This story makes my eyes and brain ooze out of my nostrils. - General

[QUOTE=cheiftiger;17141770] when u went inside u saw ur mom eating luch it was her lunch break [/QUOTE] No. No I didn't. :ohdear:

oHgODM y BRAIN Is o N FIrEeeee

I attempted reading that... Though I was straining too hard to get past the second "Chapter".

I stopped reading after the first word. I will never read anything like that. It seriously makes me feel dumber. That said, I did skim read the "improved" version.

My version Lintz? I had fun with mine. I think I may start posting a shitty story I find on MySpace and then going in and make it more surreal... That is, if you guys would want to read that kinda stuff.

Someone should re-write this in a well thought out and organized manner.

[QUOTE=thirty9th;17173840]Someone should re-write this in a well thought out and organized manner.[/QUOTE] Look back. 2 pages. In a 4 page thread.

This story made my existance hurt.

I can't read past the first fucking word.I need helpz

Me after chapter 1: [img]http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/5848/avarbh6.gif[/img]

[quote=story]well do u want to skate sure so u guys skated and skated u fell on ur butt like ten time and [b]u were sure u were gonna have a huge bruise the tommorrow[/b] once u guys were done eating he drove u home and thats when all the drama happend[/quote] awesome.

[QUOTE=Montroze;17182076]Me after chapter 1: [img]http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f13/Ravi21/seinfield.gif[/img][/QUOTE] Me after I read that fail comment: :|

[QUOTE=double117;17182165]Me after I read that fail comment: :|[/QUOTE] Me after i fixed my post: =P

[QUOTE=Montroze;17182076]Me after chapter 1: [img]http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/5848/avarbh6.gif[/img][/QUOTE] Why is it that the blood that comes out of his head is rainbow? Is he magical? :D

im very srry to have to be the one to tell u this miss parker but u mother cathleen parker has died in a car accident a solcial worker will be bye in two days to take u to ur dad plz be ready and again i am very srry about ur loss

im sorry, this is too long, my IQ just dropped a few thousand into the way negatives.

I'm no one to use this but what is this i don't even

I can't stand reading that garbage, I don't even think a period was used once.

[QUOTE=Perfumly;17195717]im very srry to have to be the one to tell u this miss parker but u mother cathleen parker has died in a car accident a solcial worker will be bye in two days to take u to ur dad plz be ready and again i am very srry about ur loss[/QUOTE] omg~ NO!!!!

Fuck......I can't read it.....no caps, no periods......Shit. :suicide:

Huh?

It is the worlds greatest run on sentence staring horrid grammar and The constant use of "U"

Someone tl;dr it?

[QUOTE=Montroze;17182076]Me after chapter 1: [img]http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/5848/avarbh6.gif[/img][/QUOTE] I made that. :O

My favorite part is how Vince is so fast because he's the "Courter Back"

I just read the whole fucking thing. I don't understand what just happened.