the water splash on the top left should go over the can actually, you have it behind the can completely and it looks off to me
[QUOTE=Phyxius;24574395]1920x1080 or 1680x1050 (whichever is easier).
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I totally suck at resizing images, especially when changing from portrait to landscape. But here it is:
[url]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1156/bonkwallpaper.png[/url]
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[QUOTE=MetalToast;24576802]the water splash on the top left should go over the can actually, you have it behind the can completely and it looks off to me[/QUOTE]
I just tested that out myself, the way the splash begin doesn't work it. sorry.
[QUOTE=LightSwitchRave;24576830]I totally suck at resizing images, especially when changing from portrait to landscape. But here it is:
[url]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1156/bonkwallpaper.png[/url]
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I just tested that out myself, the way the splash begin doesn't work it. sorry.[/QUOTE]
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You need to shape the splashing water around it into a nude woman and it'll sell.
[QUOTE=LightSwitchRave;24576007]Current Version[/QUOTE]
The water looks better (apart from the unrealistic ripples) but the font is even worse. :v:
The First version looked best, It was simple, it draws attention to the Can and you'll notice the font after the Can, which is a good thing
You don't want people to see the font first, you want them to see your product, then your text
Also, Can i have a 1920 x 1200 Version of the first one? :D I fucking love it!
The water droplets on the floor look flat. They need some refelctivity/shimmer/specular highlights.
[QUOTE=Rizah;24585161]The First version looked best, It was simple, it draws attention to the Can and you'll notice the font after the Can, which is a good thing
You don't want people to see the font first, you want them to see your product, then your text
Also, Can i have a 1920 x 1200 Version of the first one? :D I fucking love it![/QUOTE]
Sorry but I dont have the first one saved any more. :c
Why is there water splashing around if the can isn't even open?
waidago.
What annoys me is the sharp edge between the floor and wall, you should blend it somehow
I think the slogan should be a Neon sign on the wall.
Like this:
[img_thumb]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/94/Beauty_Supply_Neon_Sign.jpg[/img_thumb]
That's just what sprung to mind when i first saw the slogan.
Latest is great, change the font and you're set.
[QUOTE=Sabrina;24593378]Why is there water splashing around if the can isn't even open?
waidago.[/QUOTE]
Because the can itself is causing the water to splash. Fill a sink with water, drop a can into it, and observe basic physics.
Nuclear explosion to fill the background?
[QUOTE=3noneTwo;24615176]Because the can itself is causing the water to splash. Fill a sink with water, drop a can into it, and observe basic physics.[/QUOTE]
So it's underwater?
sure as hell doesn't look like it.
[QUOTE=Sabrina;24615610]So it's underwater?
sure as hell doesn't look like it.[/QUOTE]
No. The general idea is that the soda is refreshing. The splash of water is a common element used in advertising to convey this very idea, often found in commercials advertising drinks, shampoo/conditioner, and the occasional skin care product.
You questioned why there was a splash of water when the can wasn't even open. Exactly how would an open can cause that splash?
@LightSwitchRave
The water drops on the floor, in the first version of the image, felt more pleasing to the eye. Though the exaggerated splash of the current version feels more balanced. Is there any way for you to mix the floor of the first and the splash of the second image together?
I'd definitely try to blend the edge of the floor and the wall together, the shadow on the right-hand side sticks out. And as for the text: Try to even out the amount of negative space surrounding it.
[img_thumb]http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6118/space1g.jpg[/img_thumb][img_thumb]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/119/space2.jpg[/img_thumb]
I've also just noticed that you've used the same typeface in the first and second versions, just that the second one has a huge thick glow around it, and that its been stretched to appear larger. Not good. I'd go back to the text in the first version for now, it just plain-well looks cleaner.
[i]Awesome[/i]. Text looks much cleaner, the darker shadows at the edge of the floor really help it blend. The only thing that sticks out is the splash around the bottom of the can, though I'm unsure what you could do about that..
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