Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

Sorry about the first one I'm still working on it. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/guy.jpg [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/hermmamfoj.jpg[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/PLE%20SURVIVOR.jpg[/url][/media] [editline]12th May 2011[/editline] tagged because I can't be arsed to resize and junk.

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29783212]Sorry about the first one I'm still working on it. [editline]12th May 2011[/editline] tagged because I can't be arsed to resize and junk.[/QUOTE] Please resize your images The anatomy and proportions are bad. You should draw using a reference (which is a bit hypocritical of me to say).

FFFUUUU kay. [editline]12th May 2011[/editline] damn page king. [editline]12th May 2011[/editline] Done. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/guy.jpg [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/hermmamfoj.jpg[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/PLE%20SURVIVOR.jpg[/url][/media]

Thanks :buddy: from last page: [quote]The anatomy and proportions are bad. You should draw using a reference (which is a bit hypocritical of me to say).[/quote]

Is there any tutorial for how to color a grayscale image?

[QUOTE=wewt!;29783393]Thanks :buddy: from last page:[/QUOTE] Not exactly going for realism just my weird art style I've developed over the years. People are going to laugh.

It's my style :v:

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29783506]Not exactly going for realism just my weird art style I've developed over the years. People are going to laugh.[/QUOTE] Yes, they are. Don't fool yourself, you have the potential to improve a lot. Here's what could help, go to this website [url]http://www.posemaniacs.com/[/url] Draw a ton of these, don't focus on the detail, focus on the shape/silhouette.

I'm gonna go ahead and use your link, wewt. Thanks.

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;29783625]It's my style :v:[/QUOTE] knew it.

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;29783625]It's my style :v:[/QUOTE] STYYLEEEEEEEEEE*

aaaaaAAAAAAAA never blame poor anatomy on your style. Seriously don't sink to that level

Damn my art teacher said they were fine! apparently a masters make you suck.

also can we have all the useful links and tutorials listed in some post (OP maybe?) because it's not that easy to find stuff that I forgot to save :saddowns: I mean stuff like the Loomis stuff, posemaniacs, [url=http://www.theartofanatomy.com/phpBB3/viewforum.php?f=3&sid=576965034832a15f6be6304f8c178a32]this place[/url] etc. [editline]13th May 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Back_Slash;29784361]Damn my art teacher said they were fine! apparently a masters make you suck.[/QUOTE] his job is also to encourage you

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29784361]Damn my art teacher said they were fine! apparently a masters make you suck.[/QUOTE] Your art teacher is lying. That's not a fucking style. That's just bad drawing. You need to work on your anatomy a lot more and stop shading everything with your normal hand movement (everything bends in a half-circle).

I told him to give honest crit. He does that for his AP kids. Ah well fuck it. Back to workkkkk.

Why are you skipping over advice and instead focusing on a response that you expected anyway :raise:

mkay.

that's not an answer, wth

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29784408]I told him to give honest crit. He does that for his AP kids. Ah well fuck it. Back to workkkkk.[/QUOTE] sorry to say it but your art teacher sucks. Don't worry tho you don't need a teacher to get good at art when u have the internet. Look up tutorials and most of all draw real things so u get how they work or else you're just guessing

thanks guys

Or is it.

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29784475]Or is it.[/QUOTE] god will you stop jerking around and go draw something

[QUOTE=Detlef;29784463]sorry to say it but your art teacher sucks. Don't worry tho you don't need a teacher to get good at art when u have the internet. Look up tutorials and most of all draw real things so u get how they work or else you're just guessing[/QUOTE] I'm so stupid I have leatherneck magazine and it has great ref but I don't use it

Do you even want to learn. doesn't seem like it

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29784475]Or is it.[/QUOTE] Never mind then.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29784528]Do you even want to learn. doesn't seem like it[/QUOTE] I've been trying my hardest :saddowns: Gonna draw now. [editline]12th May 2011[/editline] hardest is not good enough.

Doodles on the bus: [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2ilyh5i.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2zghyiu.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2aahn5s.jpg[/IMG] Graphite: [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2u9jnzp.jpg[/IMG] I haven't had much time to practice lately, I'm actually studying for a math test right now. only the portrait is actually from today.

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/31d88de555f45e7d3db9819a147ed9dd[/url] Just a little looping animation I made for fun, messing with motion tweens on bevels to fake light. The angle of the bevel probably isn't right, but it's not something I plan on doing anything with.

the ground being unaffected doesn't help sell it