Robots Have Love Too! - T-shirt Design Critique

[Mac2468]

I don't like the way the robot is facing if he/she/it is on the left of the shirt it should be facing to the right. That's just a peeve of mine when I make my shirts.

[Limpet]

[QUOTE=MCPeePants;16221722]Just for you[/QUOTE]

I think that looks cool.

[KorJax]

[QUOTE=MCPeePants;16221722]Just for you

[img]http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t32/MCPeePants_ATHF/Robobyhimselfshirt.jpg[/img]

I think it looks good, but maybe a little too sparse?

I do agree though, the design seems just a bit too cluttered, so I'm gonna see if I can possibly take the submission down and post it back up refined. It still hasn't been approved yet though, hmmm

Thanks guys, keep the comments coming![/QUOTE]

Don't underestimate the power of simplicity. Sometimes, less is more.

Personally I think ti would be cool if you left the trail of hearts but instead of them being just a trail, make them be balloons that the robot is holding.

And maybe the hearts at the bottom where the robot is, could be balloons that are not held onto (as in it would pretty much be the same but have strings laying on the "ground").

But yeah, in general I can dig it :cool:

[Sluthe]

That's nice :D, I hope you win, because that's a very cute shirt :D

[MCPeePants]

[QUOTE=KorJax;16245984]Don't underestimate the power of simplicity. Sometimes, less is more.

Personally I think ti would be cool if you left the trail of hearts but instead of them being just a trail, make them be balloons that the robot is holding.

And maybe the hearts at the bottom where the robot is, could be balloons that are not held onto (as in it would pretty much be the same but have strings laying on the "ground").

But yeah, in general I can dig it :cool:[/QUOTE]

That's a great idea! I think I'll work with that!

[b] OH SNAP [/b]

I just got denied because I submitted it without updating through my critique. So they say I have to delete my critique and submit because they said they want to make sure I'm trying to submit it twice at once. Lol?

That's good though! Because now I can improve on it.

[almightybenners]

To be honest the last design is the best as it is nice and neat, the hearts made it look to meesy and detratced from the robot too much. With t-shirt designs simple equals better and larger blocks of bold colours are better than complex fiddly designs. (they are also easier to print and if you are doing free lance stuff like these competitions that probably counts for something as well)