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i see 2 [IMG]http://content.screencast.com/users/Ohfoohy/folders/Jing/media/44516ca3-196d-46b5-b6cd-5c3971a75b13/2012-10-08_1440.png[/IMG]
So, the last pic. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/75451007@N08/8068250594/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8029/8068250594_9d10106190_c.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/75451007@N08/8068250594/]Urnäsch-42[/url] von [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/75451007@N08/]Kaizari[/url] auf Flickr And a little something [t]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Urnaschlol.jpg[/t] [t]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Urnaschlol-1.jpg[/t]
[QUOTE=Mindfuck 2;37958032]Would be nice to hear some opinions. [editline]8th October 2012[/editline] Also, both were snapped out of a moving train.[/QUOTE] I like the first one a lot. Has a lot to explore, and the lines also add interest. I also like the desaturated hue you gave it. The second I'm not as much of a fan of. it's alright but really lacks a solid focus, just looks literally like you snapped it out of a moving train in hopes that it would yield something interesting. The colors are alright but kind of seem confusing with their presence in an otherwise washed out-looking shot.
So, I managed to land a job as a cruise ship photographer and have been sailing round Europe for the last couple of months. Just thought I'd pop by and get a bit of criticism on a few of my shots. I've had to resize them and the like to get them to upload in a decent amount of time, ship internet is terrible haha. These ones are from Istanbul The blue Mosque [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/51074600/finished/_DSC0164006_005.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/51074600/finished/_DSC0170001_006.jpg[/t] Some mad bridge with hundreds of fishermen on [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/51074600/finished/_DSC0130003_004.jpg[/t] Our view from the ship at sunset: [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/51074600/finished/Istanbulpano_011.jpg[/t] I know about the seam on the right, haven't got round to sorting it yet! This one's a fantastic little church in Yalta, Ukraine: [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/51074600/finished/_DSC1345_edit_010.jpg[/t] I'll leave it there for the time being, I don't want to throw up too many. Once I get some better net in a port I'll have a look at everyone else's. Chrome is having a fit trying to load this many pictures at once with this godawful net.
More [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066531484/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8309/8066531484_33b5fd4bd5_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066531484/]Walkway[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066533938/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8316/8066533938_ef35a0d3b8_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066533938/]Walkway[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr
[url]http://www.adamheslop.co.uk[/url] some pics; [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/8068742010/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8449/8068742010_f644452aa1_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/8068742010/]001[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7613134694/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8006/7613134694_73716b32f2_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7613134694/]21st july astrophotography 004[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7585000584/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8158/7585000584_202efe474d_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7585000584/]Camp Facepunch 2012 520[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/8006508134/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8171/8006508134_66ab15ac42_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/8006508134/]046[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7188563526/][img]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7091/7188563526_641ae73d5a_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7188563526/]Boxing 098[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7207543136/][img]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7222/7207543136_2f1d40deae_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7207543136/]Stars[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7022330297/][img]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7266/7022330297_4cd1db4f5e_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/adamheslop/7022330297/]Reflections[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/adamheslop/]HezzyUK[/url], on Flickr
Hezzy?
[QUOTE=Dakeyras;37964297][url]http://www.adamheslop.co.uk[/url] some pics;[/QUOTE] Hezzy mate. Good to see you around these parts. Nice strong images too.
[QUOTE=Pickwickian-;37964618]Hezzy mate. Good to see you around these parts. Nice strong images too.[/QUOTE] Oh god take the thumbnails out of the quote hhhhngh! But wow, 1 2 and 6 are excellent.
went camping on the Oregon coast, cc much appreciated I am newb [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069028303/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8176/8069028303_397eab7d18_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069028303/]IMG_6229 copy[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/lucas-k-c/]LucasK_C[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069028507/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8172/8069028507_8e63c0a1db_b.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069028507/]IMG_6070 copy[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/lucas-k-c/]LucasK_C[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069060659/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8310/8069060659_41ca41c6aa.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/lucas-k-c/8069060659/]IMG_5912 copy1[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/lucas-k-c/]LucasK_C[/url], on Flickr
Those shots with kit don't look half bad.
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/nglomb/8068926642/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8450/8068926642_0f397dc0bc.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/nglomb/8068926642/]Grand Canyon[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/nglomb/]NGlomb[/url], on Flickr
[img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8462/8069458155_6ccc8ffde9_z.jpg[/img] [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8314/8069452572_4d2ae79a6d_z.jpg[/img] [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8174/8069452994_fc7fae7086_z.jpg[/img] Some Agfa I shot a while back, forgot about it until now. [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] Also Pick, HE4ZY, Angoose, kaizari and Adam1172, superb work - extremely strong stuff.
<3 salmon a few more: To get this shot, I walked up to the woman, got my composition + setting right, then called out 'scuse me', she looked into the lens, and bam. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/jhaslehurst/8062982060/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8313/8062982060_d797fc992d_c.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/jhaslehurst/8062981497/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8462/8062981497_2bcf5c9f12_c.jpg[/img][/url]
[QUOTE=The Salmon;37966772] [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8314/8069452572_4d2ae79a6d_z.jpg[/img] [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8174/8069452994_fc7fae7086_z.jpg[/img] Some Agfa I shot a while back, forgot about it until now. [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] Also Pick, HE4ZY, Angoose, kaizari and Adam1172, superb work - extremely strong stuff.[/QUOTE] Oh wow, looking real sick dude. The focus is spot on!
Thread's lookin somethin good boys. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/steveotto/8069659563/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8175/8069659563_64b48cbcf2_c.jpg[/img][/url] [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=TomboPukka;37957926]brakes on my car have gone so nothing interesting for a while[/QUOTE] There's nothin stoppin ya. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xAFCn.png[/img]
[img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8038/8069741289_2f04564b03_c.jpg[/img] only picture i've really liked out of the one's i have taken recently.
Adding some more. [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066499249/"][IMG]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8322/8066499249_761c7d4506_z.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066499249/"]Tower[/URL] by [URL="http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/"]AdeYak[/URL], on Flickr [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066505177/"][IMG]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8181/8066505177_f91c0d5fbc_z.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066505177/"]Door[/URL] by [URL="http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/"]AdeYak[/URL], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066495111/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8455/8066495111_f830bb5ef3_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066495111/]Bicycle[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066501011/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8462/8066501011_9a64c2f986_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066501011/]Building[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr
did some product shots for class i don't like our studio we don't have any tone woods (and dear god fabrics bleh), i had to use an apple box thing which is all beat up n shit [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8455/8069749691_bdd67536f2_z.jpg[/img] [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8041/8069810989_0158886758_z.jpg[/img]
Really digging the bottom one, and the diptych is great, it almost makes it look as if it were one picture of a wooden box with the items glued to the side.
thank you :D i was working the yeoman vertical as i usually do with producty stuff, do the colors of the wood flow well enough for them to work as like a duo set like i posted?
the one on the bottom seems warmer, id just balance it out with a little blue or something. looks cool though
The one at the bottom looks weird to me because of the straw sitting in the shadow there but still being lit by the studio lights. [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] The sytawberries are too dark and you could've used photoshop to clean up the wood for a bit. Also the background colour in the first one is kinda repelling.
Then I see the cup is not perfectly in line, the knife is dirty and the drops on the plastic cup I know they are hard to accomplish but you can use the same technique as in here: [url]http://edkphoto.wordpress.com/2010/11/12/water-drops-on-glass/[/url] Rain-X. Although I think with plastic it would be ok to just wipe with cleaning alcohol and spray on the drops. I know it's nitpicking but I am trying to view it like I would have to be the one using the pics for my adds or whatever and since you are in a 100% controled environment every detail is important, even the not evenly green fruit. [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] Also the colour of the wood varies a lot inbetween the two pictures so it's pretty apparent you fiddled with something be it the light or PP anyway I would notice it in an add the wood in the bottom one looks better colourwise btw. [editline]9th October 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=adam1172;37967999]Adding some more. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066495111/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8455/8066495111_f830bb5ef3_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066495111/]Bicycle[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066501011/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8462/8066501011_9a64c2f986_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/ady72/8066501011/]Building[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/ady72/]AdeYak[/url], on Flickr[/QUOTE] Reminds me of my visit to the harley Davidson museum in Milwaukee. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222789138/][img]http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6019/6222789138_4b7118c551_n.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222789138/]Tanks[/url] von [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/59868994@N03/]Terranigmus[/url] auf Flickr The pic is 2 years old now I know the mistakes in composition :p Ah this reminds me [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222821656/][img]http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6232/6222821656_24aca862dc_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222821656/]IMG_9471[/url] von [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/59868994@N03/]Terranigmus[/url] auf Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222823070/][img]http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6106/6222823070_3658c78de5_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/59868994@N03/6222823070/]IMG_9480[/url] von [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/59868994@N03/]Terranigmus[/url] auf Flickr
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/samhaberman/8070384721/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8314/8070384721_6a57983d96_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/samhaberman/8070384721/]Jacob[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/samhaberman/]samhaberman[/url], on Flickr HE4ZY while he was over.
[QUOTE=The Salmon;37969985][url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/samhaberman/8070384721/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8314/8070384721_6a57983d96_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/samhaberman/8070384721/]Jacob[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/samhaberman/]samhaberman[/url], on Flickr HE4ZY while he was over.[/QUOTE] Awesome mate. And to you two, I'll be back in Aus over Christmas (over December and January?) Make a note in your diaries so we can try to meet up. Have a shot of my friend Avi on my balcony: [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070711282/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8320/8070711282_010772134d_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070711282/]Untitled[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/edwinquast/]edwin.quast[/url], on Flickr and two people in rest. [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070469646/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8170/8070469646_fe0a85a23a_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070469646/]Untitled[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/edwinquast/]edwin.quast[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070440382/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8031/8070440382_d492680d66_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/edwinquast/8070440382/]Untitled[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/edwinquast/]edwin.quast[/url], on Flickr
[URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070575220/"][IMG]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8031/8070575220_402a54020c_z.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070575220/"]20121007-IMG_3251[/URL] by [URL="http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/"]Eltocliousus[/URL], on Flickr [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070558910/"][IMG]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8316/8070558910_e72c266cfb_z.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070558910/"]20121007-IMG_3333[/URL] by [URL="http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/"]Eltocliousus[/URL], on Flickr [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070544783/"][IMG]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8180/8070544783_f7dd2c0305_z.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070544783/"]20121007-IMG_3392[/URL] by [URL="http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/"]Eltocliousus[/URL], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070549203/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8313/8070549203_0f48bd83b3_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070549203/]20121007-IMG_3381[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/]Eltocliousus[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070546204/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8180/8070546204_5cc2e80537_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070546204/]20121007-IMG_3374[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/]Eltocliousus[/url], on Flickr [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070595841/][img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8453/8070595841_884703f556_z.jpg[/img][/url] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/77526408@N02/8070595841/]20121005-IMG_3154[/url] by [url=http://www.flickr.com/people/77526408@N02/]Eltocliousus[/url], on Flickr
[QUOTE=Pickwickian-;37970182]Awesome mate. And to you two, I'll be back in Aus over Christmas (over December and January?) Make a note in your [/QUOTE] awesome man, will do!
[QUOTE=Him1411;37960316]The foreground colours are great but the sky looks unnaturally blue, also there are many obvious stitching errors. Good try though bud![/QUOTE] Wow I didn't notice that, cheers for pointing it out. This is how criticism works well, also why I love this forum.
[QUOTE=Angoose;37959236] i miss my dog very much right now.[/QUOTE] for the record guys, I don't mean my dog is dead, I'm just away at uni. :v: Get to see him tomorrow though :D and double :D cos my fujifilm instax 210 has arrived at home, so expect some photos from that. [IMG]http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Y-AzjTJyY9A/TB9QgPSB8VI/AAAAAAAABqk/PXh-740zaAU/s1600/190064-fujifilm_instax_210_slide.jpg[/IMG]
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