Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - General

[QUOTE=Eric95;39488323]Redesigning some characters from an animation I'm working on These are the old: (I don't have any cleaned up animation of the guy) And here are the new designs: Thoughts?[/QUOTE] They look like their faces stick out a bit too much. I have a feeling you noticed that their silhouettes were a bit flat and went a bit too far in the other direction. Other than that, I like them!

[QUOTE=Eric95;39488323]Redesigning some characters from an animation I'm working on [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Kc4hs6b.png[/IMG] Thoughts?[/QUOTE] The girl's entire bottom face is way too bloated and the guy's face and body seems extremely rigid. Are they suppose to be opposites of each other? One being round and the other pointy?

[QUOTE=imMonkeyGOD;39488709]Are they suppose to be opposites of each other? One being round and the other pointy?[/QUOTE] yes

[QUOTE=Eric95;39488773]yes[/QUOTE] Well the guy is fine then. I still think the girl's bottom face needs to be less bloated.

[QUOTE=Eric95;39488323] And here are the new designs: [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Kc4hs6b.png[/IMG] Thoughts?[/QUOTE] [U]NO[/U]

[QUOTE=rikimaru6811;39488940][U]NO[/U][/QUOTE] ?

[t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/17823794/forumfun/other/Puppy%20Eyes_COMP.png[/t] [I]"Anime Vision!"[/I] - CJ Another picture my friend drew for me. Extra, personal info bits quickly sniped out, so excuse it looking like I scissored the thing out. [SUB][SUB][URL="http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9853477/"][Link!][/URL][/SUB][/SUB]

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[QUOTE=Eric95;39488323] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Kc4hs6b.png[/IMG] Thoughts[/QUOTE] Older design was kind of better.

[QUOTE=Eric95;39489005]?[/QUOTE] Clearly the "old" girl is way better. And more cute.

[IMG]http://puu.sh/1YbYt[/IMG] Not exactly sure where I was going with this.

[img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/9132c6866ca0831bcb8f547b2faf26e4/tumblr_mhr7onB24s1rv1nxto1_1280.jpg[/img] a bit of progress

[QUOTE=Moustacheman;39489888]Older design was kind of better.[/QUOTE] I like the new ones better except for that enormous chin.

It's a bit tought to actually see the drawing. If you could get more light on it the picture would be a lot more clear.

Yeah, I blame the iPod for how picture turned out but I'll have it scanned later

[t]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/036/9/8/jesse_cox_the_engineer_by_rikimaru6811-d5tzmrl.jpg[/t]

How is this on a scale of 1 to muddy [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/pTqmMwY.jpg[/img_thumb] obviously wip, c&C please

Hmm most of the artwork I've seen are pretty good. Some I think could use a little bit more tweaking. Keep them Artworks coming!

[QUOTE=salmonmarine;39491074]How is this on a scale of 1 to muddy [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/pTqmMwY.jpg[/img_thumb] obviously wip, c&C please[/QUOTE] Looks as if the other ships are down hill from the one in the foreground, rather than just farther away.

Alright, I guess I'll just stay with the old designs then. Other people told me the old designs were boring and not expressive enough so that's why I gave the girl those big eyes and such but yeah i guess i was just stupid then

[QUOTE=Eric95;39491591]Other people[/QUOTE] Who?

[QUOTE=rikimaru6811;39491634]Who?[/QUOTE] Some artists that I know from a different community. I listen to them most of the time because they're pretty good and educated

[IMG]http://puu.sh/1YeVD[/IMG] The guy from before sort of evolved.

[QUOTE=Akasha;39491159]Hmm most of the artwork I've seen are pretty good. Some I think could use a little bit more tweaking. Keep them Artworks coming![/QUOTE] Is this post directed at the whole thread population as though we were one person? :v:

[QUOTE=Eric95;39491591]Alright, I guess I'll just stay with the old designs then. Other people told me the old designs were boring and not expressive enough so that's why I gave the girl those big eyes and such but yeah i guess i was just stupid then[/QUOTE] Don't give up on them just yet! I honestly think you should just work on them a bit and they'll look great.

Alright, I tried toning them down a bit. How's this? [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/o3iLu9s.gif[/IMG]

She still looks overweight. What's wrong with the first version? The one you did all the animations of. She was good

stick with the first version jeez

the old one doesn't look young enough, it kind of felt like the only thing that made the age difference obvious was the difference in height. So i made her look more like a little kid by giving her chubbier cheeks and such. Having the eyes just be glasses with pupils in them also made it difficult to get dramatic expressions out of her But fine, if you hate it I'll just use the old, boring ones

[QUOTE=Eric95;39492605]But fine, if you hate it I'll just use the old, boring ones[/QUOTE] Cute, not boring