[QUOTE=Reno360;46302440]Kars?[/QUOTE]
Nope it was Josuke from JoJolion
[img]http://i.imgur.com/o6VEQqg.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Athlias;46308345]I wouldn't mind seeing more characters drawn in your off hand[/QUOTE]
got u covered
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/KOFhtVy.png[/IMG]
i drew the right hand one first for reference and it still looks like shit.
[IMG]http://i57.tinypic.com/5x7a4j.jpg[/IMG]
What's going on with her face
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46310812]What's going on with her face[/QUOTE]
I see a (scribbly) nose and an open mouth, nothing really wrong though?
The "nose" looks like a mouth to me
with a circle on the chin
[editline]24th October 2014[/editline]
I can't even force myself to see it the other way
it's literally a pair of lips:
[img]http://i.gyazo.com/8cf071613275f644478cf217b6bc73df.png[/img]
what is seen cannot be unseen.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4Kq1KUa.png[/IMG]
pls critique
first pixel thing ever i tried to do
it took fucking forever to get the lines done lol
The eyes seem kinda low
[editline]23rd October 2014[/editline]
And the sweater shouldn't really emphasize cleavage how it does there
i meant more like critique the pixely part of the piece
are they eyes really low though?
[editline]23rd October 2014[/editline]
like i think the head shape as this, maybe the hair is too puffy on the top then
[URL="http://puu.sh/cnzIj/d9ca09cf5f.png"][x][/URL]
also i drew glasses on her but i couldnt get them to loo
[URL="http://puu.sh/cnzLH/b479d0f5d7.png"][x][/URL]
[QUOTE=nnanna;46312263]i meant more like critique the pixely part of the piece
are they eyes really low though?[/QUOTE]
kiiiinda
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/N42uhby.png[/IMG]
[editline]23rd October 2014[/editline]
just an example of what could be done
ah i see what you mean now
i still want to keep the first version though i think it looks cuter
also i changed the bobs
the bottom of the eyes should be on the same level as the top of the nose.
[QUOTE=alpha00zero;46307804]Was bored and drew a few gals (and some dudes but ignore them)
Hope I didn't mess them up too much, Gastric.
[t]https://38.media.tumblr.com/9760f4717bd70fbf3986a0356aa9fc08/tumblr_ndvljyVng01rc2okpo1_1280.png[/t][/QUOTE]
AAA THANKS! Nono, they're pretty much spot on! ; 3;
[QUOTE=nnanna;46312160][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4Kq1KUa.png[/IMG]
pls critique
first pixel thing ever i tried to do
it took fucking forever to get the lines done lol[/QUOTE]
Unless she's a frog the eyes really shouldn't be that far apart, almost every human being has their pupils straight above where the mouth ends on each side.
For example, take a look at this dashing young man who I'm sure has no ill intentions toward any man:
[img]http://www.thenewstribe.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/hitler.jpg[/img]
If you were to draw a straight line from each end of his mouth up to the eyes, you'd see that his pupil would be hit on at least one side.
As for her chest, I've no idea how the hell her body looks like beneath those clothes but if you look at how small her upper body is I'm sure those boobs would not look peek out like they do. How the hell is her body even twisted? I'm not sure how she's supposed to stand but everything about her body is just twisted.
Does she have scoliosis? Because that's all I can see the way her upper body connects with her hips, I mean goddamn there's so much wrong with everything about her. Did you use a reference picture? Because you really should.
[QUOTE=GastricTank;46312518]AAA THANKS! Nono, they're pretty much spot on! ; 3;[/QUOTE]
Oh sweet.
Though... I still feel Anna ain't thick enough. You draw her with some wide curves.
Was fun! I need to draw more ladies with bigger proportions. Or at least, try out different shapes for the bodies and work around those.
Glad you liked it!
[QUOTE=nnanna;46312380]also i changed the bobs[/QUOTE]
better bobs
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46310942]The "nose" looks like a mouth to me
with a circle on the chin
[editline]24th October 2014[/editline]
I can't even force myself to see it the other way
it's literally a pair of lips:
[img]http://i.gyazo.com/8cf071613275f644478cf217b6bc73df.png[/img][/QUOTE]
Haha You made me laugh XD
[QUOTE=Skeeter;46312592]As for her chest, I've no idea how the hell her body looks like beneath those clothes but if you look at how small her upper body is I'm sure those boobs would not look peek out like they do. How the hell is her body even twisted? I'm not sure how she's supposed to stand but everything about her body is just twisted.
Does she have scoliosis? Because that's all I can see the way her upper body connects with her hips, I mean goddamn there's so much wrong with everything about her. Did you use a reference picture? Because you really should.[/QUOTE]
[t]http://i.imgur.com/46VJ5LI.png[/t][t]http://i.imgur.com/CMUOlPT.png[/t]
this is how i see the body, why is it wrong?
either way i really wanted comments/criticism on the pixel drawing part, not on the anatomy
[editline]23rd October 2014[/editline]
and if you cant see it out from the picture her back is pretty the same lines that go on her right arm
[QUOTE=nnanna;46313071][t]http://i.imgur.com/46VJ5LI.png[/t][t]http://i.imgur.com/CMUOlPT.png[/t]
this is how i see the body, why is it wrong?
either way i really wanted comments/criticism on the pixel drawing part, not on the anatomy
[editline]23rd October 2014[/editline]
and if you cant see it out from the picture her back is pretty the same lines that go on her right arm[/QUOTE]
Pixel work is fine, are you planning on going more detailed or is a rather cartoony style what you're going for? :)
[QUOTE=Skeeter;46313210]Pixel work is fine, are you planning on going more detailed or is a rather cartoony style what you're going for? :)[/QUOTE]
i'm not exactly sure what the question is but the picture i originally posted was supposed to be the final piece so i wasn't going to add any more detail into it
[QUOTE=nnanna;46313071]either way i really wanted comments/criticism on the pixel drawing part, not on the anatomy[/QUOTE]
You shouldn't really say this. people only want to help you if they see something that looks odd. Completely dismissing critique just because you didn't ask for it is going to put you in a bad spot.
i'm totally not dismissing it if you didn't notice, i even did changes on my drawing and replied to everyone who said something about it
either way i mainly wanted to know about the pixel part cause i never did that before...
[QUOTE=nnanna;46312160][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4Kq1KUa.png[/IMG]
pls critique
first pixel thing ever i tried to do
it took fucking forever to get the lines done lol[/QUOTE]
If you want me to be honest, it being pixel art isn't really doing anything for it. You could have accomplished what you did here with conventional drawing methods in a fraction of the time. Pixel art is great for doing [URL=http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/colossal_katamari.png]a lot of small details[/URL] or [url=http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/wayuki_warrior_of_light.gif]pulling off a certain aesthetic[/url], but this just looks like a regular drawing with a low resolution. Shading's also coming from everywhere, make sure to define your lightsource
i just like the low resolution look so i want to learn to do that style properly, i'm not interested in pixel art like in the pictures you linked at all
i don't know how to shade properly though i will learn it eventually, thanks for the input
I don't think you can call it pixel art if it's so big, it's just digital art with aliased lines and then some airbrushing over the top (which creates dissonance in the style that you don't want)
When I think pixel art I think small elements with visible pixels in the gradations. No huge areas of flat colour either, all of the pixels in a pixel piece should be distinct
Is there examples of this "low resolution look" you can link to? I don't think I've ever seen drawings with the characteristics of yours before
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46316403]
Is there examples of this "low resolution look" you can link to? I don't think I've ever seen drawings with the characteristics of yours before[/QUOTE]
Not directed at me, but go on DA and look in the pixel categories. It's extremely common over there, although rarely pulled off well. It's become a large part of the site with the common base use made from anime screenshots to be worked on in paint. [URL]http://www.deviantart.com/browse/all/customization/dolls/pixelart/?order=9&q=anime[/URL]
Some people have taken to using it for original work too. Although I'm not fond of the flat cells style myself in pixel I have found that it can be a good way to practice cell shading in general, since you REALLY need to know where your putting your shadows to make it look right (What most of DA fails at)
I've done a little bit of it when I'm really bored and don't have my tablet, since I find it pretty easy to work on with a mouse.
Although gastric uses some thicker more dynamic lines, he has a similarly worked style?
I see
(and I regret seeing)
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46316403]I don't think you can call it pixel art if it's so big, it's just digital art with aliased lines and then some airbrushing over the top (which creates dissonance in the style that you don't want)
When I think pixel art I think small elements with visible pixels in the gradations. No huge areas of flat colour either, all of the pixels in a pixel piece should be distinct
Is there examples of this "low resolution look" you can link to? I don't think I've ever seen drawings with the characteristics of yours before[/QUOTE]
[URL="http://imgur.com/a/VFmJE"]here[/URL]
i have some more which i like more but its porn and very lewd so yeah i'm sharing these instead
totally random examples which i have saved when i have seen them, i really like them
and like i said before; i'm not interested in pixel art at all
hrm
Well those look like pretty typical amateur manga style drawings with crappy finishes to me, rather than a style in itself. I don't understand why you would aim for that, but in terms of crit I suppose your piece is pretty much on the money in relation to these. Well done I guess
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