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[QUOTE=Eyefunk;41659705]Finally finished this song called, "Wild Call".
It's a lot different then what I usually do, so [I]please [/I]give me some critiques on how I could progress on making it better.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/eyefunk/wild-call[/media][/QUOTE]
At 3:09 I don't know if you meant to or not, but the chord or whatever layers your using right there sounds really bad. It stops around 3:48, because it transition to different layers.
Overall its a interesting piece, but I think maybe one thing to think about is if your going to follow the same chord progression through out the piece, more variation would be a good idea. For example :58, is very nice, I quite enjoyed that little bit. I think more variety in rhythm or melody for the piano might make this piece really awesome.
Anyways that is all I could think of. Hope that helps.
[QUOTE=Rich209;41661101]At 3:09 I don't know if you meant to or not, but the chord or whatever layers your using right there sounds really bad. It stops around 3:48, because it transition to different layers.
Overall its a interesting piece, but I think maybe one thing to think about is if your going to follow the same chord progression through out the piece, more variation would be a good idea. For example :58, is very nice, I quite enjoyed that little bit. I think more variety in rhythm or melody for the piano might make this piece really awesome.
Anyways that is all I could think of. Hope that helps.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for the input, Rich.
At the 3:09 part, what instrument/channel is playing the bad sounding part? I'm personally not hearing what you are referring to but that could just be my limited hearing through these shitty speakers.
Been messing with a bit of sampling, this is a rough edit made in a couple of hours. I would love some C&C. It of course lacks a rapping vocal.
[media][URL="https://soundcloud.com/ubergimp/summer-beat"]http://soundcloud.com/ubergimp/summer-beat[/URL][/media]
EDIT: How do you make those [I]fancy [/I]​players?
[QUOTE=Gumpen;41664085]Been messing with a bit of sampling, this is a rough edit made in a couple of hours. I would love some C&C. It of course lacks a rapping vocal.
[url]https://soundcloud.com/ubergimp/summer-beat[/url]
EDIT: How do you make those [I]fancy [/I]​players?[/QUOTE]
remove the "s" in https from your link.
[QUOTE=Eyefunk;41661600]Thanks for the input, Rich.
At the 3:09 part, what instrument/channel is playing the bad sounding part? I'm personally not hearing what you are referring to but that could just be my limited hearing through these shitty speakers.[/QUOTE]
I'm not sure, it sounds as if right at 3:09 the letter name should be C, based on main melody you use earlier, but either you put a missed note and its C# or the C is so sharp it sounds like its C#. Or the combination of sounds your using on that section is making it seem like that one note is C# when its actually just C. (The note I'm speaking of happens at 3:09, 3:23, and 3:37)
[url]https://soundcloud.com/konsta-airisto/transcend[/url]
Some shoegaze/alternative rock for my solo project's new demo.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/mordi-1/basics-wip[/media]
Another sid-remix.
Here's a demo reel of the stuff I've done over the past year, for those of you who appreciate trance.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/snake31/jemuel-pavlic-demo-reel-1[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/v-1[/media] worked on an oldie
-snip wrong thread
[url]https://soundcloud.com/dperf/noreturn[/url]
A little something I've been working on recently (Chillstep)
[media]http://soundcloud.com/giggleblizzard/18-19-90-wip[/media]
Obviously not finished, the solo part stops halfway through and the drums are incredibly stale, I was never good at making drum beats
[QUOTE=Darthmagy;41664984][media]http://soundcloud.com/konsta-airisto/transcend[/media]
Some shoegaze/alternative rock for my solo project's new demo.[/QUOTE]
as a huge fan of shoegaze/alt rock I say you did quite well with the style! I can tell it's definitely a demo, hopefully you guys can work out the mixing issues.
You got some incredibly interesting ideas in here, yet at times it feels disconnected and jumbled. Some better transitions would be nice. Great work you got going on here.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/arboria/devils-teardrop[/media]
Fucked around with a shitty keyboard I found, my Fuzzface and a Behringer Delay Pedal.
Can someone recommend me a VST plugin with sounds of real instruments, harmonicas and stuff?
[QUOTE=Joppari;41684542]Can someone recommend me a VST plugin with sounds of real instruments, harmonicas and stuff?[/QUOTE]
Vienna or East West
[QUOTE=Joppari;41684542]Can someone recommend me a VST plugin with sounds of real instruments, harmonicas and stuff?[/QUOTE]
Whoa Jopp you're producing now?
[QUOTE=Joppari;41684542]Can someone recommend me a VST plugin with sounds of real instruments, harmonicas and stuff?[/QUOTE]
If you're going the free route, I can tell you that I've had somewhat success with doing realistic-ish tunes using soundfonts. I even made a pack of them a long time ago. [url]http://mordi.ziphoid.com/data/stuff/Mordis%20Soundfonts.zip[/url]
Not sure where I got them, or who I should attribute them to. I didn't make them.
Here's a tune where I used a lot of these soundfonts and a shitty Edirol orchestral VST:
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfXe3-t8M-I[/url]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/mrproudfoot/nowhere-but-here[/media]
this is p repetitive but it's for 6 guys to rap over.
Do any of you know of any good electric and acoustic guitar VSTs? I really don't like fruity slayer at all.
[QUOTE=absolalone111;41702646]Do any of you know of any good electric and acoustic guitar VSTs? I really don't like fruity slayer at all.[/QUOTE]
Oh god fruity slayer don't remind me of that hellspawn
I guess some of the default kontakt library's guitar presets are sort of decent, but no VST can truly replicate the sound of a guitar really, no matter how you try
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;41703097]Oh god fruity slayer don't remind me of that hellspawn
I guess some of the default kontakt library's guitar presets are sort of decent, but no VST can truly replicate the sound of a guitar really, no matter how you try[/QUOTE]
Oh right cool, I'll check that out. I'm not looking for perfection, more a quick way to get tracks down, when I'm not with the band.
I worked on this one quite a bit, fixed up a few things and tried to fit in more variety. Personally, I'm having a hard time with the track, but hopefully this did the trick.
Please give me some criticism!
[media]http://soundcloud.com/eyefunk/wild-call[/media]
(This is not the same version, it's just uploaded under the same name)
Not bad man, but I think your piano VST is shitty
most piano VSTs are though
imo you should go find a detuned piano and record the part if you have the time
trying to use a bit more subtlety, not too fond of the drums yet or the intro section but i'll see what works as I go
crit away
[media]http://soundcloud.com/inzal/new-sample[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/goryand/trap-shit[/media]
Messing around with some trap shit.
[editline]4th August 2013[/editline]
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;41703097]Oh god fruity slayer don't remind me of that hellspawn
I guess some of the default kontakt library's guitar presets are sort of decent, but no VST can truly replicate the sound of a guitar really, no matter how you try[/QUOTE]
You can actually make some cool leads with Slayer.
Managed to actually "finish" my first chiptune song, and I use finish lightly
[media]http://soundcloud.com/giggleblizzard/certain-adventures[/media]
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