• Think you've read bad fan fiction? Take a look at these. The Gutwrenching Fan Fic thread
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[QUOTE=mzathemind;20250023]You read the part about Heavy and medics sodomy first and think the story would be funny. It is so disturbing the sodomy fits. First time when male sodomy doesn't get to you.[/QUOTE] Yea, the end with the heavy and medic sort of made me sad.
The whole thing made me said. Why was the image of the Pyro so....vivid?
M-m-m-m-MY FUCKING CHILDHOOD!!!!!! *in a Darth Vader voice* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO /caps But seriously :wtc:
Anyone here have an ED account? That pokemon one definitely needs to be added to the offended page.
Well I don't need porn now, so I'd say this is pretty good.
My reaction to the tf2 one was pretty much this throughout [IMG]http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t156/The-Displaced/thclairec4-31.gif[/IMG]
[quote=mcmissile;20242799][u][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88ovnyjgzdy[b][/media][/b][/u] definitely the worst i've seen in a while.[/quote] oh my fucking god what the fucking shit who the hell would make something like that [editline]12:25AM[/editline] fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :barf:
[quote=danka;20222683] i dont even want to fucking talk about this what the fuck [url]http://www.toplessrobot.com/2009/07/fan_fiction_friday_the_pokemon_story.php[/url] [/quote] :wtc:
psssh you're all a bunch of pansies
:suicide:
:barf: <- This thread in a nutshell.
Hell, and I thought I was weird.
teh finale [quote]George felt Elaine's hot lips contract around his cock, slowly moving up and down and finally being deep inside her, not quite touching her throat. "Been wanting this for a lifetime!" he muttered softly to himself. His fat ass lifted up off the floor and his hips worked like a piston, pushing his cock in and out of her mouth, faster and faster. Jerry looked at Kramer and said "Ok you take the back door and I'll take the front door!" He winked and Kramer nodded spastically. Jerry then slid on the hardwood floor under Elaine and grabbed his cock at the base. He then pushed it up and down over her clit and through her wet lips before finally sinking it deep inside her pussy, all the way to the hilt. Both of them shuddered and then Elaine tensed up again. "Don't worry Elaine this will only hurt for a second" Kramer said. He took some of her juices and rubbed them onto the head of his cock, then pushed the head into her ass until it popped inside. At once he, Jerry and Elaine all grunted and hissed as they made a connection. George was still thrusting his meat into Elaine's mouth and got a sense of satisfaction that all three were now inside her at once. "Whatta bunch of friends we are!" He thought. "This is great!!" By now Elaine had came multiple times and knew she could go many more if need be. "Fuccccccccccccccccccccck!!" She thought!! "No guy has ever stuck his cock in my ass before but this actually doesn't feel at all like I'd imagined! No pain or soreness! I could get to like doing this all the time!" With that she pushed back onto Kramer and Jerry's cocks even harder. Jerry's teeth had found her left nipple and was sucking on it, gently biting the tip every so often and making her cum even harder. Kramer used his hand to play with her right nipple and tweak it as his cock slid in and out of her tight hot asshole. "God I love what they're doing to my nipples!" She said to herself. "It feels so nice to have Jerry biting and tugging on it as Kramer pinches my other one! MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmm!!" She then pushed her left breast deeper into Jerry's mouth and sighed happily. "This is something we'll all DEFINITELY have to get together for more of in the future!" She thought to herself. George had a big smile on his face and grinned like a cheshire cat. "I'm cummmmmmmmmmmmmminnnnnnnnnng!!!" he screamed "Swallow it Elaine! I'm begging' ya ya gotta swallow!! No woman has ever done that for me before!!!" Elaine thought wickedly "Sometimes I wish your mom had swallowed!" but then complied and greedily sucked all of George's semen down her throat. "Ahhhhhhhhh what reLIEF!!!" George bellowed! "Thank you Elanie! I'll never forget this sweetie!" Elaine smiled at him, his cum still coating her lips, and winked. She then put all her focus and attention back on fucking Kramer and Jerry for all they were worth. "unnnnnnggggghhhhhhhhhhh" cried Jerry. I can't believe how tight you are with Kramer's schlong up your yin yang!! "Hoochie MAMA!!" Cried Kramer in response. Jerry, still not being able to see him from his vantage point said, "Alright Kramer enough with the hoochie mamas!" Kramer threw his arms up in a spastic fit and brought them down on Elaine's ass cheeks, the palms of his hands making a sharp stinging noise. Elaine bucked onto his cock as he did that so he did it again and again she jumped and shook. "Now you're on to something!" cried Jerry. Kramer continued to slap her ass cheeks and Jerry bit her nipple, clenching it between his teeth. "Aaaaaaaaaghhhhhhhh aaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhhhhhhh''''hh!!" Elaine screamed. She was on the verge of one huge mega-cum! Jerry, being her ex boyfriend, knew this. "Pump her harder Kramer!" Cosmo thrust in and out of her tight asshole, his big cock threatening to split Elaine's petite body in two. Her pussy contracted and she milked Jerry for all she had. "I'm cummmmmming too!!" he shrieked. "Wait for me!!", Screamed Kramer in slow motion! Then at once all threw friends came together; Elaine covered Jerry's cock with her cum as his own gushed over her womb and deep inside her body. Kramer pulled his cock from Elaine's ass and shot it all over her back and ass cheeks, a torrent of sperm washing over her. All three then collapsed into one big, sweaty pile. By this time George had taken the camcorder and gotten every vantage point of their private orgy. "Beautiful!" he exclaimed "Bee-yoo-Tee-fuckin-ful!!!" Elaine then rolled over and ran to the bathroom to shower. "Give me a bit, I need to get all this cum and sweat off my body" she said. "Who else is up for a shower?" Jerry exclaimed. "Count me in" replied Kramer. "Me too" said George. "Ok lets go" Jerry said nonchalantly. "Maybe we can call this part: Bathtime with Elaine.", he said with a evil grin. The end for now.[/quote] [editline]11:03PM[/editline] god I have such a HUGE BONER RAGHHH
oh my
Texxxxxx[b]xxx[/b]xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxt [quote]in a flash his pants were off and he was atop her. She squealed and struggled, afraid to fight back because he was, indeed, her trainer. Her mind had a block in it, via years of training, years of believing he'd never harm her, that he was her best friend. He ran a hand over her leafy posterior. A probing finger slipped in between, finding a hole. He knew little of the gardevoir anatomy, but knew that any hole would work. He plunged his rock hard cock deep inside of her anus. It was white hot. A wave of pleasure washed over him before the first stroke. Gardevoir screamed in pain, her precious anus being pulled to four times its natural size. With each thrust she screamed louder, but david couldn't hear it. The crevasse formed tightly over his shaft, gripping harder than his fist ever could. Before long he finally came, filling her sphincter with his seed. White mixed with black blood as he pulled out. Blood and feces dribbled out. The sight of gardevoir laying there, whimping, smeared with mud, blood, cum, and her own feces unlocked something deep within david's soul. His heart soared at the sight. It felt so good! It was like he finally discovered his place in the world. While his spirit had become free, however, his mind quivered under the weight of his actions, struggling to block these memories from existence, enabling his attack. His mouth lowered in primal instinct, extending his pink tongue. He lapped up her blood and shit, using pruned fingers to smother himself. It was beautiful. The bitter taste of her poop, and the coppery taste of her blood was like magic to him. "gardevvv..." she moaned, hands digging into the dirt. She wept. How could she do this to him? Pain was splitting her because of him. He said he'd never hurt her, though... Maybe he wasn't? Maybe this was fine... He flipped her bleeding, limp body over. His mouth met hers, lashing about inside of her toothed maw. He kissed hard and deep as he carefully fit his shitty dick into her pokevagina. The head slid in easily and she whimpered. With a deft hand he massaged her clitoris. She tried to pull back to cry out but he pushed into her harder. She screamed into his mouth. The vibrations filled him in ecstasy. He violently penetrated her and wave after wave of pleasure engulfed them both. It was beyond the realm of human understanding. Collapsing universes whirled about them, being born and dying in an eternal, idiot firestorm. As he came again he thrust harder, forcing as much of himself in as he could. His penis crashed into her cervix and she let out a blood curdling scream, clawed hands digging into his flesh. David didn't like that at all. No, she wasn't allowed to injure him. He drove his bleaching fist into her mouth. There was a crunch and black syrup welled up in her mouth and eyes. She gurgled, and he smiled gleefully. Disengaged from her mangled secret, he crawled up to her face. Lifting her broken head he plunged his dick into her wounded mouth. Gardevoir could take no more. She gave himself over to him. He was her master. She would please him any way she could and never make another whimper in reply. She suckled on his piece as he pulled it in and out. Cracked lips smothered him, teasing glands and glans. He gripped her arms, squeezing tighter. More pain roared through her and she sucked harder. She gagged, puking a little. The bile stung him, so he drove another fist into her eye. Through the pain she sucked and finally he came. As he did, his mind cracked a little more. He gripped her head, forcing his cock into the back of her throat. She vomited again, squirting half-digest plant matter all over both of them and he lashed her. Her tiny bones splintered under his blows and he came harder at her destruction. Weeks later david finally found himself at cerulean city. Gardevoir wasn't looking very good. She didn't respond to vocal stimuli and couldn't see out of the eye he caved in, but he felt no remorse for it. Even so; he felt glad. She was mentally broken. His attack had transformed her into the perfect sex slave: When he moved his cock near her she would tilt her head, trying to find it, just as a baby searches for a nipple and automatically begins suckling. She was infected, though. Mold grew upon her anus and wounded eye. Her vagina was yellow with infection, discharging constantly. She wouldn't make it another day. David rushed to the pokemon center, gardevoir in his arms. He came up to the reception desk and there was nurse joy. Her eyes first when to david's dumb smiling face, but then down to the pokemon in his arms and she gasped. "what happened?!" she said, stroking gardevoir's hair with the gentleness of a mother. "i'm not exactly sure," he muttered coldly, "i found her like this out in the forest," tears formed in joy's eyes and she scooped the poor pokemon up, taking her over to the rejuvenation chamber for dying pokemon in another room. After flipping the switch the chamber filled with gases, obscuring outside eyes. Joy didn't mind that david had followed her in and closed the door, she was too busy studying a complicated-looking readout now appearing on a computer screen. She bent over low as she typed slowly, a complete novice with computers it appeared, and as she did her skirt teased her thick ass. Her thigh highs squeezed her legs delightfully. She was a delicious woman, and david would have no problem finding out just how delicious she was. He slid up next to her. "how does it look, nurse?" he asked, putting a hand on her shoulder. "not very good, i'm afraid the rejuvenation chamber won't be enough for--" "no, not the pokemon. Your cunt." at this the nurse spun around. A hurt look flashed across her face and she bit her lip. She was exactly sure how to handle this situation. It was true that she was constantly horny. She never had time for anything outside of the hospital. Her cunt tingled at the prospect of being split. She eyed the door. Should she run? Should she have sex with this complete stranger? "he seems dangerous..." she though, but as she did her thighs pressed against themselves, pinching her slowly enlarging clitoris. David's hands began to unbutton her blouse, revealing a polkadotted bra clasping two melon-sied breasts. "sir, i'm going to have to ask you to step out of the office," she said with as much courage as she could muster, but didn't stop him. He pushed her up against the computer terminal and mouthed her nipples. She gasped as he bit one, teasing it with his tongue. He sucked on it and she lurched, not noticing her hands slide down to his hips. He lifted her and placed her upon the desk. Her legs spread and she leaned back, forgetting that she was on the rag, and gave herself to him. He lowered himself to a knee, ripping off her clashing blue underwear and explosing her rosy, dripping hole. He gently tugged on the string sticking out, drawing a blood-soaked tampon out. It fell to the floor and thick chunks began to seep out. She burned for him, for this complete stranger. His fingers moved into her, rubbing the rough spot just inside the warm tunnel. His red tongue slathered her clit. He sucked on it and hummed. A dizzy, buzzing feeling filled her head and she began bucking, screaming in pleasure. Soon her screams of pleasure became those of pain as he forced three fingers into her tight pussy. She hadn't been with a man in so long.. "no, please.." she gasped as her vagina slowly spread and grew used to the probing digits. He inserted another finger and she gasped. This time her cunt burned in protest, showing no signs of widening. She squeaked. He forced another finger in and soon he was fisting her, plunging his large, manly hands in as far as they would go, spreading her wider. Filling her. "moooree," she growled through clenched teeth, thick streams of saliva going down her cheeks, "fuck me harder you peace of shit." david didn't like this however, and punched her in the gut. She lurched forward and gasped. But then, weighing how much fun he was having with being told what to do, he decided to insert his next fist. Her tendons popped and squeaked as he forced the other one inside slowly. Her cleft opened wider, and wider still. She screamed in pain and pleasure until her throat bled almost as much as her cunt. Blood streamed down his arms, mixing with her cum until his shirt and the floor were soaked. There was a knock at the door, followed by the turning of a handle. In strode the doctor the nurse had called for earlier. Her father. He stopped, shocked at the situation that unfolded in front of him. "w-what are you, what are you doing to my little girl?" he murmured. "shut the fuck up you old bastard and get the fuck over here, her mouth isn't going to fuck itself!" david shouted, forcing his voice above that of nurse joy's. She was horrified that her father had walked in on this, horrified at all the blood and what she had been coerced into, but she couldn't stop. Lust raged inside of her, overtaking all other motor functions. "fuck me, daddy," she said, grinning a bloody smile. Her pleading eyes met his and before she knew it, her father's wrinkly, liver-spotted dick was in her mouth. The doctor fucked her from the opposite side of the table. Her young tongue slid over the top of his dick, teasing the helmet. He bucked wildly, shakily. He had not had sex since his wife had died ten years ago, and sometimes had dreams about his daughter. He tried to ignore them, push them to the back of his mind. But he could never help his sick fantasies. Sometimes he'd "accidentally" walk in on her dressing or showering, and would think about it later that night as he choked himself and petted his shriveling member. David began to grow bored, his maniacal, slowly-splintering mind needed more horror to satiate it. It was a curse, but one he enjoyed. He drew one hand out of her weeping puss, much to her protest. With the other he gripped her cervix and twisted. Pain cut her and she clenched her teeth and moaned, cleanly chopping her father's dick off as he came. The doctor fell backwards and the nurse sat up straight. Her vision blurred from the pain, but she was just barely able to see what david was doing. He had drawn a knife out of his pocked and driven it into his urethra. His cock opened wide and he screamed, but kept pushing hard, down into his ballsack. Blood gushed forward and he puked, bile adding to the horrendous pain, but he couldn't stop. Slowly memories of him and gardevoir flooded back, all the fun they had back home. Memories of his mother and father, how they wanted him to succeed. They wanted him to come home, to spend time with their baby boy. Of his first love, the girl he never got over. Her name was misty. She wanted to see him again, she had sent him a letter only a month earlier saying she wanted to be with him again, that nothing felt the same without him. What was he doing here? He couldn't stop his hands, they moved on their own, twisting out joy's cervix, bit by bit, and slitting his genitals. At last the leathery bag was open. They gripped his testicles and pried them out, forcing them into his mouth. All three parties bled to death. It was in the news the next day. The gardevoir recovered, but was forever in a tortured state of slavery. Misty shook as she read it. She wept and her mind grew jaded and hateful. She was alone in the world now. Nobody she loved. Nothing. Alone. She drew a pokeball from her belt and opened it. Staryu appeared next to her. "staryu," she blushed, and looked at him through teary eyes, "would you do anything for me?" "starr," he echoed. Her cunt burned. She needed it... Fin. [/quote]
The pokemonz story was just.... uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
my cock is hard now
[QUOTE=Enhanced_AI;20264059]Texxxxxx[B]xxx[/B]xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxt[/QUOTE] Is that the pokemon story the one in the op?
Fucking shit, and I thought Squad Broken was bad
[url]http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Horrible/Fanfic[/url] Here's a page of horrible fanfics, the previously mentioned Agony In Pink is on there, as well as a ton of Harry Potter ones for you to be disgusted at. This one is just painful though, in every conceivable way. [url]http://www.tuxedojack.com/godawful/asadae.htm[/url] Also to help you along with that, assuming it's just too awful that you can't handle it, this page links to a version of the story that has a written in Mystery Science Theatre 3000 mantra alongside it, just to help you along. [url]http://www.svamcentral.org/ewic/ms-vig.html[/url]
' "Fuck me, daddy," she said, ' I stopped reading.
The most disturbing sex based story of this thread is the pokemon one from the OP, I laughed. The most disturging non-sex based story of this thread is the TF2 one, I affected my emotional state
there is no emote that describes how disturbed i am so i will just use this one :rice:
[QUOTE=DANKA;20222683] I DONT EVEN WANT TO FUCKING TALK ABOUT THIS WHAT THE FUCK [url]http://www.toplessrobot.com/2009/07/fan_fiction_friday_the_pokemon_story.php[/url] [/QUOTE] :pervert:
[QUOTE=ProgramFiles;20281466] The most disturging non-sex based story of this thread is the TF2 one, I affected my emotional state[/QUOTE] That isn't a bad fan fic. It is actually very good.
Storyline to MW1 & 2 P.S. I can never watch Seinfeld the same way ever again.
The pokemon one... oh god... :suicide:
Look upon me, all ye mighty, and despair; for I have marched right to the gates of Hell and thrown them open, being blissfully unaware that the things lying beyond that gate were more than any mortal man could bear. The suffering I witnessed, the horror I saw to which nothing could ever compare was enough to drive any other person mad Not I, though I give you this warning, so heed it and beware; the Gutwrenching Fan Fic Thread is much more than you can bear. That was basically the first poem I have ever written, rate me Shitty Poetries.
[QUOTE=Joppu;20225666]This is just obligatory. [B]DOOM: Repercussions of Evil[/B] John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway. John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy." Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS" There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons. "This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!" So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall. "HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons "I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill. "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted The radio said "No, John. You are the demons" And then John was a zombie.[/QUOTE] Fuck yeah Repercussions of Evil. [URL=http://img535.imageshack.us/i/repofevil.png/][IMG]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/2517/repofevil.png[/IMG][/URL]
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