[QUOTE=Rastifan;40934748]So what is better you think. Tits and ass or a brain splattered all over the screen to the applause of the violence monkeys?[/QUOTE]
/me facepalms. Maybe, I don't know. A decent story?
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935165]Ahh I should not have posted this comic here. It is impressive how you all manage to completely misunderstand it. No offence intended Cone, but you don't get it.[/QUOTE]
the thing is, there's no space to understand anything. You might have a whole elaborate story on how the two connect to each other, how they can connect only to other women and no man and how it's a brutal winter wonderland. But it's not in the comic. It exists merely in your mind and you made zero effort to actually showcase it more or less. As it stands the plot and emotional impact of your story surmounts to.
Summer dressed chick in modern clothing in fantasy winter wonderland meets chick in armour and they fuck.
A comic doesn't require a single instance of blood, guns, gore or even violence to be good. It needs a good plot, good characters and be fun to read.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935371]Yes boom, instant sex... FP is paranormal. Giving me credit for poses I haven't done yet^^[/QUOTE]
you don't have to be Sigmund Freud to know what comes after the last frame
rastifan vs facepunch
wind your neck in buddy
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935213]Two people connecting in a hard brutal world. Seriously Joazzz, stop asking stupid questions.[/QUOTE]
If you believe your story is SOOOO much better than just a porno plot. Then why half of your posing comics end up like this?
[video=youtube;sOjAZC2TjNU]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sOjAZC2TjNU[/video]
Most of your elf poses generally are like this.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935213]Two people connecting in a hard brutal world. Seriously Joazzz, stop asking stupid questions.[/QUOTE]
You know you need to make a Holocaust comic now, right?
[I]"Maus In Da Hause XXX"[/I]
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935213]Two people connecting in a hard brutal world. Seriously Joazzz, stop asking stupid questions.[/QUOTE]
I did something like this.
It didn't require tits, as a matter of fact you couldn't even tell their genders they were so well clothed, I didn't make a layout, hell there wasn't even any text, and the story came off better than what you made. Stop trying to slap reasoning or a story onto your bland fap material. Make the story first and then construct the content around it. It doesn't need guns or tits to be good, stop thinking in extremes.
[QUOTE=Everest;40936841]Make the story first[/QUOTE]
but it would be against everything Rastifan fights for to not make the porn first
Dude they aren't trying to argue with you rastifan, they're just giving you actually quite legitimate critique on visual storytelling... I mean why can't you just be like "Yeah ok thanks for the C & C guys I'll put it to use next time." unless you meant it to be pornish.
[QUOTE=Demoness;40934859]
Replace the fact that women apparently have to dress like sluts because the world is so rough to them with let's saaay... the fact that elves aren't well-liked among humans. The main character could instead be an elven woman in armor hiding her face under a hood, walking past the guards while they're distracted with the rider on the lion. Now she's in the inn, the lesbian thing works I guess but again it adds to the whole smut thing, a different but similar theme could be that she's hoping to find more of her kind as company, which could be the other woman. The last scene is them sitting at the table, laughing and sharing stories while drinking their booze and having a meal, instead of them halfnaked on a bed about to go baboink with eachother, and you have your 'warm scene'.
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See this, is what you should've done.
rastifan pls don't turn into the next ryu-gi.
;-;
[QUOTE=F T;40938195]rastifan pls don't turn into the next ryu-gi.
;-;[/QUOTE]
more like the next mariokart64n
3'rd page...
[video=youtube;tfslY_AvhLw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tfslY_AvhLw[/video]
I am fine with you not liking the comic. But you still don't get it.
Seriously though! No post survives this long. You are keeping this thread alive for the wrong reasons. Let it die.
(Staring at screen with wet eyes, lip quivering, then runs out of FP crying).
See what you did there... I hope you are proud.
[QUOTE=F T;40938195]rastifan pls don't turn into the next ryu-gi.
;-;[/QUOTE]Rastifan is the OG, Ryu-Gi was but a bad and overdone copy
If giving advice and criticism is keeping a thread alive for the "wrong reasons" to you, then you must be a 13 year old with some serious angst.
keep this up guys
i'm getting popcorn
buckley does it again!!!
[QUOTE='Ninja Nub[NOR];40939517']keep this up guys
i'm getting popcorn[/QUOTE]
Mind sharing some of that? This is getting interesting.
rastifan, i doubt anyone here even dislikes you. just your content (and maybe your attitude). it's creepy and obsessive. that's cool for like a themed forum i guess like the one you run but you can't blame anyone here for wanting actual content. i personally think you have potential and would love to see work of yours that isn't so skeevy. heck, if you wanna be a little 'sexy' from time to time, have at it, but at least use a modicum of creativity, you know? it's not asking a lot.
This thread gets worse with each post.
I really don't know who's worse, Rastifan for not taking anyone serious and making kind crap points or everyone else for taking him on and continuously posting in a thread that has lost it's point completely.
[QUOTE=Everest;40939455]If giving advice and criticism is keeping a thread alive for the "wrong reasons" to you, then you must be a 13 year old with some serious angst.[/QUOTE]
Criticism?
[QUOTE=Everest;40840037]why not just go to paheal, where you're wanted[/QUOTE]
Forgetting your own post kid?
[QUOTE=GHOST!!!!;40940921]This thread gets worse with each post.
I really don't know who's worse, Rastifan for not taking anyone serious and making kind crap points or everyone else for taking him on and continuously posting in a thread that has lost it's point completely.[/QUOTE]
Perhaps the worst are actually the people who just jump in to contribute something unsurprisingly less helpful to the thread at large than the entire debate has been.
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[QUOTE=Rastifan;40942064]Criticism?
Forgetting your own post kid?[/QUOTE]
We were discussing places that bad nsfw video game content belong, no? One post =/= someone's entire point, it doesn't help that you're literally blowing off pretty much all the constructive advice in this thread and just badly coming back at responses that made your ass hurt.
let's be honest, you ARE wanted at paheal. It's a bunch of 12 year olds waiting for the next big tits lesbian pose to bust a nut over. Easily impressed. Here at Facepunch we're looking for depth.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40935165]Ahh I should not have posted this comic here. It is impressive how you all manage to completely misunderstand it. No offence intended Cone, but you don't get it.[/QUOTE]
Girl walks into bar.
Lesbians.
What else is there to understand?
[QUOTE=AaronM202;40943616]Girl walks into bar.
Lesbians.
What else is there to understand?[/QUOTE]
The references to blanketed communist oppression of women's sexual freedom in 1942 Belarus, you doofus.
And the composition which is another reference to 1960's American art-house cinema with the angles of each shot.
[editline]7th June 2013[/editline]
and the snow is white, symbolizing the racist, socio-economic polices of Soviet Poland during a period where the Jews were hunted by the Cubans, it's a little even you might of heard of, [B] THE FRENCH REVOLUTION?[/B]
[QUOTE=Doc' Roe;40943228]Perhaps the worst are actually the people who just jump in to contribute something unsurprisingly less helpful to the thread at large than the entire debate has been.
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Ha, what a debate this is then.
[QUOTE=GHOST!!!!;40944514]Ha, what a debate this is then.[/QUOTE]
Nearly everyone with more than a five word response has been making valid points so far except for you and Rastifan; in your case, you're doing little more than pointing out something that's completely useless. In his case, he's frequently changing up his story to accomodate whatever someone is accusing him of next, always returning to the 'If there's no tits then it HAS to be guns and guts!' argument, because, in reality, he has never given the entire topic any more thought than 'I liek boobies'. Essentially, he was originally making acceptable points, but once he started trying to turn the tables it really just became an unending flow of bullshit.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;40942064]Criticism?
Forgetting your own post kid?[/QUOTE]
You're just throwing quotes back at people instead of taking critique in stride. In case you've forgotten, criticism is when a viewer responds to what they've seen or read with their opinions on what could have been done to make it better, more than enough of which has been provided for anyone to make something absolutely fantastic. If you're so hell-bent on defending something that has very clearly had little to no attention paid to its storyline, character motivations, and general quality (and this still is completely avoiding your visual work), then I strongly suggest ceasing to take part in the conversation.
If all you're looking for is for people to say, "OMG that's fantastic!" and throw other words of praise at you rather than take a moment to hear out critique, perhaps you should appeal to the hordes of horny fanboys on the doorstep of Digital Ero, or your deviantART page. It's becoming increasingly obvious that that's what you're really looking for, just reading through your posts.
[QUOTE=Squiddy;40944928]Nearly everyone with more than a five word response has been making valid points so far except for you and Rastifan; in your case, you're doing little more than pointing out something that's completely useless. In his case, he's frequently changing up his story to accomodate whatever someone is accusing him of next, always returning to the 'If there's no tits then it HAS to be guns and guts!' argument, because, in reality, he has never given the entire topic any more thought than 'I liek boobies'. Essentially, he was originally making acceptable points, but once he started trying to turn the tables it really just became an unending flow of bullshit. [/QUOTE]
Right because you seriously think Rastifan gives a shit at this point about what anyone has to say? You're thinking I'm an idiot for saying what I've said and yet you're all still taking him on when he clearly doesn't give a shit about what anyone has to say.
I'm not the one posting useless shit, I'm saying you're all posting useless shit because you're telling him stuff he doesn't fucking care about, but fine, keep shitting up this thread with moronic posts, it's great to see how long you drag it on for, repeating the same drivel over and over again.
[QUOTE=GHOST!!!!;40945361]Right because you seriously think Rastifan gives a shit at this point about what anyone has to say? You're thinking I'm an idiot for saying what I've said and yet you're all still taking him on when he clearly doesn't give a shit about what anyone has to say.[/QUOTE]
So? We're giving C&C, and if you don't wanna give him C&C, then fine. But don't pretend that we're just doing this to get a reaction out of him.
[QUOTE=GHOST!!!!;40945361]I'm not the one posting useless shit, I'm saying you're all posting useless shit because you're telling him stuff he doesn't fucking care about, but fine, keep shitting up this thread with moronic posts, it's great to see how long you drag it on for, repeating the same drivel over and over again.[/QUOTE]
What's making you defend him? Is it the tits? I bet it's the tits.
[QUOTE=F T;40945421]So? We're giving C&C, and if you don't wanna give him C&C, then fine. But don't pretend that we're just doing this to get a reaction out of him.[/QUOTE]
You're giving C&C to someone that doesn't give a shit for it, that's what I'm getting it.
ghost you realize you're making an even more pointless debate than us right
if you feel the argument is a waste of time then feel free to fuck right off
[QUOTE=GHOST!!!!;40945437]You're giving C&C to someone that doesn't give a shit for it, that's what I'm getting it.[/QUOTE]
I can say the exact same thing about you right now.
So what if Rasti doesn't care, but what makes you think the rest of us care about what [I]you [/I]are saying?
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