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[URL=http://www.hostpic.org/view.php?filename=21dod_colmar0001.jpg][img]http://www.hostpic.org/images/21dod_colmar0001.jpg[/img][/URL] What should i improve?
The fingers look a bit off, the way he holds the gun is kinda weird and he looks a bit stiff.
More Johnny Vastcool [img]http://niggaupload.com/images/bhRCX.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=miroki;35909306][URL=http://www.hostpic.org/view.php?filename=21dod_colmar0001.jpg][img]http://www.hostpic.org/images/21dod_colmar0001.jpg[/img][/URL] What should i improve?[/QUOTE] He is not anywhere near holding the gun properly. I'm not going to explain because there's so much to cover, teach yourself instead, it's more helpful that way. Just google images of people in a shooting stance and use them as references. I use references for any pose that I can't get quite right and it helps a lot.
[IMG]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/558687138392635911/789231958D3A4B135761808E482F833D26641120/[/IMG] [IMG]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/560939203640558641/B0DE4B9DF8A991A577497D5763E71D39161C8630/[/IMG]
Way over contrasted. Posing is good, second one has potential.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35910073]Way over contrasted. Posing is good, second one has potential.[/QUOTE] Hmm...well I was re-enacting the Battlefield heros poster with the first one, and thank you with the second one :) These were made before I discovered Super DOF. I'll try Super DOF and no HDR on future scenes. That should be tter right? I have two Super DOF scenes if you are interested...?
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2004532/porttoport.jpg[/img] Made such a big scenebuild, but then couldn't fit even half of it into frame. I need to put a camera down first more often.
Whoa! Thats awesome! What kind of creature is that?
I would push the girl more to the left, there's a good amount of wasted space there. Also, I'd try to add some gore to the guy, it's a little plain without. Lastly, her eyes don't really look like they're trying to look towards the scene at all, they're spacing out almost.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35910221]I would push the girl more to the left, there's a good amount of wasted space there. Also, I'd try to add some gore to the guy, it's a little plain without. Lastly, her eyes don't really look like they're trying to look towards the scene at all, they're spacing out almost.[/QUOTE] Mabye she's formulating a plan?
Just a quick dialogue box test, and a pic of me testing out the riot gear models. [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Dialogue_test.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/riottest.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/559815385587755476/413ABB5798AC06DA45A00A1D080379DBFF8E09B1/[/IMG] [IMG]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/558689667336135049/0D24DFF5A26F06D42BB13210B372A2F8C64D04DC/[/IMG]
The first one is a little too dark but I like the second one, that uav was a nice touch.
[QUOTE=VaciliNikoMav;35910163]Whoa! Thats awesome! What kind of creature is that?[/QUOTE] A thingy from Gears of War. It's in the locust pack on garrysmod.org [QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35910221]I would push the girl more to the left, there's a good amount of wasted space there. Also, I'd try to add some gore to the guy, it's a little plain without. Lastly, her eyes don't really look like they're trying to look towards the scene at all, they're spacing out almost.[/QUOTE] Thanks, that's a good idea, I don't know why I didn't bother to move the camera over a bit. What sucks is that there's more stuff on top of the cargo containers, and a whole scene not even visible beyond that. Ah well...
[QUOTE=fury_161;35915024]What sucks is that there's more stuff on top of the cargo containers, and a whole scene not even visible beyond that. Ah well...[/QUOTE] Make more screenshots with it then haha.
[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/132/d/f/let__s_go_on_an_adventure_by_jojjee-d4zhy9e.jpg[/img] Whoop
[QUOTE=Jojje;35918625][img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/132/d/f/let__s_go_on_an_adventure_by_jojjee-d4zhy9e.jpg[/img] Whoop[/QUOTE] Nick Heads Nick Heads Everywhere
Everyone is obsessed with Nick.
[IMG]http://www.deviantart.com/download/301491937/boned_by_ragepanddemoman-d4zi0o1.png[/IMG]
Some people have a fetish for Lightning, some people have a fetish for Nick ;) wink wink wiink XD :P lol < rofl 3
[IMG]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/559815662715384964/3E3687133382B0BCCAABC5DC07556EDCFEF25A17/[/IMG]
I think you could have picked a better camera angle for that, it's a bit awkward. And so are bottom-guy-whose-name-I-should-remember's arms, actually.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35920846]I think you could have picked a better camera angle for that, it's a bit awkward. And so are bottom-guy-whose-name-I-should-remember's arms, actually.[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://consolecreatures.files.wordpress.com/2010/01/resident-evil-5-jill-valentine-neck-break.jpg?w=740[/IMG] I tried to duplicate that. Kei's legs wont really co-operate....
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35920846]I think you could have picked a better camera angle for that, it's a bit awkward. And so are bottom-guy-whose-name-I-should-remember's arms, actually.[/QUOTE] His names Thane.
That does look more natural, I think Kai's torso needs to be lower and his thighs further forward, but I understand when models won't do what you want. Sucks. Also, the camera is a longer distance away and zoomed in further as well, try that next time, it always looks better. [editline]12th May 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=overwatch pvt;35920874]His names Thane.[/QUOTE] Ah, yes, now I remember. I need to play ME2 again apparently.
[QUOTE=Schmoes;35919171]Nick Heads Nick Heads Everywhere[/QUOTE] nicks face model is damn sexy though
[IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-10_00002.jpg[/IMG] I wanted to add more to the scenery but didnt know what to add that wouldnt make it look worse. [IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-11_00001.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Araknid;35919831]Everyone is obsessed with Nick.[/QUOTE] Nick is my waifu
[QUOTE=overwatch pvt;35921818][IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-10_00002.jpg[/IMG] I wanted to add more to the scenery but didnt know what to add that wouldnt make it look worse. [IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-11_00001.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] As I said, you need to back up, and zoom in with the camera tool.
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