Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition
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After a while working on faces I've finally made something worth showing.
[img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4461/fasdfx.png[/img]
No real detail, just simple face.
Any tips?
[QUOTE=Ittla;30101038]After a while working on faces I've finally made something worth showing.
[img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4461/fasdfx.png[/img]
No real detail, just simple face.
Any tips?[/QUOTE]
Her (?) nose is long
actually i just read something about that just awhile ago
[editline]g[/editline]
[url]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/182/3/0/UNDERSTANDING_YOUR_STYLE___2_by_whitetrashpalace.jpg[/url]
past that most i caqn give you is what everyone else will tell you, do head studies
[QUOTE=Ittla;30101038]After a while working on faces I've finally made something worth showing.
[img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4461/fasdfx.png[/img]
No real detail, just simple face.
Any tips?[/QUOTE]
i hate to be the mean guy but if thats the best uve ever done then id say drawings not your jig
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1306603331083355200.jpg[/img]
The eye mistake was unbearable
[QUOTE=Rusty100;30101211]i hate to be the mean guy but if thats the best uve ever done then id say drawings not your jig[/QUOTE]
no one is ever just good at drawing without learning. Everyone was bad at one point.
[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;30101105]Her (?) nose is long
actually i just read something about that just awhile ago
[editline]g[/editline]
[url]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/182/3/0/UNDERSTANDING_YOUR_STYLE___2_by_whitetrashpalace.jpg[/url]
past that most i caqn give you is what everyone else will tell you, do head studies[/QUOTE]
It does look quite feminine from it's simplicity.
Anyway, I have been looking at different things for reference. This is what became of it, I thought it was better than the rest of my attempts.
Anything else than the nose?
[QUOTE=Ittla;30101276]It does look quite feminine from it's simplicity.
Anyway, I have been looking at different things for reference. This is what became of it, I thought it was better than the rest of my attempts.
Anything else than the nose?[/QUOTE]
just keep drawing heads, and look at what jens linked.
more you draw better you get.
[QUOTE=Rusty100;30101211]i hate to be the mean guy but if thats the best uve ever done then id say drawings not your jig[/QUOTE]
Its not my best, its just the most presentable that I've had.
Keep giving comments, I won't get better without them.
[QUOTE=Barnhouse;30101273]no one is ever just good at drawing without learning. Everyone was bad at one point.[/QUOTE]
not that bad (unless their a young child) over a certain age as your brain matures you get a better grasp on how things generally look around you, this doesn't translate to better technical skill, but it does mean you would look at your drawing and say 'this is nowhere near right'
considering he seems content enough with it to post it here, stating it's worth showing shows he has not developed so i come to the conclusion he is either very young or hasn't properly perceived his surroundings and cannot articulate them
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;30101131]yes,
read [url=http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Drawing%20the%20Head%20and%20Hands.pdf]this[/url][/QUOTE]
This really helps.
I think I found part of the reasons for my difficulty in understanding faces and heads.
I should also practice on paper instead of the tablet.
Look, I want don't to seen as a dick for the rest of the duration of this thread. I'll apologize for those people I've caused to have red-soaked tampons and undies, and angered for posting irrelevant material to a thread.
I'll slither back in the S&M section then.
[QUOTE=CabooseRvB;30102208]Look, I don't to seen as a dick for the rest of the duration of this thread. I'll apologize for those people I've caused to have red-soaked tampons and undies, and angered for posting irrelevant material to a thread.
I'll slither back in the S&M section then.[/QUOTE]
lol...
[QUOTE=CabooseRvB;30102208]Look, I want don't to seen as a dick for the rest of the duration of this thread. I'll apologize for those people I've caused to have red-soaked tampons and undies, and angered for posting irrelevant material to a thread.
I'll slither back in the S&M section then.[/QUOTE]
I had to throw away all my panties because of you.
[QUOTE=strider;30102749]I had to throw away all my panties because of you.[/QUOTE]
[img]http://www.redseduce.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/Seductive_red_panties_Calvin_Klein.jpg[/img]
Thanks but next time just listen to the people who are obviously superior to you.
:)
And know when to stop shitting on a thread. If the thing that comes out of your asshole is no longer shit, but blood, stop shitting on the thread.
Not sure if I have posted one of those here before, they are all rather old, though the Half-Orc is the oldest among them Any comments/ criticism?
[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/225/c/b/Stickpage_Defense_Team_1_WIP_by_Crabtreemonster.jpg[/img]
[img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/146/4/c/Werebear_by_Crabtreemonster.jpg[/img]
[img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs41/i/2009/003/4/1/Morgue_Gro_Corpus_by_Crabtreemonster.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Oblivion EX;30103841]Not sure if I have posted one of those here before, they are all rather old, though the Half-Orc is the oldest among them Any comments/ criticism?
[/QUOTE]
The bear guy is awesome, the other two seem to need some sort of improvement, but I couldn't put my finger on it. They are decent though.
Is that you, Equius?
a friend asked me to do this
[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/147/5/e/larry__miles_by_larrybraverman-d3hc0v4.png[/img]
[QUOTE=SeneorGoat;30104121]a friend asked me to do this
[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/147/5/e/larry__miles_by_larrybraverman-d3hc0v4.png[/img][/QUOTE]
That's uh
really confusing and messy
Is it meant to look halfdone? cuz it doesn't look good
[editline]28th May 2011[/editline]
what's up with those dots
I guess it's meant to look like this
[img]http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lk1uoqlOeN1qgb1o5o1_400.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Detlef;30104279]That's uh
really confusing and messy
Is it meant to look halfdone? cuz it doesn't look good
[editline]28th May 2011[/editline]
what's up with those dots[/QUOTE]
I kind of agree, but you know its an image from Portal 2 right?
[QUOTE=Smeetin;30104333]I kind of agree, but you know its an image from Portal 2 right?[/QUOTE]
ok so he even ripped it off.
makes it worse.
He had a ref.
[editline]28th May 2011[/editline]
still managed to make it look bad
[QUOTE=Detlef;30104476]ok so he even ripped it off.
makes it worse.
He had a ref.
[editline]28th May 2011[/editline]
still managed to make it look bad[/QUOTE]
Not quite sure why you're being so hard on them. Nonconstructive criticism is useless.
[QUOTE=SeneorGoat;30104121]a friend asked me to do this
[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/147/5/e/larry__miles_by_larrybraverman-d3hc0v4.png[/img][/QUOTE]
You're on the right track, it just needs to be "better", keep practicing and get good at painting, etc etc. His face does not look good, but you've got the idea as far as rat-scribblings are concerned. I got the "oh it's portal" thing pretty much immediately *sideways glance at Detlef*
Steroid-addicted-bodybuilders are added on Posemaniacs
[img]http://gyazo.com/d8e4dbd4d5df394aab6142fbecee6c5e.png[/img]
wtf
see? steroids make your balls funny
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