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[media]http://soundcloud.com/corn-mouth/dubstep-pussy-stank[/media] Dubstep pussay stonk [sp]Lol its a joke[/sp]

Stereotypical hip hop, kinda. Just threw the "ey"s in there because why not :v: [media]http://soundcloud.com/thedanielholt/not-too-much[/media]

[QUOTE=Rediscover;44697732][media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/for-you-only[/media] 808 funk[/QUOTE] That arp thing is fucking cool.

[QUOTE=Crazy;44705158] Just goofin' around. Got a pretty great bass tone. Real snappy.[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Warship;44710794]Stereotypical hip hop, kinda. Just threw the "ey"s in there because why not :v: [/QUOTE] Could you guys please remember to give feedback to someone else if you're posting a song.

Yeah, we were on a serious fuckin' roll for a page or two. Let's just make it a thing while we have the momentum going. [editline]3rd May 2014[/editline] Speaking of which, I'm going to ignore my spiteful instincts and give them a sprinkle o' feedback anyway. [QUOTE=Crazy;44705158][media]http://soundcloud.com/tomheinis/iam[/media] Just goofin' around. Got a pretty great bass tone. Real snappy.[/QUOTE] Gets a bit thin with the part at :37, consider adding a more chord-like guitar to play below the melody, or something else to keep the mid-low range thicker. [QUOTE=Warship;44710794]Stereotypical hip hop, kinda. Just threw the "ey"s in there because why not :v: [media]http://soundcloud.com/thedanielholt/not-too-much[/media][/QUOTE] Cool sound. A bit boring/confusing with the intro being just some weird sub part. The ey definitely doesn't work for me, it's too upbeat and there isn't enough going on/enough energy for them to sit in the mix. Overall feels like it's a solid back track and could do well with vocal/lead melody of some sort.

[QUOTE=Rediscover;44697732][media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/for-you-only[/media] 808 funk[/QUOTE] You should give those vocals a boost in volume and let that melodic, 3xoscsynth take the backdrop a little bit, I think maybe even let that bass come forward a bit as well to give the song a bit more rounded sound. Drums are bloody sick though, nice work mate! I've worked on a ballad that I think sounds really good so far, it does need something else to make it superb though, and I'd love to hear what y'all guys think could be added to really make it sweet as hell! [media]http://soundcloud.com/skriket/you-will-remember-martell-remix-feat-amanda-koss[/media]

[QUOTE=Skeeter;44720519]You should give those vocals a boost in volume and let that melodic, 3xoscsynth take the backdrop a little bit, I think maybe even let that bass come forward a bit as well to give the song a bit more rounded sound. Drums are bloody sick though, nice work mate! I've worked on a ballad that I think sounds really good so far, it does need something else to make it superb though, and I'd love to hear what y'all guys think could be added to really make it sweet as hell! [media]http://soundcloud.com/skriket/you-will-remember-martell-remix-feat-amanda-koss[/media][/QUOTE]Sounding pretty good! The kick is kinda lonely there, maybe you could look into adding some cinematic percussion? Nothing too big since you don't want to take off attention from the vocals and stuff

[QUOTE=Skeeter;44720519] I've worked on a ballad that I think sounds really good so far, it does need something else to make it superb though, and I'd love to hear what y'all guys think could be added to really make it sweet as hell! [media]http://soundcloud.com/skriket/you-will-remember-martell-remix-feat-amanda-koss[/media][/QUOTE] Is it just me, or is the kick a little off, timing wise? Otherwise, really neat.

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;44720663]Sounding pretty good! The kick is kinda lonely there, maybe you could look into adding some cinematic percussion? Nothing too big since you don't want to take off attention from the vocals and stuff[/QUOTE] That's a good idea, I tried to incorporate that with the second time there are vocals, I should probably add some to the instrumental part as well. Thanks for taking the time to gimme your thoughts, much appreciated. :)

pretty happy with this one [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media]

Alec, Alec, Alec.... [QUOTE=chaz13;44711408]Could you guys please remember to give feedback to someone else if you're posting a song.[/QUOTE] Listen to this man. Edit: You're not that bad though, IIRC I have seen you giving feedback recently. <3

[QUOTE=Skeeter;44720519]You should give those vocals a boost in volume and let that melodic, 3xoscsynth take the backdrop a little bit, I think maybe even let that bass come forward a bit as well to give the song a bit more rounded sound. Drums are bloody sick though, nice work mate! I've worked on a ballad that I think sounds really good so far, it does need something else to make it superb though, and I'd love to hear what y'all guys think could be added to really make it sweet as hell! [media]http://soundcloud.com/skriket/you-will-remember-martell-remix-feat-amanda-koss[/media][/QUOTE] I think the kick is a little out of place though, that little "tick" that goes along with it. [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Crazy;44705158][media]http://soundcloud.com/tomheinis/iam[/media] Just goofin' around. Got a pretty great bass tone. Real snappy.[/QUOTE] The bass riff that comes in at 1:14 was the only thing that bugged me, the rest was really solid man, digging the tone. [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Consciousness;44695072]HHHNNNNGGG barely scraped through on my goal of getting this song (structurally) completed today, finished that part with 1 minute to spare on the clock [media]http://soundcloud.com/inzal/psychedelic-manifest-acid-reflux-pre-master[/media] mother fuckers kept distractin me all day, pulled through though tomorrow Imma master the fuck out of it then Im gonna spend the next month or so workin on an album[/QUOTE] I feel like this is stems for something big and I want to see it grow a bit! Like, I feel like this is blue-balls-ing me. [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Rediscover;44697732][media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/for-you-only[/media] 808 funk[/QUOTE] Definitely one of my favorite things to pop up on my sc stream lately, really dope man, especially that wavvy synth chord stuff going on, giving me goosebumps.

[QUOTE=Alec W;44726469]pretty happy with this one [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE] The drums really get drowned out after 0:28, especially the clap.

[QUOTE=Alec W;44726469]pretty happy with this one [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE]I like the sounds on this one, but it could use some work still! Maybe have the white noise loop more on the background and try to bring up the drums just a littttle bit (kick is fine, but the other percussion is a bit drowned out). Right now it's pretty minimalistic, try adding some other hook to go with the vocal clips? Just that little something to get you hooked on the track, the chord progression doesn't really do it by itself right now. It's hard to not make it too busy I know, but it needs just that little something, be it extra percussion or a little melodic arpeggio or a synth hit. [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] Right after I posted that and went to do other things the vocal hook starts playing in my head lol

[QUOTE=Rediscover;44697732][media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/for-you-only[/media] 808 funk[/QUOTE] You might've seen I fave'd this on SC, which is something I really have to restrain from doing, but this was just an absolute exception man, I seriously can't get over that fucking arp synth [QUOTE=Skeeter;44720519]You should give those vocals a boost in volume and let that melodic, 3xoscsynth take the backdrop a little bit, I think maybe even let that bass come forward a bit as well to give the song a bit more rounded sound. Drums are bloody sick though, nice work mate! I've worked on a ballad that I think sounds really good so far, it does need something else to make it superb though, and I'd love to hear what y'all guys think could be added to really make it sweet as hell! [media]http://soundcloud.com/skriket/you-will-remember-martell-remix-feat-amanda-koss[/media][/QUOTE] The chords are a bit generic for my taste, but sounds pretty good! Overall production quality is pretty good [QUOTE=Alec W;44726469]pretty happy with this one [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE] Really cool, almost getting an ambient feel from it? Anyways, my turn :v: I made a little soundcloud for random/boring disco/whatever shits I get up to from time to time [media]http://soundcloud.com/mhboredom/hed-banger[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/mhboredom/like-a-747[/media] Bit worried bout the second one cos i sampled a really fuckin well known track lol [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] Also I'm loving how much people are actually getting responses to their tracks now, we need to keep this shit up Another! [media]http://soundcloud.com/mhboredom/just-a-girl[/media]

[QUOTE=Dead Madman;44726878] I made a little soundcloud for random/boring disco/whatever shits I get up to from time to time [media]http://soundcloud.com/mhboredom/hed-banger[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/mhboredom/like-a-747[/media] Bit worried bout the second one cos i sampled a really fuckin well known track lol [/QUOTE]Mate the second one is a total banger, what part is the sampled thing? Vocals? [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] Might as well post some shit: Crazy ass track I'm going to finish when I get some inspiration: [media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/2-rough-wip[/media] Collab with Bobie thats been forgotten, I'm might finish this since I haven't heard from the man for a while [media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/fuck-you-aaron[/media]

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;44726947]Crazy ass track I'm going to finish when I get some inspiration: [media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/2-rough-wip[/media][/QUOTE] i like the melodies and the overall idea is good, but in the state that it is now it feels pretty flacid the drums sound very structureless at times, especially at the start and at the section after 0.25, where it feels like there are just snare hits thrown here and there and they really disrupt the flow also, the horn tracks that start at around 0.11 feel out of place, they're integrated much better later on in the song, but they just kind of come out of nowhere and go nowhere overall i think the main problem is that it feels very structureless and disjointed and like its in a hurry to change from section to section without really giving the listener time to really sink into the atmosphere, like things come and go whenever and the sections just sort of change without much impact im interested in where this evolves though as a big fan of weird music

[QUOTE=Hakita;44727724]i like the melodies and the overall idea is good, but in the state that it is now it feels pretty flacid the drums sound very structureless at times, especially at the start and at the section after 0.25, where it feels like there are just snare hits thrown here and there and they really disrupt the flow also, the horn tracks that start at around 0.11 feel out of place, they're integrated much better later on in the song, but they just kind of come out of nowhere and go nowhere overall i think the main problem is that it feels very structureless and disjointed and like its in a hurry to change from section to section without really giving the listener time to really sink into the atmosphere, like things come and go whenever and the sections just sort of change without much impact im interested in where this evolves though as a big fan of weird music[/QUOTE]Thanks for you input, people have been telling me about the drums and I've just ignorantly gone "thats what i wanted" but its about time I realize that they need to be remade. Honestly the whole track needs a bit of a facelift.

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;44726947] Might as well post some shit: Crazy ass track I'm going to finish when I get some inspiration: [media]http://soundcloud.com/itbegins/2-rough-wip[/media][/QUOTE] Honestly love this as it is. Quirky and constantly changing; lots of potential in this track IMO Autechre drum play [media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/autechre-6iecr-remix[/media] Some acid shit [media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/acid-theory[/media] Some really old dancy song [media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/0shellentropy[/media] And finally a remix of the above track by Clem Right. (amazing musician with so much diversity check him out) [media]http://soundcloud.com/clemright/anax-shell-entropy-clem-right-remix[/media]

[QUOTE=CLungcancer;44726696]I like the sounds on this one, but it could use some work still! Maybe have the white noise loop more on the background and try to bring up the drums just a littttle bit (kick is fine, but the other percussion is a bit drowned out). Right now it's pretty minimalistic, try adding some other hook to go with the vocal clips? Just that little something to get you hooked on the track, the chord progression doesn't really do it by itself right now. It's hard to not make it too busy I know, but it needs just that little something, be it extra percussion or a little melodic arpeggio or a synth hit. [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] Right after I posted that and went to do other things the vocal hook starts playing in my head lol[/QUOTE] gonna sit down and see what I can do, I really appreciate this! [editline]5th May 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=MilkBagz;44726567]The drums really get drowned out after 0:28, especially the clap.[/QUOTE] and this!

alright so I tweaked it a little more, whatcha think? [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media]

[QUOTE=Alec W;44731122]alright so I tweaked it a little more, whatcha think? [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE]sicksicksicksicksicksicksicksicksicksicksickSICK [editline]6th May 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Anax;44728310]Honestly love this as it is. Quirky and constantly changing; lots of potential in this track IMO Autechre drum play [media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/autechre-6iecr-remix[/media] Some really old dancy song [media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/0shellentropy[/media] And finally a remix of the above track by Clem Right. (amazing musician with so much diversity check him out) [media]http://soundcloud.com/clemright/anax-shell-entropy-clem-right-remix[/media][/QUOTE]Dude i dont even have to say you know what I would say already

[QUOTE=Alec W;44731122]alright so I tweaked it a little more, whatcha think? [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE] I think it's much better. [QUOTE=Anax;44728310]Some really old dancy song[media]http://soundcloud.com/anax-1/0shellentropy[/media][/QUOTE] I like the melody at the starting of this a lot.

Not really looking for criticism, but I thought I would share some more music I've written for Portal Repercussions. I recently just graduated from college so I have some time right now to work on music before I find a job. [media]http://soundcloud.com/russiangodfather/repercussion-variation[/media]

Those really high notes drop off a little too quick for my tastes. new new new [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/new-bones[/media]

[QUOTE=Alec W;44743129]Those really high notes drop off a little too quick for my tastes. new new new [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/new-bones[/media][/QUOTE] flame

[QUOTE=Alec W;44731122]alright so I tweaked it a little more, whatcha think? [media]http://soundcloud.com/micaw/relight[/media][/QUOTE] What the fuck man this is so good

[media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/hope-for-tomorrow[/media] idk its a beat

[QUOTE=Rediscover;44750761][media]http://soundcloud.com/azathoth/hope-for-tomorrow[/media] idk its a beat[/QUOTE] You might have done it on purpose, but it doesn't seem like there's enough sounds coming from the left to balance out with all the hats panned to the right. This is sick though.

[QUOTE=MilkBagz;44750870]You might have done it on purpose, but it doesn't seem like there's enough sounds coming from the left to balance out with all the hats panned to the right. This is sick though.[/QUOTE] lmao i dont even notice shit like that honestly i had no idea, my speakers are butt trash