Well, it is bed time. If anyone gifts me the STALKER pack I PROMISE I will write a short story about whatever [I][has to make a shred of sense to go on for more than a page][/I] they want. I am a fairly skilled author and for me a short story is 2-3 pages.
No promises about what [B]YOU[/B] will think of my writing, but it is all I can do.
Sample I wrote for my Creative Writing class last semester:
[quote] Jesus Christ, Amir thought as he rubbed his eyes as the sun just started to leak through his blinds at this ungodly morning hour. He hadn't gotten more than a few good hours of sleep since he'd been told by Saheena that she had a child on the way - as if he didn't have enough shit to deal with, not even counting the makeshift distillery that he was sitting on. He’d thank God every day, if he believed in such a being, that it didn't decide to blow up or catch fire which would get him caught and likely a death sentence in Kuwait. This ungodly heat probably wasn't helping, either. No matter what time it was, he just couldn't get away from it. The light was filtering through the blinds directly onto his bed, and the dust that seemed to get just about everywhere was enough to get him to roll over and shut his eyes tightly to get away from it.
He could not run away though, at least not from everything. He only managed to roll about half way over before he bumped into his wife and the anchor she now carried inside her. He’d considered it previously, what with his real wife back in sunny California and all, but this was the final nail in the coffin of the hopes of ever seeing home again. The worst part was, he wasn’t sure what to do about Michelle; she had been faithful for the three years they had been married before he got an overseas job. Yeah, he felt bad about having the affair, but at the time he had started, eight months without getting his tip wet seemed like a highly unreasonable feat for any man to have to bear doing. Now of course, there was nothing but regret to be had for what felt like bad judgment. Michelle did not have a kid, and besides breaking her heart in two he would do less damage by leaving her than he would leaving Saheena here in this place with a baby in her belly. It just didn’t seem fair that he should have to make this kind of decision with so much at stake.
He laid there for quite some time, through the early hours of the morning, watching the sun’s beams travel across his bed and down onto the floor as it made its ascent towards its zenith. At about eleven, Saheena shifted, her arms seeking out and curling around him as she slowly woke. He wasn’t sure if the slight pudginess he felt in her midsection had always been there or if it was recent. Hell, he really did not know much about pregnancy besides what he learned in the mid-70’s in high school.
“Good morning love...” The voice in his ear, gentle and sweet, jarringly reminded why this affair had really started. As her hands locked behind him and her chin tucked itself in the crook of his neck, he felt terrible for even thinking of what him and Saheena had shared as nothing but a sex-based relationship. As they lay together, Michelle seemed farther and farther away, part of a past life rather than the present. He knew it would come back and hurt, but for now he was fully convinced that he and Saheena had more than he would ever have with Michelle.
As Saheena slowly began dozing back off (She had always been a deep sleeper), he slipped free of her arms and went into the kitchen, where he sat with the phone and considered how he would tell Michelle.
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[I][It was 2 pages double spaced in word][/I]
White a short story about gang life, let's see what you got whiteboy. You're in fresno so you should have a clue at least
[QUOTE=mobrockers;24204436]Sooo, who cracked the code and won erp's raffle?[/QUOTE]
Also morning everyone.
Morning.
Top of the mornin to ya.
gift new vegas
Gift me Worms Reloaded
Gift me Stalker, in the pack, £6. Please.
gift me aids
can i use .gif or .apng for steam avatars? :3:
[QUOTE=Mryamanami;24206718]can i use .gif or .apng for steam avatars? :3:[/QUOTE]
No animated avatars on steam
[URL="http://www.viceland.com/blogs/en/2009/10/12/male-on-male-blowjobs-are-no-longer-gay/"]http://www.viceland.com/blogs/en/2009/10/12/male-on-male-blowjobs-are-no-longer-gay/[/URL]
WHAT THE FUCK
Dunno why I'm posting here cause I have left forever.
[QUOTE=sink257;24207071][URL="http://www.viceland.com/blogs/en/2009/10/12/male-on-male-blowjobs-are-no-longer-gay/"]http://www.viceland.com/blogs/en/2009/10/12/male-on-male-blowjobs-are-no-longer-gay/[/URL]
WHAT THE FUCK[/QUOTE]
:psypop:
Hello every one
Bye.
[QUOTE=mobrockers;24207138]Bye.[/QUOTE]
:eek:
I won Erp's raffle but everything went tits up and he's choosing to do something else now. :ssh:
[QUOTE=Pruneyman;24207179]I won Erp's raffle but everything went tits up and he's choosing to do something else now. :ssh:[/QUOTE]
How did you win??
Used a code to run in AutoIt and it gives out the answer. i shit ducks
what is AutoIt
[QUOTE=mobrockers;24207287]what is AutoIt[/QUOTE]
A program used to edit and run scripts.
[QUOTE=Jobby;24207074]Dunno why I'm posting here cause I have left forever.[/QUOTE]
why
[QUOTE=Pruneyman;24207217]Used a code to run in AutoIt and it gives out the answer. i shit ducks[/QUOTE]
Lies.
You asked on the AutoIT forum you little cheater :colbert:
[QUOTE=Xenoyia v2;24207332]Lies.
You asked on the AutoIT forum you little cheater :colbert:[/QUOTE]
That was thund3erdome, he said it himself
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