Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

[QUOTE=Detlef;29725978]problem with that is that it's traced from another poster, so that would be impossible without actually having to draw the silhouettes[/QUOTE] That doesn't seem like too bad of a situation. It's just a little more time consuming and difficult.

[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;29725719]Why don't you redo the pose, and exchange authenticity for not looking like some mutated penis monster? Perhaps have the kid standing next to her and just holding hands or something like that? Would be a lot easier to tell what it is if you did.[/QUOTE] i dont see a mutilated penis monster at all

[QUOTE=Toastador;29726594]That doesn't seem like too bad of a situation. It's just a little more time consuming and difficult.[/QUOTE] it is kinda hard if u cant draw

[QUOTE=Detlef;29727009]it is kinda hard if u cant draw[/QUOTE] This is true, but Rusty is a pretty cool kid (or at least I think so).

u could make the kid a different color too

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29726999]i dont see a mutilated penis monster at all[/QUOTE] For those who don't know of the original poster, it's hard to tell what is going on. Either differentiate between the two people with a slight hue change, or throw some outlines down as someone else did for the gun.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29725978]problem with that is that it's traced from another poster, so that would be impossible without actually having to draw the silhouettes[/QUOTE] Oh okay, I thought it was just based off the original poster. In that case it's a different ball of wax really. [QUOTE=Rusty100;29726999]i dont see a mutilated penis monster at all[/QUOTE] I don't mean to offend, I just vaguely remember someone saying something of that nature and decided to run with it. I think it's looking really nice actually, other than the confusing outlines.

Rusty, I think something like this would solve the silhouette readability issue: [IMG]http://imageflock.com/img/1304991299.png[/IMG] [editline]9:38[/editline] except done better

[QUOTE=Toastador;29729852]Rusty, I think something like this would solve the silhouette readability issue: [img_thumb]http://imageflock.com/img/1304991299.png[/img_thumb] [editline]9:38[/editline] except done better[/QUOTE] Fantastic!

[QUOTE=Toastador;29729852]Rusty, I think something like this would solve the silhouette readability issue: [img_thumb]http://imageflock.com/img/1304991299.png[/img_thumb] [editline]9:38[/editline] except done better[/QUOTE] best suggestion so far

Made this as a tshirt request a year ago it was the fist thing that I made in Illustrator. Just thought you guys might want to see it [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/prefect-tshirt-design-small.png[/img]

ok ok ok okokokok ok [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/aliens%20shadowed.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29732919]ok ok ok okokokok ok [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/aliens%20shadowed.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Yeah, much better

THIS TIME, IT'S WAR [editline]10th May 2011[/editline] am i allowed to change the tagline because the original doesn't have a comma but i feel like it makes much more sense with a comma

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29733011]THIS TIME, IT'S WAR [editline]10th May 2011[/editline] am i allowed to change the tagline because the original doesn't have a comma but i feel like it makes much more sense with a comma[/QUOTE] yeah a comma fits

even an ellipsis would work better than no punctuation at all [editline]10th May 2011[/editline] damn u james cameron

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29733067]even an ellipsis would work better than no punctuation at all [editline]10th May 2011[/editline] damn u james cameron[/QUOTE] what next? Requiem for a dream?

whatever i get an idea for

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29733114]whatever i get an idea for[/QUOTE] it's begging for a revamp: [img]http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Qm9Cekv5Jj4/TEdK8g-bGMI/AAAAAAAAAgM/YXkcP3XiIc0/s1600/Requiem_for_a_dream.jpg[/img] but I'll leave you to inspire yourself

[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/better4.png[/img]

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[QUOTE=Rusty100;29732919]ok ok ok okokokok ok [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/aliens%20shadowed.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I don't like the "this time..." font.

[QUOTE=PLing;29734112]I don't like the "this time..." font.[/QUOTE] Really? I like it, what font is is

i like it too its Futura [editline]10th May 2011[/editline] how can u not like futura

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29732919][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/aliens%20shadowed.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Rusty100;29733114]whatever i get an idea for[/QUOTE] Wait, what? It's done? Looks half-finished. The alien looks like a messed up attempt to detail the mech, really hard to even notice. The mech is completly detail-less making it look like goddamn Optimus Prime. The heavy detail on the characters contra no detail at all to the surroundings except for the mech arms looks like shit. I understand the whole focus on the important people and giving a depth of field fog effect. But come on.

Futura is pretty gross

[QUOTE=dgg;29734737]Wait, what? It's done? Looks half-finished. The alien looks like a messed up attempt to detail the mech, really hard to even notice. The mech is completly detail-less making it look like goddamn Optimus Prime. The heavy detail on the characters contra no detail at all to the surroundings except for the mech arms looks like shit. I understand the whole focus on the important people and giving a depth of field fog effect. But come on.[/QUOTE] unlike u i dont want to work on every single thing for a million years before i can be happy with it i really like what i've done, some agree, others still pick it apart i think it's finished and i'm very happy with

I like the simple style too. Whatever Rusty has learned from this poster he can put into future ones. That's how u progress u know

Rusty has a point, you tend to over do things

working on something too long is bad