[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;39791601]That's the best part about FP really, we're not here to touch eachother's butts (ew gross)[/QUOTE]
this is news to me
I feel something is off with this guy's expression
[img]http://imageshack.us/a/img507/9844/grozny.png[/img]
Edit: messed around with the face a little more.
and archer guy
[IMG]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9940/kasanarcher.png[/IMG]
Holy fuck. Get outta town man.
Edit: Anyways if you mean the first guys expression, his mouth is in a partial smile as are his eyes. If you want him to seem like he's enjoying himself less, you'd most likely want to angle the inner halves of his eyebrows further up. Inner eyebrow up = sad/distressed, which is mostly likely more towards what you're going for.
that first guy's right arm looks very small to me
I think it's just like 10% too small but I agree more or less.
his hands also look a bit small
Thanks guys.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;39803461]Holy fuck. Get outta town man.
Edit: Anyways if you mean the first guys expression, his mouth is in a partial smile as are his eyes. If you want him to seem like he's enjoying himself less, you'd most likely want to angle the inner halves of his eyebrows further up. Inner eyebrow up = sad/distressed, which is mostly likely more towards what you're going for.[/QUOTE]
Thanks, and yes, I wanted a more distressed/tired expression.
Good, then pitch up those eyebrows and stop being so fucking good at drawing god shit fuck!
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jesus fuck you're good at drawing aaaaaah
[QUOTE=nox;39803396]I feel something is off with this guy's expression
[IMG]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/9844/grozny.png[/IMG]][/QUOTE]
The expression is fine (if a bit creepy on the battlefield) but the hands are tiny!
Edit: Oh I'm a bit late... But I think it's more like 20% too small.
goshdarnit, i have photoshop, yet my tablet skills get 129% better in paint, anyways Edgar Allan Poe
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ZgoGFHx.png[/IMG]
[QUOTE=nox;39803396]I feel something is off with this guy's expression
[IMG]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/9844/grozny.png[/IMG]
and archer guy
[IMG]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9940/kasanarcher.png[/IMG][/QUOTE]
Hmm. The first guys head actually looks just a little tiny bit too big for the body imo.
[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/063/a/e/chillin__crabby_by_xephio-d5wzwj7.png[/img]
a cwabby
fuck other nations
USA on top
[img]http://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/26339_2928175141263_1653179852_n.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=nox;39803396]I feel something is off with this guy's expression
[img]http://imageshack.us/a/img507/9844/grozny.png[/img]
Edit: messed around with the face a little more.
[/QUOTE]
I just adore your rendering style. It looks so professional an pretty.
The only thing that really sticks out to me is the line from the nose to the side of the mouth (I don't know what it's called?) It seems unnaturally close to the corner of the mouth closest to us. I think the face would benefit from having that line lifted a little further away from the mouth.
Now that I'm looking a little closer his hands do seem quite small in comparison to his face.
Has anyone been through times when you seem to completely lost your touch at shading?
Anyone wanna help me improve this? I dunno what to do
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/EkJdrz9.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Xephio;39804844][img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/063/a/e/chillin__crabby_by_xephio-d5wzwj7.png[/img]
a cwabby[/QUOTE]
this is extremely good in my opinion.
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~very~ interesting composition and the colors are splendid.
[QUOTE=Lilyo;39807316]Anyone wanna help me improve this? I dunno what to do
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/EkJdrz9.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
As a whole it looks rather mucky and dark, try brightening it up.
Is this thread strictly artwork? Because I have an early design for a speaker that I'd like some feedback on, and I don't know where to ask for it.
[QUOTE=Chaplin;39807641][IMG]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/064/1/5/startfish_by_chaplinsolus-d5x1t1x.jpg[/IMG]
????[/QUOTE]
The crow looks a bit bulky, especially at the back of its head, and the farther leg looks way darker and thicker than the near leg.
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[QUOTE=Xephio;39804844][img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/063/a/e/chillin__crabby_by_xephio-d5wzwj7.png[/img]
a cwabby[/QUOTE]
I seriously love this style. It's really expressive, I think.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;39807584]As a whole it looks rather mucky and dark, try brightening it up.[/QUOTE]
Ok well that's just the overall atmosphere, I'm not changing that. Anything else? Like... someone that knows what they're doing edit it to make me realize what I'm doing wrong.
[QUOTE=~ZOMG;39808216]Is this thread strictly artwork? Because I have an early design for a speaker that I'd like some feedback on, and I don't know where to ask for it.[/QUOTE]
Nah, you should post it!
[QUOTE=ElectricSquid;39808254]The crow looks a bit bulky, especially at the back of its head, and the farther leg looks way darker and thicker than the near leg.[/QUOTE]
yeah, I didn't work from a reference on that one so its anatomy is probably really fucked up
posting from my phone, hope this works.
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/JOKE.gif[/img]
goofin around in flash.
[QUOTE=Lilyo;39808453]Ok well that's just the overall atmosphere, I'm not changing that. Anything else? Like... someone that knows what they're doing edit it to make me realize what I'm doing wrong.[/QUOTE]
If I look at the thumbnail. I can't see an immediate focal point. I mean I can tell that the building is the key thing to look at, but the colours and contrasts don't really direct my eye to it. Red is always a good easy colour to throw in, because it tends to be the colour our eye is most drawn to (evolutionary reasons, blood, etc) and this is why it's used so often in warning and traffic signs. Given that it's an asian-based painting, you could easily get away with some red lanterns hanging from the house.
It's sitting under some trees, so you could also add a shaft of light (not necessarily a super bright or super sharp-edged one) to light up the house a bit more.
I'm also thinking that the big tree behind the house is pretty misleading. At first glance I thought it was closer to us, helping to create an archway that we looked down to see the house. It's a lot more saturated than the building, which could be part of this - although I'm concerned about the fact that maybe the tree-wood simply IS more saturated than the house-wood. Maybe somebody else can talk about how to go about dealing with that. I think the size of the tree also contributes to this confused depth. Looking at the lighting on the tree, it's as though the light source is hovering in the air right where that big green bunch of leaves sits between the fork in the branches (the one horizontally centered and about 1/3 of the way down from the top of the image)
Something I'd also suggest (and something I need to do too) is to do some master studies. They're like photostudies, but you're referencing the old masters of painting. Personally, I'll be referencing contemporary concept artists as well. I haven't done any yet but I imagine it'll give a lot of insight into composition and colour and everything else!
But I love your work dude. Keep it up!
Did this quick thing.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/wpbFTNi.png[/img]
[QUOTE=nox;39803396]I feel something is off with this guy's expression
[img]http://imageshack.us/a/img507/9844/grozny.png[/img]
Edit: messed around with the face a little more.
and archer guy
[IMG]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9940/kasanarcher.png[/IMG][/QUOTE]
This is really beautifully rendered but the perspective in the first picture bothers me--the dude's feet don't look like they're quite aligned with the sidewalk, and the dead guy's definitely looking like he's kind of floating above it (is it a kid? looks very small).
Also, it's a really tiny little sidewalk. But the figures are spectacular.
Yay, new thread. I've been away from the last one for a while.
Reference from a YouTube video I saw a while back.
[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2963/alpinei.jpg[/img]
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Could be sharpened.
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