Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition
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[QUOTE=Barnhouse;29734747]Futura is pretty gross[/QUOTE]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/futuraaa.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29734850]Rusty has a point, you tend to over do things[/QUOTE]
What I tend to do got nothing to do with anything.
That poster is the worst one I've seen him make yet.
Nothing but the characters looks finished, at all.
its a shame u think its my worst because its one of my favourite
[QUOTE=dgg;29735020]What I tend to do got nothing to do with anything.
That poster is the worst one I've seen him make yet.
Nothing but the characters looks finished, at all.[/QUOTE]
What don't you like the eggs look awesome
Optimus prime looks awesome
and the queen is damn creepy
wow typing like you is really weird
I like the poster, but you should give it some texturing and grunge it up a little for that real vintage screenprint look.
i always take cc from u guys and fix stuff according to what you say and take ur input on board but basically saying its the worst thing ive ever done when i was really happy with it kind of sucks dgg
wtf man
[editline]10th May 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=Scotchair;29735086]I like the poster, but you should give it some texturing and grunge it up a little for that real vintage screenprint look.[/QUOTE]
do u think it needs more grunge? it does have a fair amount in some areas but i can always add more
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29735080]What don't you like the eggs look awesome
Optimus prime looks awesome
and the queen is damn creepy
wow typing like you is really weird[/QUOTE]
I didn't say anything about the eggs, they are ok as they are.
The problem is that it looks like Optimus Prime.
The queen is damn invisible and when you notice it's the queen it's like "Why the fuck is it still so hard to see that it is the queen?"
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735089]i always take cc from u guys and fix stuff according to what you say and take ur input on board but basically saying its the worst thing ive ever done when i was really happy with it kind of sucks dgg
wtf man[/QUOTE]
Different taste. It's already clear as a day that you and me have very different taste in most art.
not enough rats for dgg
[QUOTE=dgg;29735104]I didn't say anything about the eggs, they are ok as they are.
The problem is that it looks like Optimus Prime.
The queen is damn invisible and when you notice it's the queen it's like "Why the fuck is it still so hard to see that it is the queen?"
Different taste. It's already clear as a day that you and me have very different taste in most art.[/QUOTE]
idk i dont have any problems seeing the queen have u considered your screen brightness may be a little low or something. because for me it's there clear as day, i can't miss it
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735089]i always take cc from u guys and fix stuff according to what you say and take ur input on board but basically saying its the worst thing ive ever done when i was really happy with it kind of sucks dgg
wtf man
[editline]10th May 2011[/editline]
do u think it needs more grunge? it does have a fair amount in some areas but i can always add more[/QUOTE]
no more grunge, your other posters hide in grunge but this one shows off your talent without looking cheap per say
[QUOTE=Detlef;29735122]not enough rats for dgg[/QUOTE]
Rats, I knew you would bring that up.
and the queen to me seems more for atmosphere she doesn't really strike me as the main focus of the poster therefore it's ok that you can't really see her
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735126]idk i dont have any problems seeing the queen have u considered your screen brightness may be a little low or something. because for me it's there clear as day, i can't miss it[/QUOTE]
You can easily see the shape of the queen. It is seeing that is actually is the queen and not odd shapes of darker blue that is the problem.
When I first saw it I thought you tried adding detail to Optimus Prime and couldn't figure out why the fuck you had two beams sticking up to his shoulders.
But then you also had the head being cut off by his other shoulder so it is easier to distingush now than then. But it is the whole top of the head being just big shapes of dark blue and then the mouth tucked down where the eggs are. That is how she is, but it just doesn't look right in single-colour. To me.
I definitely see the appeal in the poster so there really is no reason to edit it if you are happy with it. But to me it looks half-done.
ok is this better dgg?
[img]http://i.imgur.com/uUPA8.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735211]ok is this better dgg?
[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/uUPA8.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Pretty good. But I think you should have "Aliens" over it as it's kinda hard to figure out which one of the movies it is without having seen it before. Pereferably have a gradient on the text and give it a 7 pixel border or something.
Also, the rat kinda breaks the border thing, whilst I think it's good to be unique and all and literally break the borders I don't think this is one of those times. At least not for the cheese, maybe keep the rat head.
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735211]ok is this better dgg?
[img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/uUPA8.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
ok now post this 27 more times each time with something slightly changed
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29735231]ok now post this 27 more times each time with something slightly changed[/QUOTE]
You need to stay true to the original.
16 posts.
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29735231]ok now post this 27 more times each time with something slightly changed[/QUOTE]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/N943h.jpg[/img]
[indent][indent][indent][indent][indent][indent][indent]RATS[/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent]
THIS TIME, IT'S CHANGED SLIGHTLY
[indent][indent][indent][indent][indent]directed by dgg[/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent]
its the star wars of rat movies
is there gonna be a 2012 rerelease with updated rat cgi??
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29733114]whatever i get an idea for[/QUOTE]
[img_thumb]http://www.impawards.com/1982/posters/blade_runner.jpg[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://www.impawards.com/1982/posters/blade_runner_ver6.jpg[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://www.jdmfilmreviews.com/images/blade-runner-movie-poster1.jpg[/img_thumb]
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735291]its the star wars of rat movies
is there gonna be a 2012 rerelease with updated rat cgi??[/QUOTE]
no not updated only sliiiightly changed fur!
[QUOTE=strider;29735313]no not updated only sliiiightly changed fur![/QUOTE]
Episode 3 there's now a woman!
[QUOTE=Rusty100;29735291]its the star wars of rat movies
is there gonna be a 2012 rerelease with updated rat cgi??[/QUOTE]
blu ray version gets released with all original versions
and then 3d rerelease
These are just some scribblings that have occupied my Philosophy sessions. Enjoy.
[media]http://i.imgur.com/RtA4i.jpg
[url]http://i.imgur.com/NMWg5.jpg[/url][/media]
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29735414]blu ray version gets released with all original versions
and then 3d rerelease[/QUOTE]
The directors cut will be an entire DVD
-snip-
[QUOTE=Dubious George;29735428]These are just some scribblings that have occupied my Philosophy sessions. Enjoy.
[media]http://i.imgur.com/RtA4i.jpg
[url]http://i.imgur.com/NMWg5.jpg[/url][/media][/QUOTE]
i don't normally like this sort of stuff but it looks so neat and tidy and the lines are cool that i can't help but like it
[QUOTE=Dubious George;29735484]The Game has Changed - Daft Punk (Tron OST)[/QUOTE]
what
