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[deano270]

[QUOTE=chaz13;46056448]I can dig this! You could definitely make something pretty cool from the vocal stuff. The actually song itself is eh but I think you know that :P

That track is fantastic man, the synths are so warm. It's so good!

Here's a new little neurofunk sort of thing I started today:

[media]http://soundcloud.com/awesomesaucee/ok-then[/media]

EDIT: Fixed the really shitty mastering (ish).[/QUOTE]
That's a great atmosphere you build during the intro. Definitely gives me that neuro vibe! I like it.
In terms of the drop, the main stabbing bass could do with some kind of low pass filter and some modulation going up and down, try and play with that.
Drum wise, layer a more subby kick drum under the one you've got now. Sidechain it to your sub bass line to give it some room, then EQ it to fit with the other kick by removing it's top end accordingly. Also, a more defining snare with a little bit of reverb on it will make a huge difference in bringing out those drums. Try and get one that fills more of the midrange to complement the one you have already, then EQ each snare to have their own space. Slap on a multiband compressor to your drum bus for extra punch.
If you want, adding some creepy atmospheric effects can also really build on the neuro feel.

Hope some of my points make sense. You have got a good track going there :)

[Consciousness]

Trying to regain my creative workflow
I kinda crashed in all aspects of life for a bit there,
had some down time

but i'm picking things back up quicker each time this kinda thing happens,
Trying to stay focused on what I do

so back on the horse, a relatively simple electronic track, still got work to do on it and i've got ideas on how to improve it, but that's in terms of mixing..
I was hoping for a bit of feedback for reference cause i'm running into that same old creative wall as always with this one

[media]http://soundcloud.com/petebound/recovery-sample[/media]

[editline]7th October 2014[/editline]

[QUOTE=KmartSqrl;46157261]I dig the atmosphere in this a lot. The little reversy bits when the melody comes in are rad.

Here's a tune I started yesterday. Not mixed down yet really.

[url]https://soundcloud.com/sonis/coffee-steam/s-Be133[/url][/QUOTE]

Rundown on my thoughts as I listen to this:

i actually quite like this, there's some aspects that I wasn't entirely fond of but it's pretty captivating
nice music to chill and drink coffee too, i really like the ambient high pitch synths, very nice with the dru work

the strong lead synth comes in pretty unexpected, as eyefunk pointed out, not sure if vibe I like or dislike that, but it was neat, and progresses quite nicely from there into something quite funky

not huge on the peak section around 2:35 onwards, bit repetitive and started losing interest a little, not that there's anything particularly wrong with it it could just use some adjustments in terms of flow

the drum work overall is pretty nice, definitely make sure you get your synth mixes right,

the syncopated riff's towards the end of those chorus synths or whatever I really enjoy
but I feel it goes back to the slow carry/ambient vibe too quickly and leaves me a little unsatisfied

overall, it's pretty sweet and has the potential to be something pretty fucking awesome if you don't give up on it just yet,

i'd personally suggest a bit more anticipatory build, the surprise isn't necessarily bad but it does feel a bit like it comes out of nowhere, lengthier peaks with those strong synths, especially once the rhythm gets a bit more hyped up, please please please, those bits sounded great and it was worth sitting through the chill to get to it, those parts seemed pretty stand out and you don't want to under emphasize them leaving your listener feeling dissatisfied or unfulfilled with it if that makes sense
and possibly cut back the lengthiness of the in-between sections by a tad, though I didn't mind sitting through it the first time leading up to that unexpected synth section,
the second time round, even with the bass lead peak part, it just felt a little too lengthy to get back to it
i'm not hugely fond of that strong bass lead tone, it's intriguing for what it is, don't ditch it, it works, i think it's the levels/mixing aspect of it that I found a bit disagreeable

but anyway, that's just like, my opinion, keep on with it either way and get it finished, it's nearly there

[editline]7th October 2014[/editline]

[QUOTE=Eyefunk;46151330]MAN I'm loving this. Great work on the percussion, the panning works perfectly and the beat strongly drives the song.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/prosper-blue/world[/media]
i know my vocals are very rough and not great sounding but I really wanted to do something w/ vocals and I couldn't find anyone to sing for me so...

yeah here, please give me criticism. I wrote this a while ago, but I really want to continue it.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/eyefunk/go-a-bit-differently-pt-2[/media]

here's another[/QUOTE]

As I listen

World:
This has a pretty trippy atmosphere but I find it oddly satisfying, i like those distortion/builds, the bass seems a bit synthetic/out of place sounding in the context; it's not bad, i just feel like it needs some orchestral drum work to back the tone of it,

the vocals in terms of tone sound fine the way you've done them, they suit the atmosphere,
but they need improvement on the pitch itself, you don't necessarily have to re-record to do that, you could just do some basic pitch correction on your samples

but honestly, props for using your own voice in the first place

The second track is neat I love the atmopshere of it, and the melody is quite pretty in a way without breaking the atmosphere

very dreamy and once again, pretty trippy. Nothing I can particularly offer criticism on although I did notice the tone of the melody
at points had some slightly off sounding backing especially in the higher pitch notes,
a tiny bit awkward but barely noticeable, not enough to distract me too much from the flow of the song it self
and in a way it kinda supports the atmosphere

you're good at hitting that sorta vibe in a way that follows through with a nice sense of flow
it's not often I find pieces in that kinda atmospheric style particularly enjoyable

[Larry_G]

Just finished up a sad remix of a 2 Chainz classic:

[media]http://soundcloud.com/houcemate/2-chainz-am-i-different-houcemate-sad-remix[/media]

lol

[Skeeter]

Hey bud, much like christmas you're expected to give as much as you get, there are some tracks above that I'm sure would love to be heard and getting some feedback from you :) I'm sure either of the ones you'll give feedback to will be happy to return the favour, as per the rules of this subforum and thread.

[deano270]

[QUOTE=deano270;46169320]That's a great atmosphere you build during the intro. Definitely gives me that neuro vibe! I like it.
In terms of the drop, the main stabbing bass could do with some kind of low pass filter and some modulation going up and down, try and play with that.
Drum wise, layer a more subby kick drum under the one you've got now. Sidechain it to your sub bass line to give it some room, then EQ it to fit with the other kick by removing it's top end accordingly. Also, a more defining snare with a little bit of reverb on it will make a huge difference in bringing out those drums. Try and get one that fills more of the midrange to complement the one you have already, then EQ each snare to have their own space. Slap on a multiband compressor to your drum bus for extra punch.
If you want, adding some creepy atmospheric effects can also really build on the neuro feel.

Hope some of my points make sense. You have got a good track going there :)[/QUOTE]

I've been working on a sort of deep house track a little while now. think it's near completion so any feedback on how it sounds is very welcome :)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/deano490/point-3-get-down-plug-wip-preview[/media]

[Waffler]

[QUOTE=deano270;46203416]I've been working on a sort of deep house track a little while now. think it's near completion so any feedback on how it sounds is very welcome :)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/deano490/point-3-get-down-plug-wip-preview[/media][/QUOTE]

Track isn't available! :(

[QUOTE=Larry_G;46178015]Just finished up a sad remix of a 2 Chainz classic:

[media]http://soundcloud.com/houcemate/2-chainz-am-i-different-houcemate-sad-remix[/media]

lol[/QUOTE]

I love this so much (Especially that Piano at the end!) Such a great spin to the track!

[QUOTE=Consciousness;46171868]Trying to regain my creative workflow
I kinda crashed in all aspects of life for a bit there,
had some down time

but i'm picking things back up quicker each time this kinda thing happens,
Trying to stay focused on what I do

so back on the horse, a relatively simple electronic track, still got work to do on it and i've got ideas on how to improve it, but that's in terms of mixing..
I was hoping for a bit of feedback for reference cause i'm running into that same old creative wall as always with this one

[media]http://soundcloud.com/petebound/recovery-sample[/media]
[/quote]

The drums in this are quiet. Snare could do some boosting around 3khz area to add some clarity. I'd probably throw some hi-hat percussion in there as well for some more texture.

I've started work on free EP/Album. It's going to be a mixture of different EDM genres. I have a lot of free time, so I'll be working hard on trying to get this album to sound really nice and I'm drawing inspiration from Zhu, Porter Robinson, Flume & a few Melbourne Bounce/Dutch Artists. This is also good way to work on improving my skills and learning new things.

Soundcloud Playlists don't work properly on facepunch so I'll have to do the tracks individually.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/skyreach-original-mix-sample[/media]
'Skyreach' - Chillstep/Electronica/Future Trap

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/tell-me-original-mix[/media]
'Tell Me' - Deep House/Future House

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/torn-apart-original-mix[/media]
'Torn Apart' - Deep House/Future House/Electro-House/Trap

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/loose-control-sample[/media]
'Lose Control' - Funk/Hip-Hop/Soul/Trap/Electronica

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/carnival-original-mix-wip[/media]
'Carnival' - Big Room/Electro House/Carnival

Would love some feedback, suggestions, criticism - I need to get these tracks as professional as I can!

[deano270]

[QUOTE=Waffler;46213206]Track isn't available! :(

[/QUOTE]
oops! accidentally made it private.
have fixed it now :)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/deano490/point-3-get-down-plug-wip-preview/[/media]

[Deweze]

[QUOTE=deano270;46218603]oops! accidentally made it private.
have fixed it now :)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/deano490/point-3-get-down-plug-wip-preview/[/media][/QUOTE]

This is really dope man, you make it seem so easy lmao. You kept me interested the entire 8 minutes and that's hard to do so nice work. The breakdown at 1:02 was my favorite part but overall it sounds real clean, and put up more songs!!

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Not sure if I posted this here, my latest track

[media]http://soundcloud.com/faceclef/indianbassmusic[/media]

[Ms. Gyroscope]

[QUOTE=deano270;46218603]oops! accidentally made it private.
have fixed it now :)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/deano490/point-3-get-down-plug-wip-preview/[/media][/QUOTE]

Really pro sounding. Super good. You change it up enough to keep it entertaining.

[editline]13th October 2014[/editline]

[QUOTE=Deweze;46219083]This is really dope man, you make it seem so easy lmao. You kept me interested the entire 8 minutes and that's hard to do so nice work. The breakdown at 1:02 was my favorite part but overall it sounds real clean, and put up more songs!!

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Not sure if I posted this here, my latest track

[media]http://soundcloud.com/faceclef/indianbassmusic[/media][/QUOTE]

Your kick drum could use a compresser. It needs more punch, other than that its a neat track.

As for ME Here is something I'm working on right now. Its not much. I'm just wondering if I pulled off the 7/4 right or not? Also how do my beats sound?

[media]http://soundcloud.com/corn-mouth/super-unfinished[/media]

[deano270]

[QUOTE=Deweze;46219083]This is really dope man, you make it seem so easy lmao. You kept me interested the entire 8 minutes and that's hard to do so nice work. The breakdown at 1:02 was my favorite part but overall it sounds real clean, and put up more songs!!
[/QUOTE]

Awesome, Thanks! My main concern was the length so I'm really pleased it kept you interested :)
I actually produce with a friend under the name Point 3. Our actual soundcloud is [url=https://soundcloud.com/point3music]here[/url]
[QUOTE=Mysterious Mr.E;46220309]Really pro sounding. Super good. You change it up enough to keep it entertaining.

[/QUOTE]

Thanks so much :)

[editline]13th October 2014[/editline]

[QUOTE=Waffler;46213206]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/tell-me-original-mix[/media]
'Tell Me' - Deep House/Future House
[/QUOTE]
Mixdown is crispy overall, sounds good!

Some thoughts as i listened through it a couple of times:
Vocal sample is too dominant. It doesn't leave much room for the drums to come through. Try and EQ it so that there is room for the drums to come through. In particular the clap gets lost at times, which is a shame because the drum break is really solid!
Bass patch is great with a clean sub. From a stylistic point of view, I think a very short/no attack on the bass will make it much more stabby and bring out the groove, but sound design is great! Alternatively, modulate the attack so some stabs have a short attack, and maybe every 4th beat or something could have the attack increase?
Your plucky lead also feels a little wooden, tighten up the EQ so only the necessary frequencies are there but it still keeps it's warmth. Chorus might give a better feel.
Have you thought about a few cymbal crashes and white noise risers? That can sometimes help build energy, just be careful not to have them too overpowering.

Bridge from 2:55 is really cool though, that's my favourite part :)

[Hakita]

[QUOTE=Hakita;46147745]sounds good, but your snare needs more oomph to it, it needs to sound sharper to really get that hype going

i did 2 new recording tests recently, uploaded them only today because i dunno
since this'll be the first time i'm doing music with actual instruments i want to get the recording stuff right before i start with making the actual music

first is a lo-fi acoustic recording test, which is how i'm going to make the intro for the album
the buzzing is too loud, gotta fix that, though
[media]http://soundcloud.com/hakita/lo-fi-recording-test[/media]

second is another dronetest, i'm really happy with how this is side of the album is turning out
i just have to figure out how to make my drones last longer now
[media]http://soundcloud.com/hakita/dronetest-2[/media][/QUOTE]
anybody? pretty please?

[Ms. Gyroscope]

[QUOTE=Hakita;46221506]anybody? pretty please?[/QUOTE]

For drones use a compressor that will raise the volume of the plucks so they slowly fade out or something.

[Waffler]

[QUOTE=deano270;46221273]Awesome, Thanks! My main concern was the length so I'm really pleased it kept you interested :)
I actually produce with a friend under the name Point 3. Our actual soundcloud is [url=https://soundcloud.com/point3music]here[/url]

Thanks so much :)

[editline]13th October 2014[/editline]

Mixdown is crispy overall, sounds good!

Some thoughts as i listened through it a couple of times:
Vocal sample is too dominant. It doesn't leave much room for the drums to come through. Try and EQ it so that there is room for the drums to come through. In particular the clap gets lost at times, which is a shame because the drum break is really solid!
Bass patch is great with a clean sub. From a stylistic point of view, I think a very short/no attack on the bass will make it much more stabby and bring out the groove, but sound design is great! Alternatively, modulate the attack so some stabs have a short attack, and maybe every 4th beat or something could have the attack increase?
Your plucky lead also feels a little wooden, tighten up the EQ so only the necessary frequencies are there but it still keeps it's warmth. Chorus might give a better feel.
Have you thought about a few cymbal crashes and white noise risers? That can sometimes help build energy, just be careful not to have them too overpowering.

Bridge from 2:55 is really cool though, that's my favourite part :)[/QUOTE]

Thanks a lot man!! I'll take account everything you said

[Ms. Gyroscope]

Anybody going to comment on mine? :<

[Hakita]

[QUOTE=Mysterious Mr.E;46220309]As for ME Here is something I'm working on right now. Its not much. I'm just wondering if I pulled off the 7/4 right or not? Also how do my beats sound?

[media]http://soundcloud.com/corn-mouth/super-unfinished[/media][/QUOTE]
build-up is pretty lacking and i feel overall it should have more bass, especially when the breakbeats hit, but otherwise sounds good, the 7/4 beat flows well and doesn't stick out at all

[chaz13]

[QUOTE=Mysterious Mr.E;46220309]Really pro sounding. Super good. You change it up enough to keep it entertaining.

Your kick drum could use a compresser. It needs more punch, other than that its a neat track.

As for ME Here is something I'm working on right now. Its not much. I'm just wondering if I pulled off the 7/4 right or not? Also how do my beats sound?

[media]http://soundcloud.com/corn-mouth/super-unfinished[/media][/QUOTE]

This is pretty cool but I don't feel like the calm synths work well with the manic drums... It feels like there's a bit too much going on between the layered synth and the drums, perhaps cutting some of the synths out when the drums come in will help. The high end on the drums is pretty painful to, put some EQ on it I think.

Threw this together in an hour or two, going to cover it with my usual singer (but she refused to do jazz this time) so I'm trying to decide how to make it different to the original:

[media]http://soundcloud.com/awesomesaucee/sunday-morning[/media]

[Ms. Gyroscope]

Thanks

[Dredile]

[QUOTE=chaz13;46233509]

Threw this together in an hour or two, going to cover it with my usual singer (but she refused to do jazz this time) so I'm trying to decide how to make it different to the original:

[URL="http://facepunch.com/"]Listen to Soundcloud recording[/URL]

[URL]http://soundcloud.com/awesomesaucee/sunday-morning[/URL]

[/QUOTE]

It's really clean and sounds good to me. Good melody, i think every now and again one of the piano hits is a little off time? Not exactly sure, its a very minor thing. Good job.

I guess this is dubstep although I'm not sure. Either way its my first proper attempt at really hard dance music. Any feedback would be appreciated.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media]

[Eyefunk]

[QUOTE=Dredile;46237242]It's really clean and sounds good to me. Good melody, i think every now and again one of the piano hits is a little off time? Not exactly sure, its a very minor thing. Good job.

I guess this is dubstep although I'm not sure. Either way its my first proper attempt at really hard dance music. Any feedback would be appreciated.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media][/QUOTE]

The kick is quite obviously a default kick with FL studio. Mess around with it a bit more to make it more original sounding.

cool buildup actually, didn't really expect it until the vocal sample. while I'm not one that's huge on dubstep at all, you seem to have a hard time focusing on a specific sound that you're going for throughout the song. It gets really dark at certain points, but then some happy chords are thrown in.

The second drop is very weak and needs work. There's not enough buildup into it, and the drop itself was a bit lackluster.

Besides that generic kick and snare, you got some cool sounds in this song that I didn't really expect, so thumbs up. It's like bipolar dubstep.

New thing, it's a WIP (as in it isn't finished song structure-wise) and I need help deciding where to go with this. Inspired by ben frost and wolf eyes:
[media]http://soundcloud.com/prosper-blue/old-pastors-bell-1[/media]

[Dredile]

[QUOTE=Eyefunk;46255494]The kick is quite obviously a default kick with FL studio. Mess around with it a bit more to make it more original sounding.

cool buildup actually, didn't really expect it until the vocal sample. while I'm not one that's huge on dubstep at all, you seem to have a hard time focusing on a specific sound that you're going for throughout the song. It gets really dark at certain points, but then some happy chords are thrown in.

The second drop is very weak and needs work. There's not enough buildup into it, and the drop itself was a bit lackluster.

Besides that generic kick and snare, you got some cool sounds in this song that I didn't really expect, so thumbs up. It's like bipolar dubstep.

New thing, it's a WIP (as in it isn't finished song structure-wise) and I need help deciding where to go with this. Inspired by ben frost and wolf eyes:
[URL="http://facepunch.com/"]Listen to Soundcloud recording[/URL]

[URL]http://soundcloud.com/prosper-blue/old-pastors-bell-1[/URL]

[/QUOTE]

Track in question
[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media]
Haha actually the kick isn't from fl studio. But its cool. Yeah i need to work on the drops a bit, thanks for the feedback. :)

As for your track I think it could use some more compression on some parts. Some sounds are extremely loud (metal clang) and some aren't. The clang to kick segment is a little weird, maybe the sounds don't fit well together? Good job though production value wise.

[Eyefunk]

[QUOTE=Dredile;46261867]Track in question
[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media]
Haha actually the kick isn't from fl studio. But its cool. Yeah i need to work on the drops a bit, thanks for the feedback. :)

As for your track I think it could use some more compression on some parts. Some sounds are extremely loud (metal clang) and some aren't. The clang to kick segment is a little weird, maybe the sounds don't fit well together? Good job though production value wise.[/QUOTE]

Whoops! Didn't mean to sound rude with the default FL Studio comment. I just personally think it could be a bit more original sounding. And thank you for the suggestions, I'll work on making the song a bit less harsh.

[killa101]

[QUOTE=Dredile;46261867]Track in question
[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media]
Haha actually the kick isn't from fl studio. But its cool. Yeah i need to work on the drops a bit, thanks for the feedback. :)
[/QUOTE]
I like this track, you have a good sense for composition. However, the track itself sounds as if it suffers from too much frequency boosting on the master channel, whether it be compression or something else. The part at 0:18, the kick is overpowering the instrumental and at 1:10, the instrumental is overpowering the kick. There needs to be a balance, maybe could use more sidechaining.

Here is another track from my album. Curious to hear what y'all think!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjmwYoFTJyw&list=UUSUcB51tSX4If2gx3HxYtOQ[/media]

[Legion Varus]

[QUOTE=Dredile;46261867]Track in question
[media]http://soundcloud.com/dredile/scrael-friend-of-yog-sothoth[/media]
Haha actually the kick isn't from fl studio. But its cool. Yeah i need to work on the drops a bit, thanks for the feedback. :)
[/QUOTE]

Interesting piece. Personally the chord progression you were using sounded a bit off. I don't know what it was but, it just didn't sound like something I could see myself jamming too. Also work on dynamics, it felt like all you were using was loud and very loud.

[QUOTE=killa101;46270235]
Here is another track from my album. Curious to hear what y'all think!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjmwYoFTJyw&list=UUSUcB51tSX4If2gx3HxYtOQ[/media][/QUOTE]

As usual your stuff sounds very professional.

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So recently I start working a full time job and haven't had much time to write some music. Its been over a month since I've written anything, so I decided to start working on music again. Here is a work in progress orchestral piece. I'm pretty sure this would fit great in a movie or game.

A Brilliant Idea - (Title is also a work in progress) [media]http://soundcloud.com/russiangodfather/a-brillant-idea[/media]

[Timo★]

[QUOTE=killa101;46270235]
Here is another track from my album. Curious to hear what y'all think!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjmwYoFTJyw&list=UUSUcB51tSX4If2gx3HxYtOQ[/media][/QUOTE]This is super solid, I don't think I can point any real flaws to be honest. Also showed this to my friend who liked it very much!

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

[QUOTE=Rich209;46289305]
So recently I start working a full time job and haven't had much time to write some music. Its been over a month since I've written anything, so I decided to start working on music again. Here is a work in progress orchestral piece. I'm pretty sure this would fit great in a movie or game.

A Brilliant Idea - (Title is also a work in progress) [media]http://soundcloud.com/russiangodfather/a-brillant-idea[/media][/QUOTE]Ah this is great, as you said I can imagine this fitting in as a soundtrack. It has a mysterious/magical feel to it, like some kind of supernatural event happening in a small town

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

beat thing:
[media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/hes-a-pretty-dandy-guy[/media]

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

some weird noises going on because of a exporting error from fl studio, I think it doesn't like one reverb plugin I'm using but they kinda fit so whatever

[Waffler]

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;46289766]This is super solid, I don't think I can point any real flaws to be honest. Also showed this to my friend who liked it very much!

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

Ah this is great, as you said I can imagine this fitting in as a soundtrack. It has a mysterious/magical feel to it, like some kind of supernatural event happening in a small town

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

beat thing:
[media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/hes-a-pretty-dandy-guy[/media]

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

some weird noises going on because of a exporting error from fl studio, I think it doesn't like one reverb plugin I'm using but they kinda fit so whatever[/QUOTE]

This is so soooooooooothing! I don't know what weird noises you're talking about though!

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/no-fear-original-mix-teaser[/media]

I've started my newest single! It's a hybrid dubstep/eletrohouse track. It's getting really hard to finish though because I have so many instances of Massive & Spire and just playing the breakdown gives me like 4000 underruns lol.

[Timo★]

[QUOTE=Waffler;46292130]This is so soooooooooothing! I don't know what weird noises you're talking about though!

[media]http://soundcloud.com/ohsabi-official/no-fear-original-mix-teaser[/media]

I've started my newest single! It's a hybrid dubstep/eletrohouse track. It's getting really hard to finish though because I have so many instances of Massive & Spire and just playing the breakdown gives me like 4000 underruns lol.[/QUOTE]Thats what I said, the weird noises fit in so you can't tell what they actually are.

As for your track, I think the intro should focus more on the piano, maybe you could also incorporate it into the drop somehow? Seems like a solid track otherwise.
Also if you're having problems running the project try bouncing the stems into wav, it will make it a lot lighter. This also allows you to do some sick cuts and stuff

[killa101]

[QUOTE=Rich209;46289305]
So recently I start working a full time job and haven't had much time to write some music. Its been over a month since I've written anything, so I decided to start working on music again. Here is a work in progress orchestral piece. I'm pretty sure this would fit great in a movie or game.

A Brilliant Idea - (Title is also a work in progress) [media]http://soundcloud.com/russiangodfather/a-brillant-idea[/media][/QUOTE]

Very nice, just the thing I needed to hear before going to bed. Digging that piano tone, reminds me of something that might have its place in some kind of adventure game.

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;46289766]

beat thing:
[media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/hes-a-pretty-dandy-guy[/media]

[editline]21st October 2014[/editline]

some weird noises going on because of a exporting error from fl studio, I think it doesn't like one reverb plugin I'm using but they kinda fit so whatever[/QUOTE]
Man, that effect makes your track so avant-guarde. also thanks for sharing my track, glad you guys enjoyed it :smile:

[Waffler]

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;46292585]Thats what I said, the weird noises fit in so you can't tell what they actually are.

As for your track, I think the intro should focus more on the piano, maybe you could also incorporate it into the drop somehow? Seems like a solid track otherwise.
Also if you're having problems running the project try bouncing the stems into wav, it will make it a lot lighter. This also allows you to do some sick cuts and stuff[/QUOTE]

Whoops, totally missed that last part of the sentence lol. Thanks mate, I'll work that piano idea in! It's gonna be hassle having to bounce stems down haha, there's a lot of I have to do!

[Caboose866]

I put together a bunch of Beatles demo's into a psychedelic lazy river. It's not meant to be an original work.

[url]https://soundcloud.com/pink-elephantiasis/trip-guide-part-1[/url]

[Hakita]

[QUOTE=Caboose866;46299897]I put together a bunch of Beatles demo's into a psychedelic lazy river. It's not meant to be an original work.

[url]https://soundcloud.com/pink-elephantiasis/trip-guide-part-1[/url][/QUOTE]
read the title; if you want feedback for your song you need to give feedback to other people