• "Trust me... Everything's gonna be fine..." Two lovers staring at the skyline...
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Holy.. COW this looks awesome!! You totally nailed everything :D And with the realistic bloom effect, can we expect some new type of editing from you? ;) Well done mate :D Now for some critic :) The shadow on the left collum doesn't hit accurate enough, allmost like there was no ceiling.. The explotions have to much white in them, making them seem like smoke puffs instead of massive explotions.. It looks like the dude is missing his left arm. Some shadows are solid, and some are not (ref.: people, and objects on the floor) ^^
Beautiful. But could not get over the grizzled hair of the Marla :P
[QUOTE=Domino;17174046]Holy.. COW this looks awesome!! You totally nailed everything :D And with the realistic bloom effect, can we expect some new type of editing from you? ;) Well done mate :D[/quote] Not entirely sure what you mean by "can we expect some new type of editing from you" but I assume it's positive... Thanks :3: [quote]Now for some critic :) The shadow on the left collum doesn't hit accurate enough, allmost like there was no ceiling.. The explotions have to much white in them, making them seem like smoke puffs instead of massive explotions.. It looks like the dude is missing his left arm. Some shadows are solid, and some are not (ref.: people, and objects on the floor)[/QUOTE] 1: I was hoping nobody would notice that... I had moved it backwards... for... some... reason... and I never got around to fixing it :doh: 2: I was going off of my reference from Fight Club, and in the movie the explosions really do kinda look like white puffs... not entirely sure how to improve upon them. 3: Once again, in the reference his left arm isn't viable, although it does have a rather prominent lump in his trenchcoat (which I could have recreated if not for my laziness) 4: Yea... In the ref they have very sharp shadows (some kind of light source is hitting them) but other objects did have sharper shadows. I just didn't want to go through the hassle of figuring out where every single object would be casting it's individual shadow yadda yadda yadda... Thanks for the crit though. :keke: [QUOTE=Novangel;17174062]Beautiful. But could not get over the grizzled hair of the Marla :P[/QUOTE] Do you like it or dislike it? Your comment is a little vague (and Marla does have some rather grizzled hair, although I admit I didn't do a perfect job)
No it's awesome, but could not take my eyes off it for some reason.
I expected two generic citizens staring at c17. When I saw this the biggest grin came on my face. Thanks for reminding me I need to watch that movie again.
[QUOTE=The Vman;17174107]Not entirely sure what you mean by "can we expect some new type of editing from you" but I assume it's positive... Thanks :3: 1: I was hoping nobody would notice that... I had moved it backwards... for... some... reason... and I never got around to fixing it :doh: 2: I was going off of my reference from Fight Club, and in the movie the explosions really do kinda look like white puffs... not entirely sure how to improve upon them. 3: Once again, in the reference his left arm isn't viable, although it does have a rather prominent lump in his trenchcoat (which I could have recreated if not for my laziness) 4: Yea... In the ref they have very sharp shadows (some kind of light source is hitting them) but other objects did have sharper shadows. I just didn't want to go through the hassle of figuring out where every single object would be casting it's individual shadow yadda yadda yadda... Thanks for the crit though. :keke:[/QUOTE] Don't get me wrong about the explotions, they DO look good ^^ I ment that I can't remember if I've seen the flare effect in your pictures before :P And if I haven't, It means that you should continue using it, even though it might just be this once.
"And that's when I met Bob." Awesome, words cannot describe it.
Fight Club. My favorite movie. My new wallpaper.
[QUOTE=The Vman;17173101]I agree about the explosions (making it look like an explosion is coming out of a window is haaard :saddowns:) but bland? Why does it look bland? :frown:[/QUOTE] I'm not sure exactly, something just seems very plain about it. It could be the floor textures.
wow very nice!!!
I remember when i saw the movie Fight Club, that part is the end of the movies.
This is just amazing, im now reading the book for a 5th time! Excellent everything!
great work here bro
[QUOTE=-Ben_Wolfe-;17177494]I'm not sure exactly, something just seems very plain about it. It could be the floor textures.[/QUOTE] Mmm yea, I wasn't very happy with the floor texture either. It was pretty low res and I was putting it on those big cargo containers. Somebody needs to make a scene building prop or material pack... [QUOTE=Fort83;17177567]Hey Vman what was the point of changing the printer to a box in editing?[/QUOTE] I was looking at a reference from youtube and I couldn't really make out what the hell that thing was. I figured it had a printer-like shape and put a printer in there. However, once I started editing I found a much higher res reference that clearly showed it was a crate with a little box on top. So I decided to go back into gmod, put the crate into the scene, and edit it over the printer. [quote]Compliments[/quote] Thanks everyone :3:
Despite the fact i hate you this has to be my favorite ending scene from a movie.
Meh, I don't like it.
You told me about this one before, it came out quite nice.
[QUOTE=Deathbucket;17180462]Despite the fact i hate you this has to be my favorite ending scene from a movie.[/QUOTE] [img]http://www.coffeeandcode.org/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/haters_gonna_hate.gif[/img] [QUOTE=bodenlan2;17180482]Meh, I don't like it.[/QUOTE] Thank you for that detailed and constructive criticism.
too many WTF bombs? seriously now,it looks great..
[QUOTE=DEMONSKUL;17182043]too many WTF bombs? seriously now,it looks great..[/QUOTE] Oh god, you have inspired me to do something...
[QUOTE=The Vman;17181978]Thank you for that detailed and constructive criticism.[/QUOTE] My intend wasn't to give criticism at all. [editline]10:08PM[/editline] I just think it is so edited that it hasn't got any "garrysmod pose" feeling left in it.
[QUOTE=The Vman;17182095]Oh god, you have inspired me to do something...[/QUOTE] [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/vmansuptosomething.png[/IMG][/URL] "At work" i dunno why, i've been doing small drawings of peoples thoughts and posts lately.
[QUOTE=Dubeard;17182486] "At work" i dunno why, i've been doing small drawings of peoples thoughts and posts lately.[/QUOTE] Dammit stop making me laugh with your accurate drawings.
Actually its not gonna be okay, you're fucked. Spectacular editing there bro.
Aww man I was gonna feel smart for saying "This looks totally like the Fight Club"s ending scene Way to burst the bubble :P Anyhoo, great scene building. Even If I havent seen your other pictures I can expect them to be like [quote]*picture*KAboom KABLOWEE PAKEEEEEEW PWOOOOSHHH*/picture*[/quote] Also, any good photoshop tutorials you could direct the good people to?
He made his own. And he uses GIMP.
[QUOTE=GrimReeper;17197731]Aww man I was gonna feel smart for saying "This looks totally like the Fight Club"s ending scene Way to burst the bubble :P Anyhoo, great scene building. Even If I havent seen your other pictures I can expect them to be like Also, any good photoshop tutorials you could direct the good people to?[/QUOTE] Happy birthday to you :keke: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=723271[/url]
Vman, you always surprise me. Great job.
Honestly, i dont think any movie can come close to Fight club, and any picture come as close as this. Fantastic Job.
PIXIES FOR THE WIN! Also good pic. (Pixies did that song.)
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