Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition
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[img]http://i.imgur.com/DPZIb.png[/img]
good but you need to go deeper
I'm just trying to work on facial features
so as long as he's recognizable I'm happy
[QUOTE=Heroms;29745007][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/DPZIb.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Nostrils are really flat on the top and look like theyre fused to the side of the bridge of the nose.
it was the goatee
if he shaved it off he would look identical to literally every white guy on earth
[QUOTE=Heroms;29745007][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/DPZIb.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
His eyelashes are way too thinned out, and the values at the corner of his left eye (our right) is far too dark, it looks like he has a lump.
Alright I've decided to start working on figure drawing, so everyone, please shower me with as many helpful figure drawing tutorials and resources you can. And if anyone has any tips or advice on how to go about learning the art of figure drawing then that would be much appreciated.
[url]http://alexhays.com/loomis/[/url]
And whatever that website was that had a bunch of poses to pick from
[QUOTE=Heroms;29746972][url]http://alexhays.com/loomis/[/url]
And whatever that website was that had a bunch of poses to pick from[/QUOTE]
ye thinking about Posemaniacs?
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/bda.png[/img]
I'll get there... eventually...
his legs look short to me
but i don't know anything about anatomy so yeah
They are, I'd fix them but there's no point in that since i'd rather not post little fixes over and over again.
Decided to do a little sketch of GLaDOS:
[IMG]http://gyazo.com/34a10689b1fc3725f18f4f96bd7f2b2b.png[/IMG]
No way to scan, so the lighting is terrible, and the graphite glares in places. Plus it's noisy, but a close up to give you an idea of detail:
[IMG]http://gyazo.com/e006f7096cd9c9e0435be9e5e749e296.png[/IMG]
It's staring at me..
:(
[img]http://imageshack.us/m/706/3874/02022009.jpg[/img]
What I'm working on for TAFE (college)
My 2nd ceramic piece :) I actually half glazed it after this photo was taken, a lovely light turquoise underglaze, painted so it looks like it drips down the spiral handle, the same colour on the inside, and a pale brown colour for the rest.
I'm going to make a couple more different ones of these to make it an interesting little set.
Lemme know what you guys think :)
Uhm TAFE isn't equivalent to college
University is equivalent but not Tafe :x
For a game I'm working on.
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/menu_watermark.png[/img]
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;29756289]For a game I'm working on.
[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/menu_watermark.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Cutscene or concept art
[editline]11th May 2011[/editline]
If it's a cutscene then it looks ok, but there needs to be more people to give it the army feel. However, if it's art i.e. not going to be animated then it needs a lot of work
[QUOTE=Dalto11;29750388]Decided to do a little sketch of GLaDOS:
[img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/34a10689b1fc3725f18f4f96bd7f2b2b.png[/img_thumb]
No way to scan, so the lighting is terrible, and the graphite glares in places. Plus it's noisy, but a close up to give you an idea of detail:
[img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/e006f7096cd9c9e0435be9e5e749e296.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Why is the middle of the eye all the way over there?
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29756316]Cutscene or concept art
[editline]11th May 2011[/editline]
If it's a cutscene then it looks ok, but there needs to be more people to give it the army feel. However, if it's art i.e. not going to be animated then it needs a lot of work[/QUOTE]
It's going to be a background for the main menu. Little ships will be flying in the distance as the game's theme plays.
Also, how do you think I can improve it?
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;29756447]It's going to be a background for the main menu. Little ships will be flying in the distance as the game's theme plays.
Also, how do you think I can improve it?[/QUOTE]
I find the soldier's heads really annoying for some reason, plus there needs to be more silhouettes like a lot more.
tip: if it's going to be animated (assuming it's not a flash game) take the smoke, put it into after effects --> liquify and animate the liquefication to make the smoke look like it's moving, unless don't want it as a movie
[QUOTE=Goodthief;29756531]I find the soldier's heads really annoying for some reason, plus there needs to be more silhouettes like a lot more.
tip: if it's going to be animated (assuming it's not a flash game) take the smoke, put it into after effects --> liquify and animate the liquefication to make the smoke look like it's moving, unless don't want it as a movie[/QUOTE]
That sounds a little bit CPU intensive, having to render that. My idea was to have a separate layer that is 50% opaque go over the existing smoke.
And if I varied the value in their heads, would it seem a little less annoying? Is it the shape of their heads? the flatness?
Thank you for the CC by the way
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The game runs on Java
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;29756591]That sounds a little bit CPU intensive, having to render that. My idea was to have a separate layer that is 50% opaque go over the existing smoke.
And if I varied the value in their heads, would it seem a little less annoying? Is it the shape of their heads? the flatness?
Thank you for the CC by the way
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The game runs on Java[/QUOTE]
if it's pre rendered in like a movie it might not be but then again i'm not sure if java can display movies in that way.
About the head thing, it's just those 3 red dot's they are really distracting and repetitive try and make them a bit more subtle
[QUOTE=asdfghjkl';29756427]Why is the middle of the eye all the way over there?[/QUOTE]
Her eye is over to the left a bit, not quite as much as that though.
[img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110421152406/half-life/en/images/d/de/P2_glados.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/charcldsmall1.jpg[/img]
some charcoal work..i know im bad at it :geno:
How do you guys do digital painting with a reference? Do you like have photoshop on one half of the screen and the reference photo on the other? or do you switch between the photoshop and the reference windows? I wish I had a dual monitor setup or something.
[QUOTE=Barnhouse;29759587]How do you guys do digital painting with a reference? Do you like have photoshop on one half of the screen and the reference photo on the other? or do you switch between the photoshop and the reference windows? I wish I had a dual monitor setup or something.[/QUOTE]
I really need a second monitor but yeah making the photoshop window a bit smaller. Imma buy one as soon as I get monies.
[QUOTE=Barnhouse;29759587]How do you guys do digital painting with a reference? Do you like have photoshop on one half of the screen and the reference photo on the other? or do you switch between the photoshop and the reference windows? I wish I had a dual monitor setup or something.[/QUOTE]
i've got a dual monitor setup... but it's nothing fancy like some people get with double 24" screens or something like that. i've got my fancy 22" as my main thing but the second monitor is just an old 4:3 piece of junk.
that said, it is the most invaluable piece of junk in the world
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