My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic V3 - "Convert or Consume"
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A new challange!
You're on, Tales.
[QUOTE=commander204;28754306]I had some free time so I tried to write something in english(not my first language.) it is a (sad) story involving Luna and Derpy.
Here is the URL in case you want to read it:
[url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PFAKh2QS5BWZVkmgaEruiYXYC2Goiswxd_GsLzoxTyQ/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKPcmb0G#[/url]
I would really appreciate any form of CC.[/QUOTE]
It's a brilliant story, but as you said, the English is a little off at parts. Aside from that, it was a great read.
[QUOTE=commander204;28754306]I had some free time so I tried to write something in english(not my first language.) it is a (sad) story involving Luna and Derpy.
Here is the URL in case you want to read it:
[url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PFAKh2QS5BWZVkmgaEruiYXYC2Goiswxd_GsLzoxTyQ/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKPcmb0G#[/url]
I would really appreciate any form of CC.[/QUOTE]
Pretty good, until [sp]the cancer part, which just came out nowhere. I was suprised...[/sp]
[QUOTE=MasterG;28754121]Play these all at once:
[url]http://endlessvideo.com/watch?v=RLkc1huIBCo[/url]
[url]http://endlessvideo.com/watch?v=MmRYccuXWNA[/url]
[url]http://endlessvideo.com/watch?v=ofvJU3AFOOo[/url]
FOREVER, FOREVER, FOREVER.[/QUOTE]
I just sat through 10 minutes of that...
Pinkamena Diane Pie.
[QUOTE=Skunky;28754400]Pretty good, until [sp]the cancer part, which just came out nowhere. I was suprised...[/sp][/QUOTE]
I think that was quite good actually. It came right out of nowhere to us, but also to the characters. It's just as shocking to us as it is to Luna, so it helps us relate.
[editline]22nd March 2011[/editline]
Hey, I'm not too far off gold member now, am I? Awesome, I'll have to get myself a kickass GIF.
[QUOTE=Skunky;28754400]Pretty good, until [sp]the cancer part, which just came out nowhere. I was suprised...[/sp][/QUOTE]
Well I wanted a way to explain Derpys behavior, so this idea came to my head, I wanted to give the reader some hope. I wonder if I should make Part 3.
[QUOTE=SNNS-SEAN;28754334]Dunno if this has been posted or not.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UO9TGlqXhGs&feature=related[/media][/QUOTE]
Weird, I just watched that a few days ago...
The movie that is
[QUOTE=commander204;28754453]Well I wanted a way to explain Derpys behavior, so this idea came to my head, I wanted to give the reader some hope. I wonder if I should make Part 3.[/QUOTE]
Hell yes.
[QUOTE=tpkjmw;28754230]Pinkie!
[img_thumb]https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-nImHgCbQnI4/TYj5alArJRI/AAAAAAAACgk/OLSA2HD3k7E/s1600/2887+-+angel+applejack+cosplay+fluttershy+pinkie_pie+rainbow_dash+rarity+twilight_sparkle.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
Rarity jesus chirst :froggonk:
[QUOTE=commander204;28754453]Well I wanted a way to explain Derpys behavior, so this idea came to my head, I wanted to give the reader some hope. I wonder if I should make Part 3.[/QUOTE]
I don't know. You can only go either happy or sad from there, and either way you'll end up disappointing somebody. You can't please everyone, but you can please as many as you can, right? I think you should leave it at this.
[QUOTE=MrBond;28754363]Oh, look at that. I don't know about you, but it runs pretty quickly here.
Also I see you declined my friend request :([/QUOTE]
That was you? Oops :frown:
[QUOTE=SNNS-SEAN;28754081]I'd get a Derpy plushie if I could get it life-sized.
Fuck that would be awesome.[/QUOTE]
I've been thinking for a while; what is life-sized when it comes to MLP? Are they the same size as real life ponies? Wouldn't that make Rarity's cat quite big?
Well its nice to see fanfic that isn't a twisted torture story.
[QUOTE=Pavarotti;28754604]I've been thinking for a while; what is life-sized when it comes to MLP? Are they the same size as real life ponies? Wouldn't that make Rarity's cat quite big?[/QUOTE]
From what I've heard, they're considered 3-4 feet tall.
[QUOTE=Pavarotti;28754604]I've been thinking for a while; what is life-sized when it comes to MLP? Are they the same size as real life ponies? Wouldn't that make Rarity's cat quite big?[/QUOTE]
Giant ass/butt marks. :q:
[media]http://cdn0.knowyourmeme.com/i/000/107/910/original/3197%20-%20applejack%20comic%20fluttershy%20gilda%20mustache%20parody%20pinkie_pie%20rainbow_dash%20rarity%20Snails%20snips%20spike%20twilight_sparkle.jpg?1300819143[/media]
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28754617]Well its nice to see fanfic that isn't a twisted torture story.[/QUOTE]
Speaking of which, I never got any comments on this.
[url]http://pastebin.com/zTCaQQGD[/url]
Made it myself, it's only the introduction though. I didn't want to continue it until I had some criticism. Btw, this has original characters in it in case you didn't like them.
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28754623]From what I've heard, they're considered 3-4 feet tall.[/QUOTE]
They're selling them [b]THAT[/b] big?!? One way to fill a room if you get them all I guess.
[QUOTE=Pavarotti;28754604]I've been thinking for a while; what is life-sized when it comes to MLP? Are they the same size as real life ponies? Wouldn't that make Rarity's cat quite big?[/QUOTE]
Read the title of the show.
My [b]Little[/b] Pony.
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28754685]They're selling them [b]THAT[/b] big?!? One way to fill a room if you get them all I guess.[/QUOTE]
The characters in the show, you silly filly. The plushies are probably just... well, plushie sized.
[QUOTE=ief014;28754691]Read the title of the show.
My [b]Little[/b] Pony.[/QUOTE]
Duh, I feel stupid
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28754657]Speaking of which, I never got any comments on this.
[url]http://pastebin.com/zTCaQQGD[/url]
Made it myself, it's only the introduction though. I didn't want to continue it until I had some criticism. Btw, this has original characters in it in case you didn't like them.[/QUOTE]
It's good, I would read more. You've left it at a point where I am now intrigued as to what will happen next.
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28754700]The characters in the show, you silly filly. The plushies are probably just... well, plushie sized.[/QUOTE]
are there really plushies of the show?
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28754891]It's good, I would read more. You've left it at a point where I am now intrigued as to what will happen next.[/QUOTE]
Well I'm flattered, but did you find any faults that I could work on? Was there anything about the characters that you disliked?
Sorry for bugging you like this, but I'm a little bit of a perfectionist when it comes to writing.
[QUOTE=Ryuken;28754924]are there really plushies of the show?[/QUOTE]
Don't think so. It's a shame really as I would personally get every single one.
[QUOTE=Ryuken;28754924]are there really plushies of the show?[/QUOTE]
If not, Hasbro's missing out on a shitton of money.
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