I really like the way this guy writes. Wish I could find a whole book like this, same subject matter.
[QUOTE=CupUp;32022029]Awesome read.
I could compare this interned read to that crazy ass cave horror story.[/QUOTE]
Share it? :v:
[QUOTE=ejonkou;32022815]Share it? :v:[/QUOTE]
[url]http://web.archive.org/web/20070101140944/http://www.holyshiite.com/caver/index.html[/url]
I believe this is it. It's quite long, but very entertaining and sometimes fucking creepy.
[QUOTE=CupUp;32023050][url]http://web.archive.org/web/20070101140944/http://www.holyshiite.com/caver/index.html[/url]
I believe this is it. It's quite long, but very entertaining and sometimes fucking creepy.[/QUOTE]
im reading the cave story alone at home, bad idea?
Finally got round to reading the whole thing. And I must say it was worth it, very well written, I just wonder how much of it, if any, is made up. If you haven't, you really should read it. I wonder about the ending, though, about him and Van the Man.
[QUOTE=CupUp;32023050][url]http://web.archive.org/web/20070101140944/http://www.holyshiite.com/caver/index.html[/url]
I believe this is it. It's quite long, but very entertaining and sometimes fucking creepy.[/QUOTE]
Jesus fucking christ.
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!
Its creepy, not scary. [sp]It is a good story, but its fucking SCARY[/sp]
[editline]30th August 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=slippp22;32024092]im reading the cave story alone at home, bad idea?[/QUOTE]
It is scary but not "jump" scary if you get what I am meaning.
I would pay $30-50 to get this shit in hardback.
Great read, I read it last night took me sometime but it was damn worth it! I hope it's a true story and if it's not the guy that wrote this has to write more.
We should give this a Title(maybe make a poll?) and then convert it to .pdf for obvious reasons.
Btw, i laughed when [sp]Paul exploded Scrazzle Dazzle's head and was like, "i thought...i thought...he was reaching for the gun" 0_o I can perfectly imagine such expression haha![/sp]
simply amazing. If this turns out to be a fake i'll be pissed
I've never read any book with as much interest as I had while reading this. This is truly the best story I've ever read, fake or legit. And if you are wondering, you won't ever find out who this guy is, unless you know him personally already. As he stated, he is a smart kid. If he revealed his name to anyone, he would be easy to trace, and would be put in prison for years if caught. That's why you don't see "written by x". No one wrote it, neither can anyone participating in it prove it real, either because they are dead or they doesn't now.
I took an hour reading this, imaging it as a movie. I almost can't belive that something like this can happen to a man at the age of 18, in a timespan of 1-2 years. How ever, I belive that there are only VERY few persons in the world who can write a story like this, in such detail, without it being true. So, whoever wrote this, good job on doing it. I kind of feel like that every person in the world should know this story.
Also, this was my 200th post. Yay.
The people talking about the cave story earlier, the cave is real, but Ted decided it would be fun to embellish the story and make it a horror blog.
[QUOTE=Methylparaben;32027754]simply amazing. If this turns out to be a fake i'll be pissed[/QUOTE]
why? the fact that people died kind of makes it shitty if it was true
good story though, definitely not the best story I've read but still good.
even if this isn't real i've heard worse stories than these about people i've known.
people will even torture each other for money and drugs.
This was well-written. It wasn't over the top. Although I doubt it's authenticity, it is still a very entertaining read. Even if it is fake, it's believable and easy to imagine.
Fuck I want to make this into a movie.
It's fake, but this would honestly make a good movie if the inconsistencies were ironed out
[editline]31st August 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=blackberry82;32033719]This was well-written. It wasn't over the top. Although I doubt it's authenticity, it is still a very entertaining read. Even if it is fake, it's believable and easy to imagine.[/QUOTE]
The main problem I had with it was that it WAS too over the top
Good for Hollywood, but that's not how real life works
Nice little dit
The ending setup reminds me of a less intense version of the ending to Adulthood
[QUOTE=flyboy463;32025790]I would pay $30-50 to get this shit in hardback.[/QUOTE]
Agree'd, but with a longer story.
[QUOTE=SomTervo;32031659]why? the fact that people died kind of makes it shitty if it was true
good story though, definitely not the best story I've read but still good.[/QUOTE]
Because if it is a fake it's just like a film, cool story but it would never happen. If it's real it's amazing because you would never think it could happen but it has.
Also do you really think the fact two people got killed makes me not want it to be true. as they say an african child dies every second so who gives a fuck about these people
[QUOTE=LordCrypto;32029079]The people talking about the cave story earlier, the cave is real, but Ted decided it would be fun to embellish the story and make it a horror blog.[/QUOTE]
it was pretty creepy not going to lie, the pictures and dates made it seem so real, like he had proof
[QUOTE=thisispain;32032291]even if this isn't real i've heard worse stories than these about people i've known.
people will even torture each other for money and drugs.[/QUOTE]
Especially for Meth.
Or if you're in drug cartel territory in Mexico.
[QUOTE=CHRHN;32028423]. How ever, I belive that there are only VERY few persons in the world who can write a story like this, in such detail, without it being true. [/QUOTE]
Are you dumb? Harry potter or any other best selling series has a ton more detai; than this short story has, it's not that hard to make something up.
[QUOTE=Methylparaben;32038055]
Also do you really think the fact two people got killed makes me not want it to be true. as they say an african child dies every second so who gives a fuck about these people[/QUOTE]
so you'd be cool with me killing your family right
[QUOTE=slippp22;32040540]it was pretty creepy not going to lie, the pictures and dates made it seem so real, like he had proof[/QUOTE]
Except the whole "My video camera conviniently died and my photos conviniently wouldn't develop"
[QUOTE=Itsjustguy;31941865]My god...[/QUOTE]
it's full of stars
[QUOTE=RayvenQ;32043251]Except the whole "My video camera conviniently died and my photos conviniently wouldn't develop"[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I totally forgot about that part, makes me wonder now
[editline]31st August 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=Callius;32041498]Are you dumb? Harry potter or any other best selling series has a ton more detai; than this short story has, it's not that hard to make something up.[/QUOTE]
harry potter is based of a true story
Tell the person to send this in as a movie outline.
Colin Ferrel can play Colin Ferrel.
One of the absolute best reads I've had in a quite a while.
Thank you OP for sharing your find with us all.
good read even tho it's fake
Well, that was depressing
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