"Want to post your picture but don't want to make a thread" - Thread V3: Turn off Multicore Renderin
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[QUOTE=Crazyone;35968692][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/NcNNz][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NcNNz.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/C3x7f][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/C3x7f.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/GlJxg][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/GlJxg.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/W1kVo][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/W1kVo.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/h1uZs][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/h1uZs.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG][IMG][URL=http://imgur.com/TKufD][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/TKufD.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/IMG]
any comments?[/QUOTE]
That soldier needs to get his rump on the point and help those two others!
Actually, I have a question. Why do you post the image tags twice?
Biscuit-Boy could you give me some criticism? I made this yesterday
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUt_KF9vI10&feature=player_embedded#![/media]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14263778/cp_granary0005.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Blitzkrieg Zero;35970172]Actually, I have a question. Why do you post the image tags twice?[/QUOTE]
Oh I just didnt dlete the .jpgs from the quote zone.
Haven't done anything for a long time so I figured I better practice before making thread. Testing out the new T-800 model.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/zs_obj_vertigo_v00010.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=tehMuffinMan;35970740]Biscuit-Boy could you give me some criticism? I made this yesterday
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUt_KF9vI10&feature=player_embedded#![/media]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14263778/cp_granary0005.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
*gasp* someone...requested...criticism??? :D dreams do come true!!
Anyways, first of all, this is a pretty funny pose, I don't know if that's custom content or not but the engineer looks hilarious like that. Posing is just about perfect on the sniper and good on the engineer as well. I just don't know if I like their arms, I feel like they should be higher, and if you still want to keep them low maybe just make their wrists a bit limp. Camera angle is okay, nothing special. Lighting is a bit dark unless that's what you wanted, but I personally think something needs to be bright in every pose, even if it's just a bit.
[editline]16th May 2012[/editline]
[QUOTE=lolz3;35971612]Haven't done anything for a long time so I figured I better practice before making thread. Testing out the new T-800 model.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/zs_obj_vertigo_v00010.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
Get some light on the guy getting choked, he's blending in a bit much towards his head. Camera angle is meh, posing looks okay but bring the soldier's waist in, his but shouldn't really be pointing out like that unless one of his knees is further up.
[editline]16th May 2012[/editline]
[QUOTE=overwatch pvt;35973132][IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/Liarabiotic.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-15_00001.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
First one, lighting doesn't really reflect the effect, and lighting overall is bland. Camera angle is flat (eh) but posing is okay. Second one, the effect doesn't quite work for me. Overall it's just awkward. Lower the gun and make sure the joint between thumb and index finger is connecting at the very top of the pistol grip. Lean him forward a tad as well. Neat background but as a whole it doesn't really come together.
[t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/68548848/2012-05-16_00001.png[/t]
Lighting test and shit
That's one sexy beard.
More practice.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/apartment00028.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=overwatch pvt;35973132]
[IMG]http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o559/cobminestrider17/2012-05-15_00001.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
His p@%&s is glowing. Not a good sign...
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/44650710/hehehheh.jpg[/IMG]
[t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/44650710/hehehheh1.jpg[/t]
this was so half assed you couldn't believe it
more lazy stufffff
[img]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/137/7/6/rooftop_standoff_by_superninjanub-d503wug.jpg[/img]
[t]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/137/7/6/rooftop_standoff_by_superninjanub-d503wug.jpg[/t]
snipe, to hell with it!
C&C. I want to know what I did wrong and what I did right so I can improve.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Mist_People.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Red_eye.jpg[/IMG]
First one, turn either her head to the left more or her whole body, but as is it doesn't look like she's really looking at them. I hate those models and one of them seems to be missing an eye (even if that's really how it looks, you can fake things like that and pretend the hood doesn't cover it) but it's a very cool vibe you have going and a pretty sweet scene. Scenebuild could use some nocollide world, I see several floating debris pieces.
Second one is nice as well but the random glowing eye looks retarded. Pro tip- place a light and then use the color tool with alpha/transparency set to 0 (aka invisible) and the same color as the light, and it will make the flare invisible but still cast light the same way (unless the color tool was on a different color) so you can not have issues like that. I think that's somewhat poor map choice as the geometry is extraordinarily square and the textures on the wall are poor quality. Posing looks good (first one is a bit iffy but also nice) though and overall I'd say these are both nice competent pieces.
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;35987168]First one, turn either her head to the left more or her whole body, but as is it doesn't look like she's really looking at them. I hate those models and one of them seems to be missing an eye (even if that's really how it looks, you can fake things like that and pretend the hood doesn't cover it) but it's a very cool vibe you have going and a pretty sweet scene. Scenebuild could use some nocollide world, I see several floating debris pieces.
Second one is nice as well but the random glowing eye looks retarded. Pro tip- place a light and then use the color tool with alpha/transparency set to 0 (aka invisible) and the same color as the light, and it will make the flare invisible but still cast light the same way (unless the color tool was on a different color) so you can not have issues like that. I think that's somewhat poor map choice as the geometry is extraordinarily square and the textures on the wall are poor quality. Posing looks good (first one is a bit iffy but also nice) though and overall I'd say these are both nice competent pieces.[/QUOTE]
Thank you for the C&C. I'll be sure to take these into account next time.
You've warped your background so earth is no longer circular, as well it's incredibly low res. I don't know if that's part of the map but you'd be better off superimposing a nice hi-res nasa photo or something. As well this needs at least a little antialiasing, your graphics are very low. The sun doesn't look convincing either, make sure you look for some reference photos of this kind of stuff.
first scene after a long time.
meh
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/jJIMk.png[/IMG]
Haven't played Gmod since last year. [b]Nirrti/Ilwrath[/b] gave me some new models to mess with while I fumble around. Prolly gonna work on a new comic soon... maybe.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/n3K2w.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/BZONN.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/8UjWB.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=kaukassus;35989648]first scene after a long time.
meh
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/jJIMk.png[/IMG][/QUOTE]
Pretty nice. It's not the most spectacular looking, posing is only an 8/10 (his leg is too far back, it looks like he should be moving but he's standing), and the DOF towards the right gets a little gross, but overall it works well, I like it.
I hope you enjoy this please constructive criticism also yes I do know the lens flare is off...Quite off. I am a beginner
[IMG]http://i1113.photobucket.com/albums/k505/AngelisDodsley/Halflief.jpg[/IMG]
[img]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/595844629168703410/8899ACDDCA25097CE2676B76BD863F831B6D86E0/[/img]
two clones off-duty
i'm new at this whole posing thing
also no i'm not going to edit my pictures because i barely have enough patience to actually pose the damn ragdolls
also because i don't know how to edit pictures
[QUOTE=roman117;35992820][img]http://cloud.steampowered.com/ugc/595844629168703410/8899ACDDCA25097CE2676B76BD863F831B6D86E0/[/img][/QUOTE]
turn your graphics up to the highest they can go before taking a picture, these textures are terribad
[QUOTE=roman117;35992820]also no i'm not going to edit my pictures because i barely have enough patience to actually pose the damn ragdolls[/QUOTE]
if you barely have the patience to pose I don't think you're going to get very far doing this
plus even if you did edit this the posing would still be really off, the textures would still be super bad, the camera angle would still be dull, and the antialiasing would still be nonexistent
[QUOTE=Cone;35992891]turn your graphics up to the highest they can go before taking a picture, these textures are terribad
if you barely have the patience to pose I don't think you're going to get very far doing this
plus even if you did edit this the posing would still be really off, the textures would still be super bad, the camera angle would still be dull, and the antialiasing would still be nonexistent[/QUOTE]
too bad my game crashes whenever i raise the graphics anywhere above the lowest they can possibly be
also i'm sorry my posing skills aren't as good as yours
i should kill myself since it doesn't look like a photograph
[QUOTE=roman117;35993782]too bad my game crashes whenever i raise the graphics anywhere above the lowest they can possibly be
also i'm sorry my posing skills aren't as good as yours
i should kill myself since it doesn't look like a photograph[/QUOTE]
You should calm down.
Oh that made my day.
[QUOTE=roman117;35993782]too bad my game crashes whenever i raise the graphics anywhere above the lowest they can possibly be
also i'm sorry my posing skills aren't as good as yours
i should kill myself since it doesn't look like a photograph[/QUOTE]
If you don't care about making good pictures then no shit your pictures aren't going to be good.
[QUOTE=simkas;35994015]If you don't care about making good pictures then no shit your pictures aren't going to be good.[/QUOTE]
i'm not really expecting them to be good since i know how shitty my posing skills are (and how shitty my computer is)
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