Anyone feel like spell-checking my College admissions essay?

[Tippmann357]

If I was your English teacher and you gave me this I would punch you in your ovaries

[Muthenfrucheir]

Oh puh.
An essay
Purely
About
DRUMROLL PL0X
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...........
GMOD!!!
:downs: nice work you have there,hand it in you'll be taken seriously dount wurry 101

Edit:Posting in Drop Dead Thread-soon-to-be.

[Aasokeo]

This isn't too bad, but as Sodisna said, you should try to relate this entire experience to the program you're applying to. For example, how has Garry's Mod helped you acquire skills that will be relevant to your future studies/careers? What are these skills? In other words, try to look at it from a broader perspective. I think that by including this, it'll be an excellent essay.

[TheHydra]

no one at that college gives a fuck about your accomplishments in gmod I can guarantee you that, you need to change the entire focus of the essay