Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition
3,002 replies, posted
we could at least have some rules about posting, like only post your own stuff and keep 3D, photography and music in their own sections
A video that I made for an awards evening at school:
[url]http://cl.ly/0U1Q2m1P2S1X040K3k02/IA_video_last.mp4[/url]
problems that I'm fixing:
it's too fast at the beginning
the mountain pops out of nowhere
there's supposed to be a sort of grunge vignette, just imagine that untill I get another 20 minute render out
This is very simple I wasn't going for flashy text or special effects, I just wanted to present these pictures nicely.
Also, how would one put videos on a portfolio that is to be brought to an interview? Do I screenshot the video at a cool frame and present it or what? (it's not a very serious interview, just for work experience)
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
aww crap quicktime player does not play .mp4s fuck you Apple
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
[media]http://vimeo.com/22743961[/media]
Damn, to late to break the rules with this one..
[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/112/3/8/animu_by_shether-d3el1gt.jpg[/img]
There are no rules anymore :/.
Also some..sublime being..partly inspired by Minecraft. I need to start taking photos in a better light.
[img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/112/e/e/numen_by_shether-d3el1w4.jpg[/img]
And a WIP habitat that hasn't kept up with the world..I see now that some things are slightly askew.
[img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/112/a/1/scebne_by_shether-d3el1m0.jpg[/img]
[IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/TJcBR.jpg[/IMG_thumb]
Found one of my drawings from a few years back
Could I request a vector from someone? Thanks :biggrin:
[QUOTE=JoeyZ;29354552][IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/TJcBR.jpg[/IMG_thumb]
Found one of my drawings from a few years back
Could I request a vector from someone? Thanks :biggrin:[/QUOTE]
Thats actually really cool!
[QUOTE=Codesta;29357458]Haters gonna hate.
[img_thumb]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/7/7/77853ca6f7113c49a4ac7972df8157b1-d3elivi.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Get that out of this thread
[img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/112/4/a/kevad_by_shether-d3ely65.jpg[/img]
Dale Woostinct, Spring 22.04.11
What'sa hapnin on his face?
You mean there's no mouth?
[QUOTE=fishsticks;29359650][img_thumb]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/112/4/a/kevad_by_shether-d3ely65.jpg[/img_thumb]
Dale Woostinct, Spring 22.04.11[/QUOTE]
I like it, very cool. Nice use of pens.
[QUOTE=Codesta;29357458]Haters gonna hate.
[img_thumb]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/7/7/77853ca6f7113c49a4ac7972df8157b1-d3elivi.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Good job, that actually looks very nice. A few things, though:
- The back left (our perspective) leg isn't angled correctly. In fact, all of the hooves look kind of misaligned in relation to where the ground should be.
- Are the overlapping lines at the end of the mane/tail a style thing? They don't look right.
- You seem to have differing light sources - ear vs. mane shadow vs. wings - this isn't very noticeable, but it still seems off.
- Also, I think the wing shading could be a little less prominent. That's not really how they look normally; the front part of the wings wouldn't spread that far outwards to make such a large shadow.
- No mouth. Is she stuck in the matrix or something? Or was that just intended?
But anyways, I think it looks well done. The anatomy is a ton better than a lot of other pictures I've seen. How did you make it? And did you base it off something specific?
Aside from that, I made a title logo for a game that I hope to actually make; any opinions? The bee is based on an inverted version of the radiation hazard symbol. Dealing with Photoshop's path system is incredibly obnoxious.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/v0wN8.png[/IMG]
Made this really quick for no reason, I think it turned out pretty...interesting. Media'd for size and high levels of informative.
lol woops
[media]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/649/gorka.jpg[/media]
EDIT: Also Protractor, I rated your critique funny, the logo is pretty sweet. It cuts into the M a little too much but other than that it's pretty good.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;29361652]
EDIT: Also Protractor, I rated your critique funny, the logo is pretty sweet. It cuts into the M a little too much but other than that it's pretty good.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, you're right. I moved the M over a little bit; it will be different when I actually use it.
Nice Eye of Sauron. I'll just be staying awake until Monday now.
Whoops, accidental page king. Have a font.
[IMG]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/269/8/7/pilgrimage_by_protractorninja-d2zkgkv.png[/IMG]
I made that to replicate the font that was used first on the Scott Pilgrim books, since I couldn't find it. Right after I was done I found out that the official one was [URL="http://www.dafont.com/dusty.font"]Dusty.[/URL] Oh well. [URL="http://protractorninja.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2zkgkv"]Here's the dA download link[/URL] if you want it. There's a "pure" version (no shapes, just squares) that works well if you're into the pixel art look.
i dont get the joke
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
on the last page, before i was ninja'd
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29354105]A video that I made for an awards evening at school:
[url]http://cl.ly/0U1Q2m1P2S1X040K3k02/IA_video_last.mp4[/url]
problems that I'm fixing:
it's too fast at the beginning
the mountain pops out of nowhere
there's supposed to be a sort of grunge vignette, just imagine that untill I get another 20 minute render out
This is very simple I wasn't going for flashy text or special effects, I just wanted to present these pictures nicely.
Also, how would one put videos on a portfolio that is to be brought to an interview? Do I screenshot the video at a cool frame and present it or what? (it's not a very serious interview, just for work experience)
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
aww crap quicktime player does not play .mp4s fuck you Apple
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
[media]http://vimeo.com/22743961[/media][/QUOTE]
Hmm, paused at 0:40 by coincidence, thought that kid was going to die...
Anyhow, I like the text and the white background. Looks cool.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29362826]i dont get the joke[/QUOTE]
Most of the joke is just that I did it for no reason at all, I just had the idea "I should do one of those things where it zooms in on a word for like 6 panels" picked a random post, and took it from there.
Finally, weekend's here, will be able to make my referenceless face drawing recording.
[QUOTE=theLazyLion;29365472]Finally, weekend's here, will be able to make my referenceless face drawing recording.[/QUOTE]
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XwamV1fbYQk[/media]
Chesty, your ref is stretched. This is how it should be: [url]http://wallpapergravity.com/wallpapers2/856/856306.jpg[/url]
wow bummer
All I want to draw now is MOPP guys :(
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/Cleanup%20guy.jpg[/img]
[editline]22nd April 2011[/editline]
SOO MUCH more details needed.
He looks fat.
Like the limbs are all really small compared to the torso.
Fair enough.
Not to be the immature one but I saw a massive, most likely violence educed, erection.
Well he's got really baggy pants actually.
It's like the MO of the military one size fits all... not really but here you go.
[editline]23rd April 2011[/editline]
Fuck just realized I saved it as a JPG and didn't save it as an XCF.
thank god for back up.
