• Official Edit My Screenshot Thread V6
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[QUOTE=shadowndacorner;38566931]You beat me to it :/ Here's mine anyway [URL="https://dl.dropbox.com/s/gz7sl6symdwqqbx/tankshot.png"][IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/s/bnnsz4b6tm89st4/tankshot_preview.png[/IMG][/URL] Some criticism on yours, the fire is far too red and kind of harsh (especially for a plane crash - jet fuel burns bright) and the muzzle flash is way too big for that gun. I do love what you did to the street and how you gave a slight blur to the shadows - makes it seem like the game's a lot higher resolution than it actually is lol[/QUOTE] Thanks for the advice on the jet fuel, I honestly didn't know - I just tried to emulate his original flames. As for the muzzle flash, that [URL="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3156/2609382056_15c9d94ebe.jpg"]is[/URL] an [URL="http://i1096.photobucket.com/albums/g338/ktapper21/Dragon.jpg"]accurate[/URL] size. One of the first effects I learned how to do was a muzzle flash, but I could never get it to work right - turns out that one of the largest mistakes made is actually making them too small. As for yours, I love the cinematic feel of it, you managed to get the "lens flares everywhere look" done right. My only critque is A: Things seem a little [I]too[/I] blurred with the car, it makes the scene difficult to take in, and B: Your muzzle flash seems a bit small IMO, especially with the amount of flare it's giving off. [editline]23rd November 2012[/editline] [URL="https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/WarV2.jpg"][IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/PreviewV2.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Welp, when presented with criticism I try to improve, because some day I would like to get paid for this kind of stuff :v: How's this? (keep in mind that I want to maintain the style of the original) Also, a better [url=https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop%20Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/Compare.gif]comparison[/url].
[QUOTE='[LOA] SonofBrim;38568073']Thanks for the advice on the jet fuel, I honestly didn't know - I just tried to emulate his original flames. As for the muzzle flash, that [URL="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3156/2609382056_15c9d94ebe.jpg"]is[/URL] an [URL="http://i1096.photobucket.com/albums/g338/ktapper21/Dragon.jpg"]accurate[/URL] size. One of the first effects I learned how to do was a muzzle flash, but I could never get it to work right - turns out that one of the largest mistakes made is actually making them too small. As for yours, I love the cinematic feel of it, you managed to get the "lens flares everywhere look" done right. My only critque is A: Things seem a little [I]too[/I] blurred with the car, it makes the scene difficult to take in, and B: Your muzzle flash seems a bit small IMO, especially with the amount of flare it's giving off. [editline]23rd November 2012[/editline] [URL="https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/WarV2.jpg"][IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/PreviewV2.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Welp, when presented with criticism I try to improve, because some day I would like to get paid for this kind of stuff :v: How's this? (keep in mind that I want to maintain the style of the original) Also, a better [url=https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop%20Contests/ScreenshotEdits/War/Compare.gif]comparison[/url].[/QUOTE] Fire definitely looks a lot better - only other suggestion I have is to play with different blending modes and try to simulate the light it projects onto the environment. And as for the muzzle flash, I still think it's too big. If you're going for accuracy, it might not be *way* too big (didn't realize muzzle flashes were that big lol), but if you look at the first reference photo you gave, it's 4-6 of that gun high (depending how you measure) on each side - yours is ~8. All in all though, it looks pretty good :D As for the blurriness in mine, I don't actually do pictures much, mostly video editing, so my mind's trying to account for the motion blur that should be there. At one point I had the background totally blurred so it looked like the camera was tracking with the car :P
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/gm_construct00469.jpg[/IMG]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/IyGlH.jpg[/img] Make it sexy please.
Do everything you want ( [B]only one condition, be serious[/B] ) [IMG]http://sournoishack.com/uploads/1003825905dod_old_koln_b50001.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Hauptmann;38577544]Do everything you want ( [B]only one condition, be serious[/B] ) [IMG]http://sournoishack.com/uploads/1003825905dod_old_koln_b50001.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] What episode from Second War ? You should use a more dark light .
[QUOTE=mdmrzk;38577630]What episode from Second War ? [/QUOTE] Stalingrad or Berlin.
I made two World in Conflict themed poses, if any of you guys want to take a crack at jazzing it up a little. [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit.jpg[/t] [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit2.jpg[/t]
And here is mine [IMG]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2012/47/1353800284-gm-abandoned-metro0005.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=pvt.jenkins;38578097]I made two World in Conflict themed poses, if any of you guys want to take a crack at jazzing it up a little. [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit.jpg[/t] [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit2.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] [T]http://filesmelt.com/dl/edit22.png[/T]
[QUOTE=pvt.jenkins;38578097]I made two World in Conflict themed poses, if any of you guys want to take a crack at jazzing it up a little. [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit.jpg[/t] [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit2.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] [img]http://puu.sh/1u2aq[/img]
Both of you that's just amazing work!
[img]http://i.imgur.com/2fIGt.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=pvt.jenkins;38578097]I made two World in Conflict themed poses, if any of you guys want to take a crack at jazzing it up a little. [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit.jpg[/t] [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit2.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] [IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/s/liuygjyoih8ro7p/edit2.png[/IMG] well howdy pardner
[QUOTE=pvt.jenkins;38578097]I made two World in Conflict themed poses, if any of you guys want to take a crack at jazzing it up a little. [t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/50169265/edit.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] Surprised nobody's done the first one yet. [url=https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop%20Contests/ScreenshotEdits/Cover/Cover.jpg][img]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop%20Contests/ScreenshotEdits/Cover/Preview.jpg[/img][/url] This was a major practice for me in terms of subtle effects, such as cleaning up the models and making the textures/lighting more appealing. This was probably my longest edit ever, at about 2 hours. You can see a before/after gif [url=https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17239680/Facepunch/Photoshop%20Contests/ScreenshotEdits/Cover/Compare.gif]here[/url] to see the changes more clearly.
[t]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/49206317/cp_granary0003.jpg[/t] Thanks!
[T]http://filesmelt.com/dl/gm_apartments0001.jpg[/T] Man, it's been forever since I've ever done anything in Gmod, let alone pose. I can say the new workshop thing makes getting models easier.
First time I've ever actually posted a picture on here, but I figure I might throw it out here. Who knows, an editor may turn my picture into a thing of beauty... [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/bT9zm.jpg[/IMG]
Here's two (three counting the background of the second one) large Nintendo Gmod screenshots (Linked for being poster 4x) [URL="http://vgdcmario.deviantart.com/art/Unedited-WIP-We-re-coming-for-you-Bowser-340157459?ga_submit_new=10%253A1354112180&ga_type=edit&ga_recent=1"]Super Mario Bros[/URL] [URL="http://vgdcmario.deviantart.com/#/d5mirtr"]Wind Waker[/URL] (Namely the Statues being destroyed, hence why there's four of them and a background) [URL="http://vgdcmario.deviantart.com/art/Unedited-WIP-Shadow-Valoo-Background-340158527?ga_submit_new=10%3A1354111679"]Background for Wind Waker (Link to image page due to it not loading in the larger download[/URL] Large poster for more hi-res editing.
[T]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Boat1.png[/T] Got another one for ya if anyone's interested.
[t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11652921/augastdowntownoriginal.jpg[/t] If anyone wanna give this a try, go right ahead.
SourceFilmmaker, your kind would be wise to tread lightly in this area.
He used to make lots of Garrysmod screenshots but discovered the benefits of glorious Source Filmmaker So his 'kind' is welcome here any day of the year.
Alright well I was just messing around, him and his fucking volume lights, we need them in GMod.
Together they will be unstoppable
step off yo, fussy has been posting here for years and will continue to post here
Alright I get it, I was messing around, chill man.
ghost worst poster 2006-∞
[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/71236376/My_GMod_Poses/Size_Matters.jpg[/IMG] Cool weapon effect (Only the dude in the back.), some smoke from the downed helicopter and maybe a few scorch marks on some of the buildings would be neat. [editline]2nd December 2012[/editline] Shit i forgot the non-SDOF version, i'll post it later.
[QUOTE=gtanoofa;38667132][img]http://i.cubeupload.com/bsaKZx.jpg[/img] SDoF version: [t]http://i.cubeupload.com/CE1FEF.jpg[/t] [editline]1st December 2012[/editline] I would like some snow.[/QUOTE] [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/snow7.jpg[/img]
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