the changes when I get back to it again, probably this weekend, I hope...

[Xephio]

any ideas for a background yet?

[Rusty100]

her lips look like a separate entity from her face, they poke out and theyre so pointy!!!

[Maya2008]

Thinking about a reef next to the shore with bunch of tropical fish and marine organisms.

[editline]17th March 2011[/editline]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28652998]her lips look like a separate entity from her face, they poke out and theyre so pointy!!![/QUOTE]

Will note it down for next revision.
Her mouth been nagging me for along time :x

[Detlef]

who the hell plans a background after the object is done.

That will turn out compleatly wrong

[Maya2008]

Well, I do it most of the time lol.
I didn't even know I was painting a mermaid when I started to be honest.
I just add stuff when I think of something and go with the flow.

Gotta admit it's not the best work flow, but I hate being locked onto something from the start.
It'll be hard to change the secondary lighting if it's painted into the object.
I only have primary lighting in the scene, so I just need to add secondary lighting when I add the lighting.
The blue secondary lighting can be easily removed as it is on a different layer.
Tonal change is easy with photoshop too to change the brightness of the sun.

[Rusty100]

im not a fan of the mermaid thing

[Maya2008]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28653091]im not a fan of the mermaid thing[/QUOTE]

I never made a none-human humanoid ;
that is, human, organism, and monsters were all I did.
I thought it would be a nice attempt in doing something int he middle.
I hate furry, so mermaid was the first thing that came to my mind.
(Opposite of fur/feather is scale lol)

[Rusty100]

she should be half SHARK

[editline]18th March 2011[/editline]

GHArAG HGSGHg

[Dr. Fishtastic]

[QUOTE=Riodoku;28649032]So here's my first serious attempt at drawing a realistic human being.

[media]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/076/8/5/another_bland_sketch_by_riodoku-d3btjhh.png[/media]

Problems that I've found, but don't know how to fix:
*Long face
*Small eyes
*Oddly proportioned shoulders
*Weird mouth

Anybody have any tips?[/QUOTE]

Okay here you go baby

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gd4Ykl.jpg[/IMG]

[media][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gd4Yk.jpg[/IMG][/media]

Fullsize

[Spongmana]

Just a link because its an A3 sized painting in full res: (3,6 mb in .jpeg)
[URL]http://filesmelt.com/dl/CKVding_1.jpg[/URL]
My first real attempt at using my tablet, I think it turned out pretty awesome. It took a long time though but that's probably because of my shitty methods (low opacity brushes stacked till I get the required shade, but I was going for that rough style.) And as you might have noticed, I did trace the outlines of all the guys to get them to look a bit human, instead of mutated potatoe people. The rest is fully hand drawn though (Exept for the background clouds, which are from a different source)
It looks a lot better on the shiny paper though, but that's probably because its scaled down a lot too.
I liked drawing this and I might do stuff like this again in the future, so can I have some kind c&c on this?

[Maya2008]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28653251]she should be half SHARK

[editline]18th March 2011[/editline]

GHArAG HGSGHg[/QUOTE]
how about Half dugong?

[leontodd]

Who wants to see the biggest pile of shit drawing since the last biggest pile of shit drawing?

[Detlef]

is it anime

[Dr. Fishtastic]

[QUOTE=Mrfantasticool;28653304]Just a link because its an A3 sized painting in full res: (3,6 mb in .jpeg)
[URL]http://filesmelt.com/dl/CKVding_1.jpg[/URL]
My first real attempt at using my tablet, I think it turned out pretty awesome. It took a long time though but that's probably because of my shitty methods (low opacity brushes stacked till I get the required shade, but I was going for that rough style.) And as you might have noticed, I did trace the outlines of all the guys to get them to look a bit human, instead of mutated potatoe people. The rest is fully hand drawn though (Exept for the background clouds, which are from a different source)
It looks a lot better on the shiny paper though, but that's probably because its scaled down a lot too.
I liked drawing this and I might do stuff like this again in the future, so can I have some kind c&c on this?[/QUOTE]

I really like where this is going, but it really needs some darker values. You could try messing with the contrast and levels for a quick and dirty fix

[Greeneyes]

If it's a drawing of an actual pile of shit I will not be impressed.

[Detlef]

[QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;28653600]I really like where this is going, but it really needs some darker values. You could try messing with the contrast and levels for a quick and dirty fix[/QUOTE]

nnngh please people stop painting with such low opacity, it instantly looks noobish ans shitty

[leontodd]

[QUOTE=Detlef;28653576]is it anime[/QUOTE]
No its this...
[img_thumb]http://f.anyhub.net/2aVV[/img_thumb]

[Detlef]

You're right it is pretty shitty

[3v3ryb0dy]

[QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;28653289]Okay here you go baby

[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/gd4Ykl.jpg[/img_thumb]

[media][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/gd4Yk.jpg[/img_thumb][/media]

Fullsize[/QUOTE]
You got a lot to learn before you can start doing tutorials

[editline]17th March 2011[/editline]

[QUOTE=Mrfantasticool;28653304]Just a link because its an A3 sized painting in full res: (3,6 mb in .jpeg)
[URL]http://filesmelt.com/dl/CKVding_1.jpg[/URL]
My first real attempt at using my tablet, I think it turned out pretty awesome. It took a long time though but that's probably because of my shitty methods (low opacity brushes stacked till I get the required shade, but I was going for that rough style.) And as you might have noticed, I did trace the outlines of all the guys to get them to look a bit human, instead of mutated potatoe people. The rest is fully hand drawn though (Exept for the background clouds, which are from a different source)
It looks a lot better on the shiny paper though, but that's probably because its scaled down a lot too.
I liked drawing this and I might do stuff like this again in the future, so can I have some kind c&c on this?[/QUOTE]
Cool but use larger, harder brushes with 75-100% opacity and never, ever use white or black in your paintings. It's a matter of values.

[editline]17th March 2011[/editline]

[QUOTE=leontodd;28653788]No its this...
[img_thumb]http://f.anyhub.net/2aVV[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
atleast you tried.

[Dr. Fishtastic]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28653997]You got a lot to learn before you can start doing tutorials
[/QUOTE]

Like I said, I'm no expert, it was just a tutorial on basic perspective

[g-foxisus]

How do you guys start to draw a head?