• User Challenge for nightwing
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[QUOTE=nightwing;26607951]I think I'm gonna use this [url]http://us.fotolia.com/id/4258900[/url] Another update. I fixed the legs up a bit and lengthened the shirt. [img_thumb]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7741/femalecharacter2.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Retyuoligkl;26590357][img_thumb]http://www.gap.com/Asset_Archive/GPWeb/Assets/Product/498/498505/big/gp498505-00vliv01.jpg[/img_thumb] what i also think you should have done, was just done a normal frontal shot without any pose because you arent experienced enough but whats done is done[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=nightwing;26607951]I think I'm gonna use this [url]http://us.fotolia.com/id/4258900[/url] Another update. I fixed the legs up a bit and lengthened the shirt. [img_thumb]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7741/femalecharacter2.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Boobs aren't that defined in the cleavage area. Get rid of a good bit of that line.
The legs are too rough, the boobs doesn't look natural at all and she has an extremely stiff pose. Also, her center of gravity is extremely off, given how her back bends back. I ask of you again, post your reference pictures in this thread. Reference pictures is 50% of drawing when you're drawing something that you haven't drawn yet.
I see what you did there, trying to avoid drawing hands! Sneaky sneaky. Now fix this. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1275475/cc.png[/img] [editline]11th December 2010[/editline] Should have just drawn this pose IMO: [img]http://www.exrx.net/Graphics/image1.gif[/img] [editline]11th December 2010[/editline] Also the lips are ugly, just draw it as a line for now.
[QUOTE=Nyaa;26624217] [img_thumb]http://www.exrx.net/Graphics/image1.gif[/img_thumb] [/QUOTE] AHHHHHAEJGHEAKHHHHHH I do agree on the posing though.
[QUOTE=jenny7332;26625367]AHHHHHAEJGHEAKHHHHHH Hahahha it's the only sort of okay image on google search on the first page I found :D I do agree on the posing though.[/QUOTE]
I'm going to bump this one up to see how you're doing nightwing :)
This is the funniest thread I have seen in ages.
lovin' the progress, lovin' the help.
I don't see much progress and i don't see much help... you going blind Dai?
[QUOTE=$$>MUFFIN<$$;26902803]This is the funniest thread I have seen in ages.[/QUOTE] i fail to see the funny please point it out for me
[QUOTE=jewdozer;26475868][img_thumb]http://sadpanda.us/images/298003-KGMRQAN.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] [QUOTE=jewdozer;26569444]New one has tits. This one has tits too. [img_thumb]http://sadpanda.us/images/304022-Q3H0O0X.png[/img_thumb] If you can't make your character work nude theres something wrong with the shape. This new one you are doing, bring her bewbs down a bit lower.[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=nightwing;26471791]Better? [img_thumb]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/6364/femalecharacter.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Meh, I still though it was funny.
[QUOTE=$$>MUFFIN<$$;26926001]I don't see much progress and i don't see much help... you going blind Dai?[/QUOTE] definitely seeing progress, though it still needs more obviously. The help I loved the most is, once again, Nyaa providing markups. By the way, lose the "Total Drama Island" style calves, they hurt to look at.
Yes Nyaa is probably one of the best artists around here and she is extremely helpful, I always learn something from reading her critique and she really deserves more praise than she gets.
[QUOTE=Gregah;26931564]Yes Nyaa is probably one of the best artists around here and she is extremely helpful, I always learn something from reading her critique and she really deserves more praise than she gets.[/QUOTE] Aww guys thanks, but the praise should really go to wewt, cause he taught me what constructive criticism is and told me many times how I shouldn't be butt-hurt when someone gives me criticism (when he told me something was off, I just threw a hissy fit :3).
Well I haven't been on for a while and sadly I have no updates for you guys whatsoever. I haven't even touched my picture since the last update. Life is being a real bitch and I can't get anything done. [editline]26th December 2010[/editline] Here I did this in less than 20 minutes with my new tablet. Just for you guys. [img]http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7741/femalecharacter2.png[/img]
Get rid of those lips
I say the lips look fine, but Iunno about the waist.
That pose is still extremely stiff and unnatural, I'll ask again ; What picture(s) do you use as reference pictures? (please tell me you're using reference pictures)
[img]http://ploader.net/files/5cd6d01d3ed15743e2272ad8246f7e5c.png[/img] Since everybody is doing parodies and shit, I did a coloring of what I expect Jewdozer to looks like. :3:
She must be really pro then, making art like [b][url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1005503-Jewdozer-s-gynecology-clinic]that[/url][/b] without using her arms or head.
Thought I'd bump to see how things are going, you said something about life being tough on you right now so if you want an extension of the deadline I can give you that.
[QUOTE=Bftony;27014094]making art without using her arms or head.[/QUOTE] :q:
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