haha your right its repetitive as hell. im gonna start clearing out my soundcloud of the shit ones
lmao why did you take it out! I'm checking out your soundcloud right now
haha sometimes I post songs when Im not in the right mind state to realize they are shit. heres a new one though that is good [media]http://soundcloud.com/bryanwhitehurst/fuck-an-overnight-celebrity[/media]
[QUOTE=Bdawg2077;37456532]haha sometimes I post songs when Im not in the right mind state to realize they are shit. heres a new one though that is good [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/"]Listen to Soundcloud recording[/URL]
[URL]http://soundcloud.com/bryanwhitehurst/fuck-an-overnight-celebrity[/URL]
[/QUOTE]
Insanely good. The synths are a great touch, & the vocal samples are great in this as well. The drums have a great swing to them, not to mention they aren't a single bar loop (looks like a 4 or 8 bar loop which is nice).
The only thing I think you could add is a smooth baseline. Add that, and give it a proper outro and you've got a winner on your hands.
[editline]29th August 2012[/editline]
Edit:
Side note, this beat will be replaced with the song later this week. Figured I'd tease what's to come.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/the-blacksmiths/first[/media]
Does anyone know any decent sample packs for use in layering drums, etc for hip-hop/rap beats? I'm mostly accustomed to electro so don't really know which packs are prevalent, preferred. Most of the ones I've been finding are pretty crap like some random ass $15.00 pack from loopmasters, sounds like shit.
[QUOTE=Cruma;37460997]Does anyone know any decent sample packs for use in layering drums, etc for hip-hop/rap beats? I'm mostly accustomed to electro so don't really know which packs are prevalent, preferred. Most of the ones I've been finding are pretty crap like some random ass $15.00 pack from loopmasters, sounds like shit.[/QUOTE]
[url]http://www.thesample.net/2010/12/vinyl-drums-free-sample-pack-vol-2-160-samples/[/url]
Lookin for critique on my words. Still don't have any recordings yet.
Get the cool shoe shine and you can finally be in this line to feel fine, but first give me a minute of your time to listen to this rhyme.
Ask yourself what the real reason is you work to make this dime to pay for the sweet limes to put in your expensive drinks that connect to no links in this chain reaction to travel to the real action.
My kind of faction.
I am trying to help.
Yet ye continue to eat your spiked ocean kelp, rub the smooth feeling lotion on yourself while I put forth my own motion of true devotion to the future of detracting the mistakes of the lakes of destruction and sudden influx of redux of past visionary memories.
Excess recess helps undress the stress and cleans up most of this mess.
Most of my lines are just me commenting on my statuses and more than likely don't have much relation to each other. it's more or less working on my rhyming and substance and different ways to flow together chains of thought.
[QUOTE=Pirate Jok3r;37464906]Lookin for critique on my words. Still don't have any recordings yet.
Get the cool shoe shine and you can finally be in this line to feel fine, but first give me a minute of your time to listen to this rhyme.
Ask yourself what the real reason is you work to make this dime to pay for the sweet limes to put in your expensive drinks that connect to no links in this chain reaction to travel to the real action.
My kind of faction.
I am trying to help.
Yet ye continue to eat your spiked ocean kelp, rub the smooth feeling lotion on yourself while I put forth my own motion of true devotion to the future of detracting the mistakes of the lakes of destruction and sudden influx of redux of past visionary memories.
Excess recess helps undress the stress and cleans up most of this mess.
Most of my lines are just me commenting on my statuses and more than likely don't have much relation to each other. it's more or less working on my rhyming and substance and different ways to flow together chains of thought.[/QUOTE]
It's very hard to critique just lyrics, since lyrics need to flow to properly work.
Also, these are just a bunch of non-connected lines (as you stated) so that's like somebody asking you how a pizza tastes by having you taste the sauce, cheese, and a mushroom separately before they've been cooked. I can't personally figure out the flow here, so I can't really critique it, sorry.
[QUOTE=Pirate Jok3r;37464906]Lookin for critique on my words. Still don't have any recordings yet.
Get the cool shoe shine and you can finally be in this line to feel fine, but first give me a minute of your time to listen to this rhyme.
Ask yourself what the real reason is you work to make this dime to pay for the sweet limes to put in your expensive drinks that connect to no links in this chain reaction to travel to the real action.
My kind of faction.
[/QUOTE]
Can sweet limes really be that expensive? Like who are you talking about that works to make money to buy limes? Honestly bro the lyrics don't make any sense. If these weren't lyrics and there were no rhymes you would think the person writing it had some mental problems.
[QUOTE=Bdawg2077;37469262]Can sweet limes really be that expensive? Like who are you talking about that works to make money to buy limes? Honestly bro the lyrics don't make any sense. If these weren't lyrics and there were no rhymes you would think the person writing it had some mental problems.[/QUOTE]
It's meaning those who buy happiness through way of drinking and other means of buying their way to fun, when in turn I enjoy what I have without needing to buy it (my faction) And to be honest, I probably do have some problems in my head. What I write makes sense to me, and in a way that's what matters most. It just helps a bit to hear from a 2nd party.
Kinda just put this out there to see if anyone wanted to use it for rap.
Free to use! Just credit :dance:
[URL="http://soundcloud.com/steenrns/rapper-vocal-request"]http://soundcloud.com/steenrns/rapper-vocal-request[/URL]
[QUOTE=Pirate Jok3r;37469824]It's meaning those who buy happiness through way of drinking and other means of buying their way to fun, when in turn I enjoy what I have without needing to buy it (my faction) And to be honest, I probably do have some problems in my head. What I write makes sense to me, and in a way that's what matters most. It just helps a bit to hear from a 2nd party.[/QUOTE]
Haha ok it makes more sense that what I originally thought. Really you should not give a fuck what I say and just do what makes you happiest. But if you want people to understand exactly what you're saying that I'd try and make a little more coherent thoughts. You want to provoke images in peoples minds (at least thats what I want to experience when I hear a song) and it can be frustrating as a listener when its hard to understand because you can't really form any coherent images.
Yeah, i understand that, thanks for the input. My thoughts seem to spin off complicated and almost nonsensical but some after thought gives meaning in my head. It's as if my subconscious raps for me before my conscious mind can interpret it.
help how do i align my samples bpms
I made raps today
[media]http://soundcloud.com/swagberg/aussberg[/media]
aye listen you don't want no tiffs with the kid here
that's simple wisdom from a little yid wid a big beard
im just tryna chill in sydney with six beers
this sixteen, i dont give a shit if i spit weird
swaggenberger kid, shin bet for short doe
inspect the dope prose and invective, more pro
come to think, yall like insects that snort blow
inbred, you been dead, i win bread you court blows
inspect a big check but send back for more o's
good bet i'm so cold, kid, ref the north pole
i don't know how to rhyme, i'm just vibin
off that kb lager, the sign's the rough timin
mate, you'll be a mark til you get wit this
dome peeling when the four five bark like eucalyptis
it's AP, the steelo's smuve spits and mad subliminals
wylin in a ute with two grips of aboriginals
Here is another rap I made when I was p depressed this summer
[media]http://soundcloud.com/swagberg/aftertouch-cypher[/media]
And a remix I did of a Das EFX song
[media]http://soundcloud.com/swagberg/microphone-master-bergmix[/media]
3012 Elevator Music: [media]http://soundcloud.com/bryanwhitehurst/3012-elevator-music[/media]
[video=youtube;gjlfqyXOPW0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gjlfqyXOPW0[/video]
I think this is a nice rap beat, haven't heard this in a long time.
SP-404sx beat I did today
[video]http://soundcloud.com/unsignd/fight[/video]
My first beat tape I just uploaded this week, MPC1000 & SP-404sx
[URL]http://unsignd.bandcamp.com/[/URL]
I listen to a ton of beats and didn't even know this thread existed. I mainly listen to lo-fi beats nowadays, some big names you may recognize being Samiyam, Knxwledge, mndsgn, anything on SLF TAPES.
somone have any tips tricks suggestions or something else about how to make a 90s beat like
Black moon shit is real
[video=youtube;ZFftyp151_o]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZFftyp151_o[/video]
i like that high pitched string .
Neck brace not included.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/the-blacksmiths/spacebounce[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/elegant[/media]
i made a thing you guys
All these beats are very good.
When I last came here,some guy told me to fuck off and go listen to Dr. Octagon. Well, I went on from that and now I actually like a lot of this. I prefer gangster rap. I liked snoop dog's first album a lot.
So, yeah, thanks for that.
I make my own beats, may not be the best genre of music, but the scene has been nice to me, and this is my latest one. Just figured I'd post it, since I kinda want criticism on the beat as well.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8TaAYn_9FIw[/media]
[QUOTE=Fang30;37611255]I make my own beats, may not be the best genre of music, but the scene has been nice to me, and this is my latest one. Just figured I'd post it, since I kinda want criticism on the beat as well.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8TaAYn_9FIw[/media][/QUOTE]
i uh
uhm
Made some trap yo
[media]http://soundcloud.com/houcemate/houcemate-ronnie[/media]
[QUOTE=Larry_G;37613696]Made some trap yo
[media]http://soundcloud.com/houcemate/houcemate-ronnie[/media][/QUOTE]
This is raw as fuck. Good shit man.
[QUOTE=Rediscover;37611319]i uh
uhm[/QUOTE]
woah sorry for trying to get criticism there buddy.
[QUOTE=Fang30;37621395]woah sorry for trying to get criticism there buddy.[/QUOTE]
this is not the place
notice how the thread is labeled rap/hip-hop and not shitty 'crunkcore'
but since i'm just a good guy, i'll give you some criticism.
the beat was awful, your lyrics are basic as shit and make me want to hurt myself and the screaming is lovecraftian
F-
[QUOTE=Rediscover;37621636]this is not the place
notice how the thread is labeled rap/hip-hop and not shitty 'crunkcore'
but since i'm just a good guy, i'll give you some criticism.
the beat was awful, your lyrics are basic as shit and make me want to hurt myself and the screaming is lovecraftian
F-[/QUOTE]
I don't understand how you can get so hostile just because it's a genre of music. You instantly become dickish towards me because you don't like what genre of music I'm in. CrunkCore is hip-hop, whether you like it or not. It IS the place for it.
As for the lyrics, I disagree, as if you listen to pretty much ANY popular crunkcore song, the rhymes are even SIMPLER. I try to be clever with my lyrics, focusing on wordplay/punchlines. I haven't been making music for years. I've been making music for half a year. I just recently bought a $150 dollar microphone, which I used in that song. I'm serious about it. Also, what was wrong with the beat? Like really, give me some tips or something instead of saying it's just awful.
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