Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

Next thread title: Don't believe Detlef's praise [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] anyways, i'm drawing something for a client, hence the shitty watermark [img]http://gyazo.com/71e26ea72309f59fdc70ab04385786a8.png[/img] [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] should i keep the iris or lose em

[QUOTE=Stathis;29395674]world, oh world why am I so alone please make a stop, please hold on the time is ticking on and on everybody's [b]RUSSIAN![/b][/QUOTE] You mentioned ruskians?

I'll leave this here [img]http://goo.gl/vt4XH[/img]

[QUOTE=Ruski v2.0;29399459]You mentioned ruskians?[/QUOTE] yeah it's like friday today erryday

[QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;29399056]Next thread title: Don't believe Detlef's praise [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] anyways, i'm drawing something for a client, hence the shitty watermark [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/71e26ea72309f59fdc70ab04385786a8.png[/img_thumb] [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] should i keep the iris or lose em[/QUOTE] i mean im paranoid but hoyl fuck this is ridiculous, stop with the fucking watermarks noone wants to plagarize your shit and even if they do you got the proof on your goddamn side

Here is my latest piece of art: [img]http://www.facepunch.com/image.php?u=63972&dateline=1260654586[/img]

oh fuck oh shit oh fuck [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] there problem solved steal my intellectual property now bitches

[QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;29399056]anyways, i'm drawing something for a client, hence the shitty watermark[/QUOTE] not to be incredibly and horrendously rude, but I am in search of money and I'm interested to know how someone of your... artistic calibre, is capable of obtaining "clients"

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;29400897]not to be incredibly and horrendously rude, but I am in search of money and I'm interested to know how someone of your... artistic calibre, is capable of obtaining "clients"[/QUOTE] it's supposed to be stylized

thanks now you have cleared everything up

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[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;29400753]oh fuck oh shit oh fuck [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] there problem solved steal my intellectual property now bitches[/QUOTE] I've been working on this for a week [img]http://static.facepunch.com/fp/avatar_banned.png[/img]

Ive been spending a bit of time working on my Album artwork and this is what I've come up with so far for both the First and the second Album. Front: [IMG]http://i929.photobucket.com/albums/ad140/Loki_zr/DSCN0182.jpg[/IMG] Rear: [IMG]http://i929.photobucket.com/albums/ad140/Loki_zr/DSCN0183.jpg[/IMG] Spine: [IMG]http://i929.photobucket.com/albums/ad140/Loki_zr/DSCN0184.jpg[/IMG] Inside and Disc: [IMG]http://i929.photobucket.com/albums/ad140/Loki_zr/DSCN0185.jpg[/IMG] What do you think? The quality of the print's is nothing short of crappy, but it's the best my standard printer can do on plain paper.. I dont plan on eventually getting some professional prints for a couple of exclusive physical copies, But they will have to wait for a long time...

very generic and badly composed i do not like them at all

it looks like the 90's european hardcore scene arose from the dead and pooped on your cd

cool, so you dont like them. What would you do to fix them?

Yes you deserve some elaboration. I'm not sure what kind of music you're making, I assume something like techno or other electronic music because of the style. But the colors and effects going on just look like something from way back when. And because of that it just looks cheap. The actual logo for your name isn't that bad but because of the cheap bevel and emboss kinda effect going on it just looks shitty. The colors are all over the place, the right one on the second row is just terrible because of the random blue red and green graphics used against a way too busy white background. It's just like you used some random colors on top of random (not good looking) graphics for everything. The one with the color scheme and layout I like the most is the one on the left on the second row (the one with the black background). The logo and it's effects look quite okay and there's not too much shit happening all over the place (which is the case with the rest of the covers). But still the background's way too busy. So basically what I'm trying to say is don't use random colors, effects and graphics all over the place and there's no shame in keeping it a bit more simple.

if I copypasted my little essay here, would you care to go through it and say how you like? It will probably remain untouched as I just completed it, but if there are typos or anythings like that, it would be awesome if you checked for them. the subject is food cultures, so, should I post it for you to review? im finnish myself, and the essay is for english course

[QUOTE=Gekkosan;29402933]if I copypasted my little essay here, would you care to go through it and say how you like? It will probably remain untouched as I just completed it, but if there are typos or anythings like that, it would be awesome if you checked for them. the subject is food cultures, so, should I post it for you to review? im finnish myself, and the essay is for english course[/QUOTE] This thread is not for non artistic homework dude

[QUOTE=Detlef;29402970]This thread is not for non artistic homework dude[/QUOTE] so your answer is no? because i don't feel like making a thread for my homework in general discussion or even in the chat threads area, let alone the fast threads. it's brief, and.. it's artistic :v: very much so

finish your homework yourself [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] and it's not creative work so it doesn't belong here

it's finished. i just thought some might wanna review it here or wherever. where would it belong then?

I dunno, find out yourself [editline]24th April 2011[/editline] just not here

fine

[QUOTE=asdfghjkl';29390692]Self-Portraits? Good to see you trying something new. [img_thumb] Just kidding, don't kill me [/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I'm willing to do a Proper 100% Brush Detlef Approved selfportrait if detlef makes one too. And lazylion. And everyone else. Maybe I can get LORD M to do one too. :v:

I'm up for that challenge

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29402164]very generic and badly composed i do not like them at all[/QUOTE] I disagree, as far as album art goes it's dead on the money

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/766302/1/breathdude.gif[/img] Starting out in Flash, any tips would help immensely

Don't do stick figure fight animations.

That helps immensely