[QUOTE=Ghhostface;37157027]719, 720 and 721 were consolidated into one thing.[/QUOTE]
Oh wow, what were they all before? What were they consolidated into?
[QUOTE=ElectricSquid;37158537]Oh wow, what were they all before? What were they consolidated into?[/QUOTE]
I'm guessing it was God's Hand, Wrath, and Ears, or whatever it was.
[editline]9th August 2012[/editline]
[QUOTE=gufu;37154495]In my opinion, the only way that an SCP should be able to get a spot before it, is to kill the previous SCP with it's own hands/claws/powers.[/QUOTE]
brb writing new 682.
[QUOTE=Krinkels;37158685]
brb writing new 682.[/QUOTE]
"The Even More Unkillable Amphibian?"
[QUOTE=Krinkels;37158685]
brb writing new 682.[/QUOTE]
I can't even begin to describe the levels on which this feels meta.
I invite anyone to play in my sandbox.
[URL]http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/drprophet[/URL]
[QUOTE=Benjimon007;37164394]I got in and published. Feel free to check for grammatical errors before [I]they[/I] find them.
SCP-1214: "The Conga Line"
[URL]http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1214[/URL]
Remember it is my first SCP. So bash in my greenhorn skull as hard as possible. So far, it's not going well.[/QUOTE]
Q: Why didn't you go ask for opinions on #site19 @ synIRC [B]or[/B] post that in a sandbox for us to read before putting it on the wiki?
[QUOTE=Benjimon007;37164394]-snip-
A: I might have been a little bit too enthusiastic.
You are right. In less than 24 hours, the downvote got to -12. So, to all people who want to help me regain my honor, be sure to check the sandbox here:
[URL]http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/drprophet[/URL][/QUOTE]
I don't know if you're still looking for grammar help and general nitpicking but here you go.
The second sentence is incomplete, and the information therein presented seems unnecessary.
When describing the culture, uncertain is a poor word to use. A better one might be unidentified or mysterious. The list should be indented, and the word avoids should not be underlined. The diameter of the string should not be discussed in uncertain terms, especially when a trailing zero is added. The ellipsis at the end of the paragraph is bad form, I'd replace it with a full stop. The first sentence of the next paragraph is incomplete.
The conventions for describing magnitudes keeps changing throughout the article, and in this particular sentence you change twice. Notice in the fourth paragraph of the description the name of the number and unit are spelled out in full outside the bracket, and then the number and short form of the unit are given within the bracket. Remember that units are always pluralized unless preceded by a 1. In keeping with the rest of the article, the measurements in the fifth paragraph should be so written:
The metal ball masses one hundred fifty grams (150 g), and is forty-five millimeters (45 mm) in diameter.
At the end of the paragraph, there is an allusion to some sea monster SCP. I'm not sure it's really necessary but in any case, [CLASSIFIED] should be either a black bar or [DATA EXPUNGED]. The black bar is to denote a classified word, data expunged would indicate several sentences. For the sake of brevity I'd simply write the list as otters, dolphins, and SCP-████. Furthermore, the term contradicting is not an adjective. Contradictory, on the other hand, is.
The "very same day," while it indicates the object's affinity for fish, is not something I'd use in a report. For the sake of completeness it might help to describe exactly how much fatty acid is required.
The phrase, "by the means of," is kind of clunky, "by means of," on the other hand, will do perfectly fine.
I also fail to see the appeal of the SCP. I'm mildly curious as to why it likes fish or does that conga line stuff. I recommend you provide some reason for this, or at the very least an assurance that there is a reason.
Made a tale that is the beginning of a series of tales I will be writing about the Chaos Insurgency and the end of the world.
[URL="http://www.scp-wiki.net/prologue-first-seed"]http://www.scp-wiki.net/prologue-first-seed[/URL]
Is there any type of SCP foundation merchandise available? I would just love to have an SCP symbol patch on my lab coat in college next year : )
[QUOTE=Destroyertf;37219826]Is there any type of SCP foundation merchandise available? I would just love to have an SCP symbol patch on my lab coat in college next year : )[/QUOTE]
Why don't you order the catalogue? [URL]http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-000-j[/URL]
[sp][URL]http://www.zazzle.com/scp_foundation[/URL][/sp]
[QUOTE=Destroyertf;37219826]Is there any type of SCP foundation merchandise available? I would just love to have an SCP symbol patch on my lab coat in college next year : )[/QUOTE]
No there isn't make it yourself if you really think you need it. Just like everyone else does.
[QUOTE=Benjimon007;37227964]Why don't you order the catalogue? [URL]http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-000-j[/URL]
[sp][URL]http://www.zazzle.com/scp_foundation[/URL][/sp][/QUOTE]
Only one shirt? Come on now! Not even one with "D CLASS" or the SCP logo?
The foundation is crowdsourced and so is your merchandise if you want it.
Next video out, what do you think?
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RGh_a2RasQc[/media]
It's a video using loads of effects to seem like an old video but uses even more effects that didn't even exist during that time.
[QUOTE=SEKCobra;37244940]It's a video using loads of effects to seem like an old video but uses even more effects that didn't even exist during that time.[/QUOTE]
The only effect that would not have existed at the time is the mercury looking one. As for the globe I think it would be possible, look at star wars. Sorry I didn't consider that would break the immersion, just thought an ambiguous blob suited the role of an unspecified SCP and was visually stimulating. If anything I guess the Foundation had more advanced technology at the time? Thanks for the feedback.
The shados behind the text, the resolution of the text etc etc. I'd also recommend trying to make modern media and not old media it doesn't fit the SCP image.
New SCP, my first Keter Class.
SCP-1178 "Floating ICBM"
[url]http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1178[/url]
I don't like the "END OF WORLD" part, also I think you meant kmh instead of 1.6 kph
[QUOTE=SEKCobra;37272043]I don't like the "END OF WORLD" part, also I think you meant kmh instead of 1.6 kph[/QUOTE]
It does in a way make sense. If both sides read that they are under imminent nuclear threat, they will retaliate with like force. A nuclear "chain reaction" of sorts could very well lead to the end of civilized society. It's not necessarily the planet itself cracking in half, but still something that should be avoided.
[QUOTE=SEKCobra;37272043]I don't like the "END OF WORLD" part, also I think you meant km/h instead of 1.6 kph[/QUOTE]
FTFY. It's not that hard.
[QUOTE=mix999;37062431]So this is what I've done so far.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lPTWCMAMDA4[/media]
What do you think? I always pictured a lot of the things in the Foundation as being stuck in the late 70's, so Ill begin by making the files look like they are being recovered from that era. Also whats your take on the little "intro song" for the foundation, 70's enough? Really hope people will like this. Planning to make the first actual file by the end of next week.[/QUOTE]
OP'd.
I'd also like links to any cool SCP spinoff stuff (like the statue breach game whatever it's called and the infinite staircase) so I can link dat shit in the OP.
Kthx
[QUOTE=mix999;37244898]Next video out, what do you think?
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RGh_a2RasQc[/media][/QUOTE]
It would be awesome if you do a parody of StarShip Troopers for SCP
[video=youtube;SMTz9nIUkGc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMTz9nIUkGc[/video]
Kinda like the do you want to know more aspect.
[QUOTE=Empty_Shadow;37302964]OP'd.
I'd also like links to any cool SCP spinoff stuff (like the statue breach game whatever it's called and the infinite staircase) so I can link dat shit in the OP.
Kthx[/QUOTE]
Collect them yourself, you are the OP afterall?
The game is SCP: Containment Breach.
[URL="http://scpcb.wordpress.com/"]http://scpcb.wordpress.com/[/URL]
Its scary as fuck so be careful if you play at night.
[QUOTE=Fuzzwaddle;37311330]The game is SCP: Containment Breach.
[URL="http://scpcb.wordpress.com/"]http://scpcb.wordpress.com/[/URL]
Its scary as fuck so be careful if you play at night.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, you're a bit late on that.
A bit late meaning very, very late.
[QUOTE=SEKCobra;37272043]I don't like the "END OF WORLD" part, also I think you meant kmh instead of 1.6 kph[/QUOTE]
kph is perfectly valid assuming it's used throughout the entire article.
Kilometres per hour (km/h) – a physical unit of speed or velocity (non-standard; km/h is usually preferred where SI conformance is important)
[editline]19th August 2012[/editline]
SCP pretends to be scientists so
[QUOTE=Fuzzwaddle;37311330]The game is SCP: Containment Breach.
[URL="http://scpcb.wordpress.com/"]http://scpcb.wordpress.com/[/URL]
Its scary as fuck so be careful if you play at night.[/QUOTE]
i feel like i ought to post my super-secret texture mod that removes all scariness from this game
y/n?
-Snip- Fuck it.
Still it would be far more enjoyable if there were more SCP's that just love to mess with people and each other
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