[QUOTE=Homez;31619384]That sounds like something I would really like to read. I hope you find it.
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found it.
[release][h2] The Thief[/h2]
There is a thief amongst us!
Guard your loins and your coins everyone
this is the equivalent of a scared little villager ringing
the bell in the town hall. This is
Admonition at its absolute finest and brightest
Baby because there is a thief. And you
should be wary!
She stalks the night quite quiet and
slips into the shadows slipping eerily over
and under the corners and cracks
Elusive, she is able to avert your gaze
and catch your eye for a moment, a second,
and throw.
A master of guises and such she
carries with her faces and aliases who
she can take upon any time and make
you feel absolute inside, but heed,
and be wary, for you are not safe.
She carries no weapon and makes no sound
she walks with grace but takes with her pounds
of loot and treasure. She targets us all
and she's after to steal what we
value the most and whatever appeals
to her eye she will take and hide
out of sight
Never to be seen again and missed by
only a few seconds, but ever so dearly.
I've seen er at work, it was quick, yet painful
to see something of value to be taken away from me,
so spit at her name ad curse at her arts
for she is the one who has stolen
my heart. [/release]
sure you can be cheesy when you're saying you're in deep like with someone but I like to be playful yet sincere.
Line 9: "she slips in the shadow slipping eerily over"
She sure is doing a lot of slipping.
As a whole that was quite fun to read. I don't know if you could say this to a girl, though. You did "spit at her name."
I'm very playful and sarcastic when it comes to courtship. works all the time.
[QUOTE=k00lwhip;31670598]I'm very playful and sarcastic when it comes to courtship. works all the time.[/QUOTE]
I don't know about being playful, but sarcasm makes everything easier
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