Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition
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[QUOTE=strider;30005700]Your examples are wrong and here is why:
The first is centered (which is good and goes against your argument)
The second is the flag for the Japanese army (which is actually off-centre BUT AN ENTIRELY DIFFERENT FLAG)[B][U]So you're using a flag of the japan which has almost nothing to do with the film instead of teh army one and then bitching about the incorrect usage of flag in other design thingy? nice going.[/b][/u]
The third is somekind of painting I assume, which I don't really care about (it looks stupid) and is an entirely different concept than my poster so why compare the two.
The fourth is also an entirely different concept if you ask me. It's more of a background than the actual center point of the poster (the soldier/sun are in mine)
[b][u]Are you implying that the sun is the foreground?[/b][/u]
The fifth would look a whole lot better if it was centered.
AANND on top of that, if I move the sun and the soldier over to the right (1/3rd of the way I assume you're suggesting) disregarding flag issues, it really does look stupid.[/QUOTE]
you don't have to move it that much, move the soldier jsut so that he has more room in the direction he's facing.
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No I'm not implying the sun is in the foreground.
What I meant is that the flag used in that poster you posted is used as a background to the important main characters. While in mine it is part of the most important part of the poster, the dude and the sun.
BUT for the sake of setting this straight, is this what you meant? [url=http://dl.dropbox.com/u/22377503/PacificEVERYBODYSTYLE.jpg] poster[/url]
because i think that just looks plain stupid
that feels horribly off balance. Move sun back to the center and manipulate around with the guy so he's standing in the sun-ish but not in the center of the image.
oh shit what have I done
I'm telling you it looks stupid either way I can't even be bothered to save this to show it.
I really don't care about the rules in this case, I like it the way it looks and I'll keep it that way. No disrespect or anything and I thank you for your criticism but I just don't like it.
sure, it's your poster anyway.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;30005889]oh shit what have I done[/QUOTE]
your ideas were terrible and you have no idea what you were talking about
[QUOTE=Rusty100;30006319]your ideas were terrible and you have no idea what you were talking about[/QUOTE]
jsut tried to get the composition more balanced.
pretty hard thing to do if you can't see what the other is doign.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;30006381]jsut tried to get the composition more balanced.
pretty hard thing to do if you can't see what the other is doign.[/QUOTE]
your ideas would only make the composition a lot worse
to truly balance it out it would need less negative space at the bottom, but even so it looks fine how it is
I suggested to move the horizon down.
[editline]23rd May 2011[/editline]
fuckit it don matter.
I am horrible horrible person who sucks cocks and my opinions are shit. There. We cool now?
ur literally the
worst person
right.
[QUOTE=Rusty100;30006407]your ideas would only make the composition a lot worse
to truly balance it out it would need less negative space at the bottom, but even so it looks fine how it is[/QUOTE]
i have no idea how i would fill up that space
i tried doing it by dragging the black horizon down all the way to the bottom and grunging it up a bit but that looked awful
SO i have decided that it's good as it is and just move to the next project (that's a subtle hint for some of you people out there)
now now
we love each other
any ideas of what i can do with this? to develop into a bit more of a project rather than just an alphabet?
[img]http://i55.tinypic.com/rasw40.jpg[/img]
All I see is a bunch of O's
well, that's a shame.
I think i invented a new surname
It's really stupid
Jägelmeier
[QUOTE=Lufttygger306;30008518]I think i invented a new surname
It's really stupid
Jägelmeier[/QUOTE]
ok
[QUOTE=Lufttygger306;30008518]I think i invented a new surname
It's really stupid
Jägelmeier[/QUOTE]
Sure you didn't mispell jägermeister?
i made up a surname too: aphwgea34a/4/4a
:D
Me too, M8x22-Al22
[QUOTE=Autumn;30007455]any ideas of what i can do with this? to develop into a bit more of a project rather than just an alphabet?
[img]http://i55.tinypic.com/rasw40.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
use it for some kind of advertisement campaign for cheerios
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;30008706]Sure you didn't mispell jägermeister?[/QUOTE]
It's inspired by Jägermeister
But not the same
[QUOTE=strider;30006580]SO i have decided that it's good as it is and just move to the next project (that's a subtle hint for some of you people out there)[/QUOTE]
HEY!
