[QUOTE=Dtmech;39781465][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Buzz2.png[/IMG]
?[/QUOTE]
NOW you're getting somewhere
Well made some more progress, though i am having a hard time with getting a more rock look on it.
[IMG] http://filesmelt.com/dl/Golemthingy41.png[/IMG]
I think i'm done for today.
[QUOTE=Dtmech;39783170]Well made some more progress, though i am having a hard time with getting a more rock look on it.
[IMG] http://filesmelt.com/dl/Golemthingy41.png[/IMG]
I think i'm done for today.[/QUOTE]
Wow, I think you really nailed it. Left hand could use some detail, but I think the design is now spot on
So eventually I did come back on my drawing I've made earlier.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/Wf0my6K.png[/t]
I'm really surprised by how well I managed to render the cloth of the neck.
[QUOTE=Dtmech;39783170]Well made some more progress, though i am having a hard time with getting a more rock look on it.
[IMG] http://filesmelt.com/dl/Golemthingy41.png[/IMG]
I think i'm done for today.[/QUOTE]
The rock looks really smooth/shiny with those highlights, I think.
[IMG]http://oi49.tinypic.com/34otxeu.jpg[/IMG]
a sketch I forgot to keep doing at some point
[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/062/4/f/here_i_go_by_anax253-d5wv350.png[/img]
Here i go
[t]http://i.imgur.com/r88RBAl.jpg[/t]
This took a dickload of time to finish. ugh
If you copy/paste, try to make it less noticeable
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;39789486]If you copy/paste, try to make it less noticeable[/QUOTE]
Its those fucking eyeballs. Oh well still got 120/100 on it for going the extra mile.
And you know what would be great? If instead of just critiquing the negative aspects of a piece
it would be nice maby say what you DO like about it.
just sayin
[QUOTE=Mysterious Mr.E;39789608]Its those fucking eyeballs. Oh well still got 120/100 on it for going the extra mile.
And you know what would be great? If instead of just critiquing the negative aspects of a piece
it would be nice maby say what you DO like about it.
just sayin[/QUOTE]
Just be glad you're getting anything. My work isn't even good enough to merit anything more a rating or two and pun once in a blue moon. I'd rather have only criticism than nothing at all.
[QUOTE=Dtmech;39783170]Well made some more progress, though i am having a hard time with getting a more rock look on it.
[IMG] http://filesmelt.com/dl/Golemthingy41.png[/IMG]
I think i'm done for today.[/QUOTE]
I think if you put some faint red/orange glows in the cracks it's be pretty sweet
And yeah - unless he's been at the bottom of a river for thousands of years and his rock has been worn down smooth, I'd texturise his skin to make it more rock-like. Although a lava golem that's been living underwater or at the base of a waterfall for a long time could be a neat concept
[IMG]http://imgkk.com/i/5b6p.png[/IMG]
it's a thing
[editline]bleh[/editline]
I could really use some criticism though
[QUOTE=Mysterious Mr.E;39789608]Its those fucking eyeballs. Oh well still got 120/100 on it for going the extra mile.
And you know what would be great? If instead of just critiquing the negative aspects of a piece
it would be nice maby say what you DO like about it.
just sayin[/QUOTE]
Well not to be a dick but I always do mention the things I like about pieces, so.. put two and two together there
Not to say it's bad, but it's not my kind of thing. Anything that looks like a vector, the appeal is just lost on me. Lifeless
And to expand on what biscuit said, we're pretty much all in the same boat in here, I don't get tonnes of compliments on my work either usually. This isn't somewhere you come for a pat on the back, this is a thread full of people who have been sharpening their critic's knifes on each other's work for varying lengths of time.
When you get praised, you'll know you really deserved it.
That's the best part about FP really, we're not here to touch eachother's butts (ew gross), we're here to get the cold hard opinions and criticism we need to improve. Honestly I think it used to be worse (aka better IMO.) because the criticism and feedback flowed much more freely.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;39791601]we're not here to touch eachother's butts[/QUOTE]
I'll be on my way then
Dragon doodle
[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/32047569/desert drrg.png[/IMG]
Very WIP of a painting I am currently doing.
[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/32047569/HNNNG reflections.png[/IMG]
One of those things where it is hard to make sense of what you are looking at until the thing is finished. It will make more sense once the stuff is blurred together in the right places like it is in the picture. You can almost already see the setting of where the picture was taken from the reflections, including the photographer.
Dinosaurs on motorcycles? Why not?
[img]http://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-snc6/225175_2925246508049_1805971053_n.jpg[/img]
I just got the letter saying I won the big Silas H. Rhodes Scholarship to SVA (15k a year)! I wasn't expecting this at all :v: And I got accepted into all the schools I applied to omg
[QUOTE=PC_Paul;39799690][t]http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/063/b/5/dance_of_fire_and_steel_by_kaelakov-d5wzft8.png[/t][/QUOTE]
This looks really cool, I like the texturing. He sorta dissolves into a big fat blob at the bottom though, Id recommend adding a bit of lighter areas to separate out his body shape just a bit.
heres some progress pics from the beginning. stopped taking them half way :v:
[t]http://s14.postimage.org/xn8dafynj/Untitled_3.jpg[/t]
done with mouse because im too poor for a tablet :c
[QUOTE=PC_Paul;39799849]heres some progress pics from the beginning. stopped taking them half way :v:
[t]http://s14.postimage.org/xn8dafynj/Untitled_3.jpg[/t]
done with mouse because im too poor for a tablet :c[/QUOTE]
He's got some depressed shoulders or something, it looks odd because of the sudden drop. I'd say draw the person (outlined) then layer armor over it for a more "real" look. but not bad for a mouse job
[editline]4th March 2013[/editline]
[QUOTE=Lilyo;39798821]I just got the letter saying I won the big Silas H. Rhodes Scholarship to SVA (15k a year)! I wasn't expecting this at all :v: And I got accepted into all the schools I applied to omg[/QUOTE]
come to sjsu and be with me, th89 and uberslug, we all animation/illustration majors :3
[img]http://i.imgur.com/y7fIx8e.png[/img]
[QUOTE=lucky;39801663][img]http://i.imgur.com/y7fIx8e.png[/img][/QUOTE]
your comics are weird its like everybody snorted 30 kgs of coke
[editline]5th March 2013[/editline]
just look at how they say hi to eachother
Found this poster thingy I made a couple years back in high-school.
Whatcha guys think?
[img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/063/7/2/earthbound_propaganda_poster_by_catmanmovies-d5x09bq.png[/img]
And here's the clean one:
[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/063/1/b/earthbound_propaganda_poster_non_scuffed_by_catmanmovies-d5x09oh.png[/img]
I remember I spent a long ass time making each letter and getting them as close to the game as I could.
Then I found the same font online like 2 days later and said "fuck it" and used that instead.
I see what you're doing but that pixelation is WAY too much on the eyes and breaks the flow.
The silver guy, the words, even the background just has too much going on with it.
Also the leading is incredibly inconsistent and makes it hard to read the way you want it to be read.
[img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/063/4/6/sad_sorceress_by_anax253-d5x0g37.png[/img]
sad sorceress :'(
Feel like I'm getting a little better with blending and tone, stuff. Still a loong way to go but I'm havin' fun.
[img]http://puu.sh/2clQM[/img]
[editline]5th March 2013[/editline]
[QUOTE=Anax;39802950][img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/063/4/6/sad_sorceress_by_anax253-d5x0g37.png[/img]
sad sorceress :'([/QUOTE]
I wish I could pull off shading is bold as you're doing on that hat. So confident :(
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