Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread - Detlef's Detlef edition - General

but then its not ur work if someone else does it for u

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/YKLvpl.jpg[/IMG] Okay thanks for the criticism, I think this looks a little more feminine. Even so I think this is my last version as I'd sooner start over when the sex is indistinguishable (even with pigtails.. something must be terribly wrong :v:)

not a whole lot more feminine also protip, dont outline the whole lips with that kind of style [editline]31st May 2011[/editline] something like this [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/lops.png[/img] but not shitty and drawn in mspaint

she looks so angry, has a wide jaw and just an overall wide head and very masculine lips it makes her look like a man with pigtails

also her head is too short make her forehead a little bigger

I think it might be that the head is a bit too wide. ffs late again

also i dont think her nose shadows work, looks weird

Okay thanks, I've always had trouble with lips. I might overhaul this tomorrow, it turned out very different to what I had wanted anyway. I sort of drew stuff and went with it even though it wasn't what I planned (expression) which is never a good practice.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;30137975]also i dont think her nose shadows work, looks weird[/QUOTE] I don't think anything works even my chars look more feminine than that ....oh

[QUOTE=Detlef;30138039]I don't think anything works even my chars look more feminine than that ....oh[/QUOTE] :suicide: EDIT: [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/imvNOl.jpg[/IMG]

hot

Just round and thing stuff out like: [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/Ddlxai.png[/img] There are a lot more curves on a female face than a male one like on the lips, the flesh curves out in a certain way. Thick lines don't make her look feminine, expecially on the jaw. The Glasses also skew the proportions, might want to try drawing it without those glasses and have a look at it again since the lips were really far down from the nose and the eyes were too close together. Having the lines randomly get thicker in the middle also doesn't help. [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] You've got the basics, you just need to flesh it out a lil'.

ur gf is a crossdressing man. ur drawing is horrible. stop posting it please [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Trolling, history of shitposting." - Seiteki))[/highlight]

[img]http://gyazo.com/dc56e9cad71c8305ba05e8b475ffef55.png[/img] few of them drawn without reference

I like the hands but the arms look weird to me

Good, good! That's one hell of a start

[QUOTE=jenny7332;30140437] There are a lot more curves on a female face than a male one like on the lips, the flesh curves out in a certain way. Thick lines don't make her look feminine, expecially on the jaw. The Glasses also skew the proportions, might want to try drawing it without those glasses and have a look at it again since the lips were really far down from the nose and the eyes were too close together. Having the lines randomly get thicker in the middle also doesn't help. [editline]30th May 2011[/editline] You've got the basics, you just need to flesh it out a lil'.[/QUOTE] Thanks this was very helpful. I think i will restart and stop posting for now :) Thanks everyone

[QUOTE=Xephio;30140531][img]http://gyazo.com/dc56e9cad71c8305ba05e8b475ffef55.png[/img] few of them drawn without reference[/QUOTE] I think you're really overdoing the bulge on the wrist, other than that it's really good.

my hand doesnt have a bulge there at all

[QUOTE=Xephio;30140531][img]http://gyazo.com/dc56e9cad71c8305ba05e8b475ffef55.png[/img] few of them drawn without reference[/QUOTE] That's a good start, though I [I]really[/I] don't know what's going on with the lower right hand. The middle skeletal one, and the ones on the left are good.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;30142283]my hand doesnt have a bulge there at all[/QUOTE] If you bend your wrist 90 degrees then tilt your hand as much as you can outwards (so left with your left hand) it is at its most visible.

its barely visible, i can only faintly make out any circular shape there in the most extreme of positions so there's no real reason to draw it like that, at all

is this argument the... battle of the bulge? haehahe

I heard you guys like grunge. Here's a poster I made over a year ago for when our schools girls basketball team made it to state, found it tucked away in a folder and decided I should share the grunginess with the world. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5652/finaldraftresize.jpg[/img]

looks bad to be honest

"Почему не с нами? Многие успех в большой город Altoona" :what: at least use a real phrase or something

I was hoping you would think it was funny in a bad way. Anyways I agree, it's oversaturated and I kind of just raped it with grunge brushes and erasers. Also Lexus it was just a quick google translation, the only actual russian phrases I know are things like "The man eats" or "The cat swims" etc.

look up some quotes, i dunno anyway tbh it looks like something made in 10 minutes with some brushes [editline]31st May 2011[/editline] look up some quotes, i dunno anyway tbh it looks like something made in 10 minutes with some brushes

[QUOTE=lexus04;30146513]look up some quotes, i dunno anyway tbh it looks like something made in 10 minutes with some brushes[/QUOTE] Oh wow. No okay so the phrases I put into the translator were "Why not us?", which was our dumb school slogan for the tournament since we barely ever make state (we are a small school) and "Many success to town of Altoona" was the product of asking myself "How do I wish my school good luck while sounding like one of those lame kids who quotes Borat all of the time? Oh. Oh I know." And please, do trump my work with some grunge of your own, can't never have enough of them gruuunge posters.

actually I think u did put too much grunge in yours