Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

This is gotta be a zombified hazmat dude or something like that. It's not completely finished. I'm going to draw a background and finish the guy, but before I'd like to ask if there are some serious mistakes in it [media]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/8964/unled8080.jpg[/media]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29528552][img_thumb]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/120/b/d/frank_zappa_by_chestymcgee-d3f8s0a.jpg[/img_thumb] [/QUOTE] Why does it hurt when I pee?

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;29531924]I think light from the sun through windows diverges rather than converges. Top 3 lines are correct, bottom 2 should follow them.[/QUOTE] Ouch, thanks for pointing that out.

I'm not entirely sure where this ended up. My initial thought was a Soviet spaceman crashing on an alien planet having to use primitive weapons to survive but then I gave him a shoulder holster and a laser Tokarev eh, so I guess he's a private detective in space or the Soviet Union's fiercest assassin shot out in space in order to assassinate Neil Armstrong. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13290261/spacedetectivewhatever.png[/img]

[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/final_art_to_size.jpg[/img_thumb] An example of some physical art I've done. I tend to do somewhat impressionistic urban environments. The work was about 8x24 inches, so keep that in mind.

[QUOTE=DanRatherman;29535268][media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/final_art_to_size.jpg[/media] An example of some physical art I've done. I tend to do somewhat impressionistic urban environments. The work was about 8x24 inches, so keep that in mind.[/QUOTE] [noparse][img_thumb][/img_thumb][/noparse]

[media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/766302/WPs/sporeyoreyore.png[/media] more hex

[media]http://i.imgur.com/tX3ts.png[/media] Been working on this over the past few days.

[QUOTE=BlueFlash;29539453][media]http://i.imgur.com/tX3ts.png[/media] Been working on this over the past few days.[/QUOTE] A little simple, and the perspective for the hole the wires come out of is too exaggerated (ei wrong imo) but I love how bright you managed to make the light look, it's a really cool effect.

[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;29539556]A little simple, and the perspective for the hole the wires come out of is too exaggerated (ei wrong imo) but I love how bright you managed to make the light look, it's a really cool effect.[/QUOTE] It was just a quick thing I was working on because I like figuring out how to create certain light effects in Flash. The hole bugged me too though. Any suggestions on how to fix it?

quich thing that takes a few days?

[QUOTE=BlueFlash;29539453][media]http://i.imgur.com/tX3ts.png[/media] Been working on this over the past few days.[/QUOTE] very poorly drawn and a bad use of gradients and i'd consider getting rid of the lines never add detail with lines. use the line tool to draw, but always do it in a way that the detail will remain once you've removed the lines

just can't get the shadows right dammit [media]http://gyazo.com/52b34c74bf1b1c47b1c8a1a5fbbb2b64.png[/media] [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] also where do I go from here?

it looks even more off than before

eh going to give the shadows one more try afterwards

Previews of my work [img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1304252655056850200.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1304252827086487900.jpg[/img] [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] THE ADVENTURES OF CAPTAIN BIRD

I think her legs are too short

[QUOTE=wewt!;29546014]I think her legs are too short[/QUOTE] She is supposed to be short, in fact.

You could probably find a better way to make her seem short though, her legs seem kind of detached.

IT'S HIS STYYYYLEEEEE

i maed a maP [img]http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/223410_10150181507782250_515442249_6918079_7743304_n.jpg[/img] still needs more developing, looks quite empty at the moment, but for tuesdays hand in it'll do!

[QUOTE=Autumn;29546195]i maed a maP [img_thumb]http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/223410_10150181507782250_515442249_6918079_7743304_n.jpg[/img_thumb] still needs more developing, looks quite empty at the moment, but for tuesdays hand in it'll do![/QUOTE] That's awesome.

[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;29546181]You could probably find a better way to make her seem short though, her legs seem kind of detached.[/QUOTE] yeah, now you say this, I corrige that. Thanks for point out that [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Detlef;29546187]IT'S HIS STYYYYLEEEEE[/QUOTE] derp herp Never said I was against criticism, but it doesn't mean I can't clarify some things

clean ur room

i will. in ~an hour once i've finished this (god awful) magazine

what are u calling it

i like Final Cut but then that's already an adobe program so... i'm not very good with words.

[QUOTE=Autumn;29546735]i like Final Cut but then that's already an [B]adobe [/B]program so... i'm not very good with words.[/QUOTE] [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4608952/site/emots/w-hat.gif[/img] [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4608952/AliceCat_nope.gif[/img]

just choose something ironic and meta like 'A Film Magazine'

[QUOTE=Autumn;29546735]i like Final Cut but then that's already an adobe program so... i'm not very good with words.[/QUOTE] what about Jump Cut or something i don't know [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] Out-Take [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] Wrap [editline]1st May 2011[/editline] Cinemaniac