Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

Way to copy pasta the whole play of Hamlet.

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/766302/WPs/jeffgoldblum.png[/img] Messing around with zBrush

[QUOTE=Superkusokao;29877825][img_thumb]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/136/b/2/tron___tron_samurai_2_by_superkusokao-d3gigd7.png[/img_thumb] Did this in about 30-60 minutes during class today. Tron Samurai aw yeah.[/QUOTE] 1680x1050 plz

[QUOTE=Headcrab54;29879115][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/766302/WPs/jeffgoldblum.png[/img_thumb] Messing around with zBrush[/QUOTE] This is shit. Reasons for being shit: its 3d its not even good 3d its not textured its not rendered it has poly errors everywhere all you did was get a brush and pull it in random directions this is an ms paint drawing of the 3d world. edit: You can change the picture and keep the same location, but the content is still shit lol!!!

[QUOTE=torturedbabycow;29878163]Wall of fucking text.[/QUOTE] Good Lord, seriously? And your post just gave my scroll wheel cancer, thanks.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;29879430]This is shit.[/QUOTE] What a helpful comment, care to elaborate?

check again.

[QUOTE=Headcrab54;29879508]What a helpful comment, care to elaborate?[/QUOTE] are you serious, did you really want criticism on that?

[QUOTE=Headcrab54;29879508]What a helpful comment, care to elaborate?[/QUOTE] I don't think anything would have such an unfortunate muscle structure

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;29877384]COMMENTS AND CRITICISM PLEASE [img_thumb]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5598/img0207g.jpg[/img_thumb] Done with charcoal in like 6 hours. 20 minutes for the sketch all the rest for values and shit lmao. [editline]16th May 2011[/editline] I need a freaking scanner.[/QUOTE] I love the composition. I'm a bit confused by the stripy bit to the left of the cat's head, I assume it's part of the cat but which part?? And the dog's head could perhaps stand out a bit more. I'm not the biggest fan of charcoal, I'd like to see you do something in pencil. That said, it's still awesome. Rock on

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;29877384]COMMENTS AND CRITICISM PLEASE [img_thumb]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5598/img0207g.jpg[/img_thumb] Done with charcoal in like 6 hours. 20 minutes for the sketch all the rest for values and shit lmao. [editline]16th May 2011[/editline] I need a freaking scanner.[/QUOTE] first: D'AAAAaaaw second: the dog looks a bit flat, especially where his ear is [editline]17th May 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Oblivious1;29879044]Here's my god awful piece of work. [sp]It has such a disturbingly close resemblance compared to my other even more god awful self portrayal[/sp] [media]http://i639.photobucket.com/albums/uu119/ryanwarguy/Betterselfportrayal.png[/media] And Rusty, I feel I can say it does accurately portray me. Without my glasses.[/QUOTE] You can see some improvement. What stood out the most was the lack of detail on the eyes. You should draw a bunch of these, at various angles and references.

[QUOTE=Mr. Kobayashi;29870473]Thanks [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/W85Cg.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I'd recommend something more like this: [img]http://imageshack.us/m/508/8625/unled1kq.png[/img] just a quickie in like a min or 2.

[QUOTE=Oblivious1;29879044]Here's my god awful piece of work. [sp]It has such a disturbingly close resemblance compared to my other even more god awful self portrayal[/sp] [media]http://i639.photobucket.com/albums/uu119/ryanwarguy/Betterselfportrayal.png[/media] And Rusty, I feel I can say it does accurately portray me. Without my glasses.[/QUOTE] Why did you fully outline the lips? Why :saddowns:

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;29879430]This is shit. Reasons for being shit: its 3d its not even good 3d its not textured its not rendered it has poly errors everywhere all you did was get a brush and pull it in random directions this is an ms paint drawing of the 3d world. edit: You can change the picture and keep the same location, but the content is still shit lol!!![/QUOTE] wow, if you edit a post all the replies will update. That's cool. [QUOTE=Maya2008;29881305]I'd recommend something more like this: [img_thumb]http://imageshack.us/m/508/8625/unled1kq.png[/img_thumb] just a quickie in like a min or 2.[/QUOTE] That is way better, I like the font and the watermark in the background :v: is the font 28 days later?

[QUOTE=Goodthief;29882469]wow, if you edit a post all the replies will update. That's cool.[/QUOTE] aw but now you can't quote people's embarrassing posts before they edit them

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;29882512]aw but now you can't quote people's embarrassing posts before they edit them[/QUOTE] It's still the same, the picture's from my dropbox, so it updates automatically when it changes. And Jesus Christ, people. It's not finished, and if it's so terrible how about giving some actually helpful advice?

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It's that time of the day again, to post my junk on the internet D: [img]http://media.moddb.com/images/groups/1/6/5192/a_gravity_beyond.jpg[/img] The text is pretty dull since I wrote it in the middle of the night, but oh well.

Um cool i guess, but your hand writing is a pain to read, use text. And the joke isn't funny, like at all.

[QUOTE=Maya2008;29881305]I'd recommend something more like this: [img_thumb]http://imageshack.us/m/508/8625/unled1kq.png[/img_thumb] just a quickie in like a min or 2.[/QUOTE] don't use that font it is ugly and overused if you want to go for that grunge look just use a good looking font and create the grunge effect yourself

Helter Skelter. [img]http://gyazo.com/e3d7dd2f9c67ebc04dddf357fcc1a9c2.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Headcrab54;29882615]It's still the same, the picture's from my dropbox, so it updates automatically when it changes. And Jesus Christ, people. It's not finished, and if it's so terrible how about giving some actually helpful advice?[/QUOTE] go to the 3D thread, this is for art. sure Zbrush is more painting than modeling but they know more about how to use it. Also, what is your reference / what is it supposed to be?

[QUOTE=ZenX2;29882330]Why did you fully outline the lips? Why :saddowns:[/QUOTE] Because if I showed you the reference, you'd think so too. [editline]17th May 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=wewt!;29880889]You can see some improvement. What stood out the most was the lack of detail on the eyes. You should draw a bunch of these, at various angles and references.[/QUOTE] If you mean the eyes on its own excluding eye lids, the eyes do look like that, it's not brown, blue or green, just black. If you include the eye lids, I have been drawing different types like stereotypical asian to cute etcetera. The eyes are actually like that, I'm not making any character here, I'm trying to portray someone as accurate as possible. I'll post the ref later. [editline]17th May 2011[/editline] Here's the ref. [media]http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/224150_10150245065733343_590503342_9005034_6732865_n.jpg[/media]

[QUOTE=radu_iceman;29883438]It's that time of the day again, to post my junk on the internet D: [img_thumb]http://media.moddb.com/images/groups/1/6/5192/a_gravity_beyond.jpg[/img_thumb] The text is pretty dull since I wrote it in the middle of the night, but oh well.[/QUOTE] I don't understand... It's like it was going to be a videogame or something where they get bored after the main quest and do something crazy, but they just meet a real life character and he suddenly has an epiphany that has real life consequences? I'm not understanding the connection. Is it just not funny? Why'd you throw ol' Isaac in there when it seemed like a videogame?

it's like Fag: ''Hey there I'm going to steal your girlfriend with this floating apple!'' Newton: ''Well I'm going to invent gravity now, fag'' so it's just not that funny

[QUOTE=radu_iceman;29883438]It's that time of the day again, to post my junk on the internet D: [img_thumb]http://media.moddb.com/images/groups/1/6/5192/a_gravity_beyond.jpg[/img_thumb] The text is pretty dull since I wrote it in the middle of the night, but oh well.[/QUOTE] holy king of unnecessary and long setup and unfunny punchline that isn't even a punchline

I'm bad with jokes, that's a fact, but the main idea behind the comic was that two video game characters reach the end of the game and have nothing to do, except steal Isaac's bag of money, but while doing so they actually inspire him to write the general laws of gravity. (facepuncher: durr, how obvious) The realities are pretty mixed, as if the video game characters actually existed, which can be a bit confusing. What matters is that I had fun making it and I actually learned some new things about colouring and lineart.

[QUOTE=Oblivious1;29884710]Because if I showed you the reference, you'd think so too. [editline]17th May 2011[/editline] If you mean the eyes on its own excluding eye lids, the eyes do look like that, it's not brown, blue or green, just black. If you include the eye lids, I have been drawing different types like stereotypical asian to cute etcetera. The eyes are actually like that, I'm not making any character here, I'm trying to portray someone as accurate as possible. I'll post the ref later. [editline]17th May 2011[/editline] Here's the ref. [media]http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/224150_10150245065733343_590503342_9005034_6732865_n.jpg[/media][/QUOTE] And all of those excuses are bullshit. You're still drawing using your understanding for icons, basic remembrance of shapes. Change of color does NOT imply a black outline EVER. Here is something to help you: [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/QRhga.png[/IMG]

[QUOTE=strider;29883738]don't use that font it is ugly and overused if you want to go for that grunge look just use a good looking font and create the grunge effect yourself[/QUOTE] He should, I only used that because I just wanted to show him another quick version for his reference. The grunge effect on the bg even has "Shutter Stock' watermark fyi.

[QUOTE=radu_iceman;29886002]I'm bad with jokes, that's a fact, but the main idea behind the comic was that two video game characters reach the end of the game and have nothing to do, except steal Isaac's bag of money, but while doing so they actually inspire him to write the general laws of gravity. (facepuncher: durr, how obvious) [/QUOTE] Yer, you know people say that explaining a joke makes it less funny. Well, yours is now in negative funnyness. -- On the art side, the line art is plain and the colouring is basic (covered up by that grainy filter you've put over it). It's clear that you've gone for the 'stylized' path. But it doesn't hurt to go back to basics; learn anatomy, drawing techniques and colour composition shading. Blah blah blah blah...