Link does not like the traders [GMOD]

[Payphone]

[QUOTE=Ichimrau13;40306455](Only if you have already made ​​a video of gmod)[/QUOTE]
Anybody can critique your stuff, they don't have to have experience. A person can know perfectly well what makes a good GMOD video, without actually having finished one.

As for me, I think you should keep the use of text to a minimum.
Heavy getting cash from the box would be better illustrated by having the cash pop out from above.

There should be a much greater variation in faces. For the majority of the video, he seemed to have almost the very same facial expression.

[Ichimrau13]

[QUOTE=PeejsterM;40355086]Anybody can critique your stuff, they don't have to have experience. A person can know perfectly well what makes a good GMOD video, without actually having finished one.

As for me, I think you should keep the use of text to a minimum.
Heavy getting cash from the box would be better illustrated by having the cash pop out from above.

There should be a much greater variation in faces. For the majority of the video, he seemed to have almost the very same facial expression.[/QUOTE]
Thanks man, you were the most friendly
Yes of course, all that has no experience may find bad or good.
But if the guy does not know how the style of the video, this will find strange, does not agree?
ex
Show a video of gmod for her grandmother.
She will not understand

[Payphone]

[QUOTE=Ichimrau13;40355122]Thanks man, you were the most friendly
Yes of course, all that has no experience may find bad or good.
But if the guy does not know how the style of the video, this will find strange, does not agree?
ex
Show a video of gmod for her grandmother.
She will not understand[/QUOTE]

That comparison doesn't work. The reason your grandmother wouldn't understand is because she's never watched a GMOD video, not because she's never made one.

[Ichimrau13]

[QUOTE=Lolkork;40355112]You only need to know what makes a good video to be able to critique a video.[/QUOTE]
I understand that
But nobody does constructive criticism
It's so easy just say shit

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

This was my second video of gmod
For comments on this topic, this guys do not seem "adult"

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

[TheDaveSecond]

[QUOTE=Ichimrau13;40355141]I understand that
But nobody does constructive criticism
It's so easy just say shit

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

This was my second video of gmod
For comments on this topic, this guys do not seem "adult"[/QUOTE]

I'm sorry, are you just blind or mentally ill? Joazz gave you some criticism and you said ''HEHEHEH THANKS, BUT I'LL IGNORE WHAT YOU SAID!''

Do you even know where you are? Do you even realize that? I mean, they've given you what you asked for and then you went ape shit, about how they've never made a Gmod video before and how they don't know shit about what you do.

Now, buddy, are you a troll?

[Ichimrau13]

Arguing about it is not going nowhere
I'll stop, I need to live.
If anyone was offended I'm sorry :(

[Ichimrau13]

I am not obliged to accept all

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

[QUOTE=Lolkork;40355192]Okay.

The posing and faceposing is awful, if you want your videos to look good you need to put some more time in to them. Posing is not easy and takes [U]a lot[/U] of time. And just seeing the heavy spazzing around with thruster isn't funny, at all. That [I]joke [/I]is older than gmod.
Take away all the travel sequences (for example 0:25-0:27) and pointless camera panning. It just drags out the video.[/QUOTE]
Ok, thanks

[Ichimrau13]

[QUOTE=Lolkork;40355206]Always consider other peoples opinions when making videos, no constructive criticism is bad.[/QUOTE]
Ok dude, my thanks.

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

I want to apologize again if anyone was offended.

[editline]20th April 2013[/editline]

I just thought it a good time spent on this video, would be worth

[Skeleto]

[B]And here we go![/B] Facepunch sucks!! HAHA

[U]New member:[/U]
"Ohh, finally I finished my first Garry's Mod video and I want to show it to everyone!
Maybe it's a good idea to post it in the Official Garry's Mod forums!"

~ Le post

[U]FP member:[/U]
"IT SUCKS!!"
"WTF!!!"
"It's GARBAGE!"
"Go away disgusting N00B!!"
"American Cristisciesm ohh cristicisme!"

[B]Good exemple of a pile of s***:[/B]
[IMG]http://facepunch.com/image.php?u=154521&dateline=1366146171[/IMG]
I can tell to it "Who the fuck I think I am", madams: I am a guy with the power of ignore someone, haha! Go suck something, bastard.

And here again are some "illustrations" I posted here maybe 2 years ago of how I think most of FP bitches should look like:

[IMG]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_lO2n4KaMqSk/THAFdlErXVI/AAAAAAAABWg/1DfWAuEOZzc/s1600/retardado2[1].jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://paisagenscontemporaneas.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/according-to-the-us-centers-for-disease-control-at-least-one-in-three-americans-are-obese.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/RWjxdwD.jpg?1[/IMG]

And, Joazzz:
[IMG]http://www.troll.me/images2/grammar-correction-guy/pare-de-escrever-isso-voce-parece-um-retardado.jpg[/IMG]

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[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

lmao

this is comedy gold

[Joazzz]

where's the greasy hair, eyeglasses, transsexuality, crossdressing, gasmasks and fedoras in those pics lol

[Death_God]

[QUOTE=Lolkork;40355192]That [I]joke [/I]is older than gmod.[/QUOTE]

tf2 came out in 2007 and gmod in 2004

i dont understand????

[LunaBadger]

because hyperbole means nothing

[Ibexaz]

yo this is my first time in the screenshots section since like 2009 and this is pretty bad dude

like, pcpwn levels of fucked up

you gotta start taking criticism bro