Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29444273]portal gun is still way wrong [img_thumb]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs36/300W/i/2008/270/8/9/ASHPD___Portal_Gun_by_Hellsplumber.jpg[/img_thumb] [/QUOTE] Too late I already emailed it to Gabe. :frown: Oh well. It was kind of out of focus, so I couldn't detail it too much. But thanks for picking up on it. The main part of the painting is GLaDOS so I can't really be bothered fixing up the gun.

the gun is a very prominent part of the painting and my eyes are drawn toward it [editline]27th April 2011[/editline] so yeah i think its pretty important that it doesnt look like a misshapen white blob

values on her back are pretty flat actually values are pretty flat in general

I did my best to fix it. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/6471/portal22.jpg[/img]

up dat contrast el rapido

The only reason it looks weird is because the reference pic is all out of focus. [url]http://images.wikia.com/half-life/en/images/a/aa/Portal2_chell_new_outfit_glados.jpg[/url]

So I drew a guy I'm avoiding values and all that shadowy shit because I know better then to fuck with shit when I don't know how it works. So I just work on proportions. [img]http://gyazo.com/92a659a256ee13b24d6ef8d376fbc3e6.png[/img] Kinda funny looking isn't he, I'm going to go procrastinate on drawing more heads.

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29444626]up dat contrast el rapido[/QUOTE] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3820/portal22z.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29444626]up dat contrast el rapido[/QUOTE] no i like the colours how they are not everything needs super upped contrast for fuck sake [editline]27th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Khaos-23;29444708][img_thumb]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3820/portal22z.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] i liked it better before

[QUOTE=Khaos-23;29444708][img_thumb]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3820/portal22z.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] looked better before

[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;29444684]So I drew a guy I'm avoiding values and all that shadowy shit because I know better then to fuck with shit when I don't know how it works. So I just work on proportions. [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/92a659a256ee13b24d6ef8d376fbc3e6.png[/img_thumb] Kinda funny looking isn't he, I'm going to go procrastinate on drawing more heads.[/QUOTE] It looks good considering you're just using black and white.

screw u chesty and ur high contrast ok OK [editline]27th April 2011[/editline] images with too high contrast just look weird and surreal [editline]27th April 2011[/editline] like ur drawings (a bit)

cryin teardrops over dis massive attack

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29445000]no i like the colours how they are not everything needs super upped contrast for fuck sake [/quote] [QUOTE=Detlef;29445101]looked better before[/QUOTE] Well fuck, I just sent the contrasted one to Gabe. [editline]27th April 2011[/editline] Not sending a third. That would be over the top.

stop sending things to gabe to suddenly GOSH

I was happy with it, Sent it, came on here and was told it needed fixing. I can't win :smith:

hey no ones blaming you, just take what you have learned from this and apply it in later works

only listen to my advice!!!

I was surprised when you said you sent it to Gabe, I thought it was still miles from finished since the background is really boring. It just looks unfinished.

It was mainly about the GLaDOS, I almost wasn't even going to do Chell or the background. I only attached it in a message where I thanked him for portal 2 and asked a question. Anyway here is a 16:9 (since most people have that ratio) This was just a quick little side project, gotta get back to schoolwork so I wont be working on it any more. [media]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/970/p21080.jpg[/media]

what's the ref?

[QUOTE=Detlef;29446873]what's the ref?[/QUOTE] Uuuh, dude it's the page king... [url]http://images.wikia.com/half-life/en/images/a/aa/Portal2_chell_new_outfit_glados.jpg[/url]

hey detlef [editline]26th April 2011[/editline] just a reminder, you know what i'm talking about.

lol no idea

[QUOTE=Detlef;29440391]I feel really bad about not being able to fix stuff like this, the page is published so theres nothing I can do : ([/QUOTE] Don't feel bad, it still looks awesome. Just something to keep in mind for the next one, so it'll look more awesome :) I always enjoy seeing how a web comic's art and style tend to improve over it's life anyways. It's like a chronicle of an artists skill over a long period of time.

trying out my new tablet with some scribbles [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4e9TL.png[/IMG] [editline]26th April 2011[/editline] noo zeke why are you-

omg a girl

[QUOTE=Detlef;29447990]lol no idea[/QUOTE] you made me do this, detlef draw dutch from predator

nope

[QUOTE=Detlef;28878620] I don't do requests[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Detlef;29438628]that was a CHALLENGE!!! totally not the same[/QUOTE] i challenge you to draw dutch from predator