• Bio Apocalypse - A comic book drawn by a 6th grade student.
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The floating censored things really reminded me of something H.P Lovecraft would write.
Good read.
The basic idea for this really could make for a good movie. I love the idea of a huge being of eldritch flesh covering the planet.
Honestly the best story I have ever read, with amazing artwork as a bonus.
Jeez, he's only about 11, but he wrote this...
Page 7, I see tits.
Quick! Send it to the "Axe Cop" creator!
yeah some dude on somethingawful made this
Oh my god im 6th grader and i can do so fucking much better.
This kid is already a better writer than 90% of the high school students I tutor.
[QUOTE=Twistai;30394230][b]Oh my god im 6th grader[/b] and i can do so fucking much better.[/QUOTE] I doubt that.
[QUOTE=Irish_Cereal;30382653]This is pretty damn good for a 6th grader.[/QUOTE] Not really. I remember when I was on the 4th or so grade, earlier than that even there was this guy in my class who didn't really struck as a good artist or even a student but oh boy did he draw good for some strange reason. A lot better than that.. He drew his own timetable with a pitch black ink pen for example and it was flawless
[QUOTE=Bat-shit;30394286]Not really. I remember when I was on the 4th or so grade, earlier than that even there was this guy in my class who didn't really struck as a good artist or even a student but oh boy did he draw good for some strange reason. A lot better than that.. He drew his own timetable with a pitch black ink pen and it was flawless[/QUOTE] He was talking about the writing.
[QUOTE=ThatHippyMan;30394270]This kid is already a better writer than 90% of the high school students I tutor.[/QUOTE] What I find interesting about it is that he tells such a compelling story with little writing. Not to mention he bears themes that are complicated. It even gets philosophical at times. I hope this kid only gets better as he gets older. I'm legitimately jealous. :v: I still have books I wrote and illustrated when I was in fourth grade and they, although drawn slightly better, are nothing compared to the imagination and talent put into this.
Oh I see.. no actually I don't, so let's see; Big pile of bloody pulp with scientists in it, it spread fast of course, mass destruction.. then they moved to Space and.. Yeah that's really good writing, for a 6th grader I mean. Yeah. He has a wild imagination I give you that, much like every kid out there.. he just bothered to scribble it all on paper, unlike other kids. [editline]11th June 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=imMonkeyGOD;30382776]Potential movie deal[/QUOTE] Hope those agree ratings aren't for [b]real[/b] but there's 40 of them.
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[img]http://gyazo.com/9f2069c299b41c83997ac8175a8dfc55.png[/img] Did nobody really mention this badass yet?
Funny how the people that are drowning in waste are almost all smiling.
Also this kid's moon cities sound like something out of Heinlein's books. [editline]11th June 2011[/editline] "New Jerusalem", even
this is fucking genius
Fun facts in the middle of the text: "Blood spurts differently in Moon gravity" [editline]11th June 2011[/editline] "Some religious people chose science but they were considered heretics and executed." Jesus this kid is mean at times
[QUOTE=Jetblack357;30394656]Funny how the people that are drowning in waste are almost all smiling.[/QUOTE] Always look on the bright side of life dude
[QUOTE=esalaka;30394628][img]http://gyazo.com/9f2069c299b41c83997ac8175a8dfc55.png[/img] Did nobody really mention this badass yet?[/QUOTE] Are you stupid?
[QUOTE=JolKally;30394802]Are you stupid?[/QUOTE] Yes, but I don't know what it has to do with a guy hundreds of years old single-handedly trying to defeat a massive organism the size of a planet with a simple cane.
[QUOTE=slamex;30394793]Always look on the bright side of life dude[/QUOTE] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WlBiLNN1NhQ&feature=related[/media]
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This boy is incredible! I imagine he will write incredible comics or books as he grows older.
He is an indicator of a wave of fucking good writers, like in Lovecrafts time. I was like him, still is, i just write a bit more lovecrafty now than before. I had this creature "Pendorr" once, based on a nightmare, basically it was a race of big fucking crow like birds with all kinds of abillities, just rediscovered them through my random spout-words-without-thinking-to-fill-a-page sessions. When i was 12 like him, i drew a cyberpunky story about programs on a computer hacked to be sentient, to find "The Red Hat" (My father always used to talk about Red Hat Linux and Linux wonders in general). I never finished it though, anyone up for scribbled wireframy comics about taco's and balls flying around? I am re-taking on the story soon. Holy shit my mind waked up for once, what i want to say is that he reminds me of my self and i cant wait for more stuff to come, i agree with his opinions.
[QUOTE=slamex;30394793]Always look on the bright side of life dude[/QUOTE] Even when you know you are gonna die and there ain't shit you can do about, right?
That was good. I liked the ending.
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