• My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic V3 - "Convert or Consume"
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That fanfiction was nice. I'd love to read a part 3.
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GOOD NEWS, EVERYONE! Baby ponies are made the ol' fashioned way! [url]http://comments.deviantart.com/4/1603670/1889371659[/url]
I wish I had trombone based super powers.
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28754951]Well I'm flattered, but did you find any faults that I could work on? Was there anything about the characters that you disliked? Sorry for bugging you like this, but I'm a little bit of a perfectionist when it comes to writing.[/QUOTE] Well the narrative layout means that you need to write more before I can criticize much. The characters at first just seemed thrown in but I figured from what you had written it would all be explained in due course; this being one of the reasons to hook people in to read more of the story.
Good night, everypony. Enjoy the rest of your evening!
[QUOTE=Gene-Ocide;28755143]Good night, everypony. Enjoy the rest of your evening![/QUOTE] I'm sure your evening will be substantially better than mine. I just caught another fucking cold.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755079]I wish I had trombone based super powers.[/QUOTE] I wish Lauren Faust would read this thread.
[QUOTE=Skunky;28755174]I wish Lauren Faust would read this thread.[/QUOTE] She has, and she hates you.
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28755134]Well the narrative layout means that you need to write more before I can criticize much. The characters at first just seemed thrown in but I figured from what you had written it would all be explained in due course; this being one of the reasons to hook people in to read more of the story.[/QUOTE] Alright, thanks. I'm going to bed shortly, so I'll start on part 2 tomorrow. I'm only going to stick it on my DeviantArt when it's complete so you'll probably find me posting it here until it's done. Thanks for your honesty too, you're not such a dumb critic after all!
[QUOTE=Glance;28755190]She has, and she hates you.[/QUOTE] I bet you make friends quick.
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28755071]GOOD NEWS, EVERYONE! Baby ponies are made the ol' fashioned way! [url]http://comments.deviantart.com/4/1603670/1889371659[/url][/QUOTE] Not that the rule 34ers weren't going crazy already, but now, :froggonk:
[url]http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1751105/[/url] Holy shit look at that rating. Way too low.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755240][url]http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1751105/[/url] Holy shit look at that rating. Way too low.[/QUOTE] Oh no! That's bad!
Welp, night guys. Don't cut each others' throats with your knives of pointless melodrama!
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28755201]Alright, thanks. I'm going to bed shortly, so I'll start on part 2 tomorrow. I'm only going to stick it on my DeviantArt when it's complete so you'll probably find me posting it here until it's done. Thanks for your honesty too, you're not such a dumb critic after all![/QUOTE] Glad to hear it.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755190]She has, and she hates you.[/QUOTE] [img]http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb91/workJPP/Bison.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28755322]Welp, night guys. Don't cut each others' throats with your knives of pointless melodrama![/QUOTE] Good night. Dream about ponies!
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;28755322]Welp, night guys. Don't cut each others' throats with your knives of pointless melodrama![/QUOTE] Slit her throat, spill her blood, bash her in.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755379]Slit her throat, spill her blood, bash her in.[/QUOTE] Take out her organs, look for cupcakes.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755379]Slit her throat, spill her blood, bash her in.[/QUOTE] Seriously, you must be super popular in RL.
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28755410]Seriously, you must be super popular in RL.[/QUOTE] Someone doesn't get a major cultural reference.
i thought this was a kid's show i didn't expect it to have so many fans here :confused:
[QUOTE=Roo-kie;28755480]i thought this was a kid's show i didn't expect it to have so many fans here :confused:[/QUOTE] :frog: [editline]23rd March 2011[/editline] It's not that hard to read the first post, you know.
[QUOTE=Glance;28755425]Someone doesn't get a major cultural reference.[/QUOTE] Pig chant in Lord of the Flies right?
[QUOTE=A Dumb Critic;28755535]Pig chant in Lord of the Flies right?[/QUOTE] Nice googling bro.
This thread is now back in normal speed.
[QUOTE=Skunky;28755517]:frog: [editline]23rd March 2011[/editline] It's not that hard to read the first post, you know.[/QUOTE] Don't be so touchy
[img]http://gyazo.com/9631593401457bce2efc2bce76c2e42a.png[/img] God dammit. You know what? No. I can't freaking do this. Someone give me a tl:dr of the last thousand posts because I am NOT going to read them.
[QUOTE=Skunky;28755581]This thread is now back in normal speed.[/QUOTE] I think I prefer this to 300+ posts in 30mins or one an hour.
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