[QUOTE=DanTehMan;15445166]Ok, someone be honest please, is this actual a good read? Or so horrific, it's like mixing a bad fanfic and a horrible weaboo writer?[/QUOTE]
WOAH
Chapter 2 is called
"Dan the Man"
Any chance of those links becoming available? I'd like to take a peek.
[QUOTE=Punjon;15445945]Any chance of those links becoming available? I'd like to take a peek.[/QUOTE]
see [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showpost.php?p=15442564&postcount=13[/url]
[QUOTE=zzzdude;15436517]Although it is, the highschool threatened to make my friend, who helped me make it, not get his diploma. He's done with school and all he has left is the ceremony. As to not avoid legal matters, I took it down. THEY THREATENED ME WITH THE COPS!![/QUOTE]
Serious? Also how many pages are we talking here?
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[QUOTE=zzzdude;15446402]see [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showpost.php?p=15442564&postcount=13[/url][/QUOTE]
Looks good.
Wh- Why did the school threaten him?
What happened here.
[QUOTE=Zombii;15449176]Wh- Why did the school threaten him?[/QUOTE]
I think because he wrote a book with real school people fighting in the school. Or something.
[QUOTE=Negrul1;15450420]I think because he wrote a book with real school people fighting in the school. Or something.[/QUOTE]
Bah! Banning something because you don't agree with it or you don't like it is communistic, and- wait a second.
[img]http://www.nealzone.com/scott/rush/albums-music/2112.jpg[/img]
It's an OK read.
His grammar and syntax is a bit off sometimes but the potential is there. I didn't mind it.
He took it down because a parent freaked out when he said gun.
Are there any more than the first two chapters that you can show us?
It's nothing groundbreaking, it's like a cross between heroes and battle royale and the sentence structure is a little difficult to read in places.
New information to be up soon!
[b]EDIT:[/b]
Youtube video of a leftover page from my harddrive.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aTJDitVTDU[/media]
I'll upload .mp3s of both censored and non-censored versions.
And the scans will be up soon as well.
:siren:[highlight]THIS IS NOT THE COMPLETE CHAPTER. JUST WHAT I HAVE LEFT OVER[/highlight]:siren:
hahahah this guy is a fucking faggot
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i bet the guy and john have gay sex
[QUOTE=zzzdude;18635865]New information to be up soon!
[b]EDIT:[/b]
Youtube video of a leftover page from my harddrive.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aTJDitVTDU[/media]
I'll upload .mp3s of both censored and non-censored versions.
And the scans will be up soon as well.
:siren:[highlight]THIS IS NOT THE COMPLETE CHAPTER. JUST WHAT I HAVE LEFT OVER[/highlight]:siren:[/QUOTE]
oh god lol that was a horrible reading.
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