A friend of mine thinks that she's a fantastic author.
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also, this stuff is horrid. Has anyone told her yet?
[QUOTE=Oman;20864290]also, this stuff is horrid. Has anyone told her yet?[/QUOTE]
She's gonna find out if she reads this thread.
Good as Twilight.
[QUOTE=Musicfreak59;20864304]She's gonna find out if she reads this thread.[/QUOTE]
the prevention is always better than the cure
[QUOTE=Oman;20864290]also, this stuff is horrid. Has anyone told her yet?[/QUOTE]
What? I liked the story, really. I thought that it was pretty good!
Not to mention OP seemed to have used his real name as his username.
[QUOTE=BlazeFresh;20864335]the prevention is always better than the cure[/QUOTE]
I can agree with that. Making fun of her and lowering her self-esteem is better than a bullet to her hard drive.
And no, I'm not being sarcastic.
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[QUOTE=jakemaheu;20864343]I've told her-- repeatedly.
Nobody listens to the smart kid, though. I'm generally a better, more focused writer than any of the people I know (with a few exceptions), but they just ignore me.[/QUOTE]
You also sound incredibly pretentious.
[QUOTE=Musicfreak59;20864361]I can agree with that. Making fun of her and lowering her self-esteem is better than a bullet to her hard drive.
And no, I'm not being sarcastic.[/QUOTE]
That's not what i was going for, i meant preventing her from either writing at all, or writing utter shit.
Theres no need to be an asshole to this girl OP, unless she deserves it.
But people who you tell and they ignore it purposeley are retarded and deserve what they get if they carry on.
Not really clever to give out your name and a website of someone you know in real life. There can be some real assholes out there.
Some of the guestbook posts are pretty damn funny.
[quote]BFFL's (Best Friends For Life)
Rachel, David N, Samantha G, [B]Jake M[/B]...and ya the rest are in the offended group.[/quote]
Uh-oh. :v:
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/djcms1.JPG[/img]
great going facepunch
op just fucked himself
Shes going to kill you now OP.
[QUOTE=healthpoint;20864424]There can be some real assholes out there.[/QUOTE]
Like us
Dear god this is a piece of shit. Especially how the novel itself has shit grammar, but more importantly the site is all lowercase.
She doesn't know the difference between to and too.
I was The Jackass
First xD!!! Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmao!
Why are you guys posting these horrible things? What's the point in being so mean?
[quote]Finally, as I opened the car door I turned to see the diner we used to meet at all the time. [/quote]
It's the first sentence I read, and I already see where she needs to put a comma.
[QUOTE=Optimistic;20864476][img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/djcms1.JPG[/img]
great going facepunch
op just fucked himself[/QUOTE]
This is what happens OP. You got yourself into this.
With practice maybe she could write a story. You have to start somewhere...
A+ Thread.
Oh, and by the way, posting links to this thread is [I]very[/I] cool OP :smug:
This thread says "Our bad. But not really."
...Wait a fucking minute.
This story;
[quote]By the way [b]Ebony,[/b] stop speaking business geek-ese[/quote]
To compare, the notoriously bad fanfic, My Immortal;
[quote]“Hey [b]Ebony![/b]” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy![/quote]
I'm calling conspiracy. :tinfoil:
Lol OP you're so cool. You claim how other people's stuff is so terrible when you have nothing to show how good you are. You must be a really cool and liked guy who doesn't need to show off for the 'man'.
This thread is good, A+.
pm the pics
HOLY CRAP, GUYS. THIS IS NOT COOL.
Why would you guys say these things? Some of the comments have these... terrible images. Other ones are posing as me!
This thread made my day.
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