Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

[QUOTE=Oicani Gonzales;30127899]It'll do fine[/QUOTE] i think you should do a proper job when someone puts their trust into you making something for them

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;30127879]your pen tool work is all over the place the constant mixture of soft and hard corners really makes it look terrible and what is up with the base of the stand??[/QUOTE] yeah, I'm stilling getting used to the pen :smith: what's wrong with the base?

[QUOTE=Alcapwne;30127938]yeah, I'm stilling getting used to the pen :smith: what's wrong with the base?[/QUOTE] it doesn't look like anything circular at all just some deformed blob

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;30128002]it doesn't look like anything circular at all just some deformed blob[/QUOTE] hmm Is there any way I can move anchor points so I can reshape the right edge of the screen? [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] actually I just figured it out, don't worry [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] [img]http://i.imgur.com/02hZi.png[/img] is this a bit better?

still looks gay. make it so the white shit around the bars is equal. even that wont save the poopyness tho. sry!

Album art for CD's I made for my girlfriend. Flash A Smile - This CD was engineered to improve someone's mood by starting off with slow, depressing songs, and gradually changing to faster, more upbeat stuff. Musical genius. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3155/flashasmile.png[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3225/acousticcooldowncover.png[/img]

the volume shit looks bad bc its taken from a real world photo with lights n values while ur album flower art is just there to be there hangin in the void. and i dont like that album art to tell ya the truth bro! i dont like the random folds or the lines or anything about it. sorry! [editline]29th May 2011[/editline] all that matters tho is if your gf likes it! bc prob no one else is gonna see it haha

[QUOTE=TinyTank;30130821][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3225/acousticcooldowncover.png[/img][/QUOTE] This one, I'd use a tone knob for the second flower for some more intellectual depth haha.

I like those album covers.

[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;30132121]This one, I'd use a tone knob for the second flower for some more intellectual depth haha.[/QUOTE] Was going to do that too, but I couldn't find a good one. Laziness got the better of me.

[QUOTE=TinyTank;30132323]Was going to do that too, but I couldn't find a good one. Laziness got the better of me.[/QUOTE] does ur gf know ur a lazy artist?

[QUOTE=Oicani Gonzales;30132180]Argh, I'm almost giving up on the Kill Bill poster. I can't make the sword in a curve for shit.[/QUOTE] unless you can think of a drastically different idea, i'd give up on your current design it just has nothing to look at, you know?

Some recent mixed media. [IMG]http://kalebalfadda.tumblr.com/photo/1280/5992359213/1/tumblr_llzu48n9K51qfvi16[/IMG] [IMG]http://kalebalfadda.tumblr.com/photo/1280/5993574098/1/tumblr_llzwxlCi3s1qfvi16[/IMG]

needs an apostrophe on the isn't

[QUOTE=kabookie;30133850]Some recent mixed media. [IMG]http://kalebalfadda.tumblr.com/photo/1280/5992359213/1/tumblr_llzu48n9K51qfvi16[/IMG] [/QUOTE] That would look better if the text was vertically aligned with the buildings. Now it's sort of slanted to the left or to the front. I think it should be straight up.

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gpyCql.jpg[/IMG] Crying out to be vector but meh

That's a man

his/her face looks awfully similar

[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/150/0/b/me_by_ferngineer-d3hkw6h.png[/img] :unsmith: That's me by the way

[quote] augh [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/Drawings/Sketchbook/P1030627.JPG[/img] [/quote]

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;30135643]his/her face looks awfully similar[/QUOTE] What do you mean similar? familiar? I hope not, it's my fucking girlfriend! And it's a girl ffs, how can you mistake it for a man :v: I guess that jawline is awfully masculine but still It's supposed to make her look like a stubborn geek

sorry bro but it looks like a crossdresser [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] the negative space on the lip (the lower lip) and the chin line make it look like a man

I'll soften the jawline and maybe make HER have a less angry expression. Edit: HER

It looks very manly. Use the mouth for the stubborn look, don't alter the jawline. im late

Almost finished. One more pass on it tonight. [img]http://i1039.photobucket.com/albums/a475/APerfectZero/LonelyDriveWIP2.png[/img] Any thoughts?

The road still needs to be angled downward. Judge by the vanishing point; at the moment it's [i]above[/i] the treeline.

[QUOTE=Haunted;30136802]I'll soften the jawline and maybe make HER have a less angry expression. Edit: HER[/QUOTE] Mirrors aren't real girlfriends.

[QUOTE=Haunted;30135511][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gpyCql.jpg[/IMG] Crying out to be vector but meh[/QUOTE] [img]http://www.deviantart.com/download/180415618/handsome_meme_2nd_template_by_imyaranaikaplz-d2zexky.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Oicani Gonzales;30137719]yeah, i know i was trying to achieve the curve but i fucking cant then i'd go to the large unused area god this is a great way to start[/QUOTE] a curved sword wouldn't make a difference to how good it is at all [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] its an inherently boring design. also too similar to the current posters, but not nearly as good start from scratch, new ideas

making it horizontal wouldn't make it any more interesting... ur not listening to me sword in middle with different colours on either side is boring and gives u nothing to look at move on!!!!!!!